Guarding the Border: I Am Sanctified in My Body

I've read about 20 chapters and I can't stand it anymore. I feel uncomfortable.

As a novel that starts in a time-traveling military camp, first of all, the author takes it too much for granted. If it is the founding of a dynasty, then most of them must be trained by fighting. If it is the end of the dynasty, those who train every ten days will be elites. If it is the prosperous age of the dynasty, it is normal to train every three to five days. You have written like Liberation The military trains every day, but the standard of living is poor. Young men who have no fuel or meat start with a bowl of rice every meal. Before the 1980s, it was not uncommon for heavy manual workers to eat one or two kilograms of rice at a meal. As the saying goes, if you practice martial arts for one day, you will be full after two bowls of rice and vegetables? ? Secondly, the army only has troop training? Or is it the end of the dynasty, no rotation, no routine? Can you train when you get up? No vacation for a month, robot?

I haven't read it yet. Is it still possible to have enough food after the dynasty is in decline? Wasn't that dynasty overthrown in the last years because too many people couldn't afford to eat?

I have written a few chapters about a young master's birthday. Is there still a few more chapters to celebrate his birthday? This is not good. I need to pay attention to the basics. I can't stand it anymore when I write it like this.

Join the Dragon Shadow Guard as soon as you see something. Just vomited. . . In troubled times. The protagonist has such a powerful golden finger. The longer you stay, the stronger you become. All fools know that reducing the sense of presence is the best benefit. His honey is the protagonist's arsenic. The protagonist is good. Be able to be meticulous and join a special organization. All fools know that special organizations have good resources, but the risks are also extremely high! . . Author. . . Your plot. Completely deviated from core interests. Pick up sesame seeds and throw away watermelons. . . . Farewell

Can this be the 43rd best-selling new book? , This editor-in-chief has never eaten pork.

I wanted to be a soldier on the frontier, and it was considered to be the late dynasty. But I was stunned that I had never fought a war. It was so speechless. Even modern novels know that when you are a soldier, you have to find a way for the protagonist to fight a few enemies. But the frontier of a dynasty is so stable, safer than schools in the city center.

I don't understand. No matter how strong your gang is, can it compete with the state machine? No matter how big a person is behind your gang, if the emperor wants to do something with just one sentence from you, the Long Shadow Guards will also be royal troops in the future. Don't they have a temper when others come to mess with their own people? Many novels describe the power of the state as incompetent. That is because it opens up too much and can be twisted into a rope to deal with a force, its absolute leader.

Is there enough food to take care of? Hahaha, I just rolled with laughter. Will there be rebellion in the last years of the dynasty? What kind of golden family, what kind of Huang Taiji will kneel down and sing conquest Real coin author, have you never seen the word "cannibalism" in the history books?

A big-headed soldier, he takes himself too seriously.

I thought it was a military novel about long spear robes, but it turned out to be a campus novel about learning martial arts. It's a pity that such a good subject matter, the desert border, garrison fighting, can completely support the big scenes of battlefield, criminal investigation, professional battle, etc., But it turned out to be a campus novel... Fortunately, it has just started, let the author write for a while

Seeing the Dragon Shadow Guard in Chapter 3, tsk tsk, Xiao Bai Wen's momentum came.

Very verbose and meticulous about hydrology every day.

Too much nonsense, no wonder the grades are not good

I forced myself to read more than a dozen chapters. Although it was free, it was really awkward to read. There was no common sense at all. The writing was immature. The ancient dynasty military camp was like a modern military camp, and the communication between people was like primary school students chatting together. The protagonist has been in the army for four years, and he is with the new recruits. When he went out on patrol, he actually relied on recruits to help him spread the basic power structure, and the gangs in the promiscuous society were actually hierarchical. The most important thing is that the strength of the gangsters is stronger than that of the soldiers. Soldiers should be careful of the gangsters and don't offend the gangs. MD, have you ever seen soldiers from the army patrol together and be afraid of the gangsters? Data allocation points are often eaten 😅

In ancient times, the food of soldiers was not enough.

Although I have subscribed to them all, I really can't stand the visuals of low-cost games?

Whether a novel is good or not depends on the reviews. If there are few reviews, it's really not good.

The few female characters are the biggest letdown. The daughter of a single parent and an ordinary hawker, she grew up under the threat of gangsters in her family. She is a silly, sweet and independent woman. Haha, big noble families may not be able to raise such a child.

The border troops are afraid of gangs, and the four-year veterans have no common sense 🙂

It was okay in the front, but she turned into a bitch in the back.

How did this thing get to more than 200 chapters without a eunuch? 😭

It's too ugly. It's like a high school student writing an essay. It's not that fun.

Just look at the table of contents for this book.

It's too watery, it's like a child playing house

This book feels like it was written by AI

I haven't watched it yet. Is it the Virgin Bitch?

In charge of food? My "dumb" officers and soldiers have something to say

It's really ugly. It's a lot of messy writing.

There are a lot of cultivation techniques, and they look messy and messy.