Douluo: My Martial Spirit Charizard

I know a lot of people hate Xiao Wu, but it's really speechless to criticize things like soul beasts giving birth to cubs. Isn't this kind of thing just a setting? There is also the nature of dragon nature. I remember what the setting was before the Bone King also had Albedo? As long as you like this kind of thing, if you don't like it, just crawl on it

As long as you don't deliberately create some clown plots, it's normal. Many Douluo characters portray the male characters in the original works as brainless villains. The female characters are not much better. They fall in love with the male protagonist at every turn. I hope the author can be more leisurely. There are already too many Douluo fans. If you don't grasp the degree, it will be easy to sink.

As soon as I saw the title of the book, Wuhun is a fire-breathing dragon, I became interested, but when I saw that the heroine was a rabbit, I instantly vomited, it was so disgusting. It's a pity that it's an interesting book

Xiao Wu has a bad mouth and likes to get into trouble. He wants to take revenge but doesn't practice well.

There are a lot of language errors. Many times I can't write a complete sentence at all. When I went to the Soul Master Competition, I copied the original text without making any changes. There are really many mistakes in language and logic. For example, in a team of 7 people, 4 people were defeated and 4 people were left on the field.

To be honest, I haven't read the book yet. How to say it? I'm tired of seeing Tang San and the master. Let's be honest. If conditions permit, who wouldn't want to create their own divine realm?

Since it is a fire-breathing dragon, the heroine should be Liu Erlong. The aunt is the secret to the fire. What the hell is Xiao Wu?

I am also disgusted with rabbits. I am afraid that the unruly character of the world will cause trouble everywhere. It is really not like a dead horse.

After reading a few chapters, the only remaining ideas are pretty good. The essence is all in the introduction. The content is, well, okay. . . All I can say is that my expectations were too high.

Let's change the heroine. Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing are no better than Xiao Wu.

First of all, let me tell you that the subject matter is very good I haven't read the book yet and I don't know the quality of the work I just read the introduction and my imagination was opened immediately, so I sent a post to talk about my inspiration The same initial world is Douluo Continent There is a system, but it is of little use, so I give a novice gift package and occasionally send tasks to give point rewards, mainly to give the protagonist how to use the fairy grass Then the time is set in the Bibi Dong timeline The protagonist's identity is set to be the son of Yu Yuanzhen, the son of the 95th-level titled Douluo of the Blue Lightning Overlord Sect, and the "Master" of Yu is a brother The martial soul sets the Pokémon's different-colored gold carp King and the 70-level different-color golden Gyarados (Characteristics: Overconfidence: not suppressed by the momentum and pressure field) The innate soul power is only level 20 The protagonist can set the martial soul in the early stage. The first 6 skills cannot be used until level 70 Only after the martial soul's true form, Magikarp, evolves into Gyarados Then for the protagonist's skills, I set the protagonist's own fixed skills, which means that no matter what soul beast is absorbed, it can be used But the level 70 soul beast I set is a system task: a duel with a golden dragon carp that is more than 200,000 years old. However, the protagonist is only level 70 and has no soul ring. His strength is definitely not enough. Then he asked his father to fight the golden dragon carp and win. Protagonist Sacrifice First soul skill: Bite to pieces Second soul skill: Sacrifice collision (This is a skill that I set up for acceleration) Third soul skill: Iron Tail (The reason why I didn't set up the water tail is because they are all tail attacks. Why can't Gyarados use the iron tail and the iron tail is a fighting attack that is not restrained) Fourth soul skill: Defend Fifth soul skill: Reverse Scale Sixth soul skill: Destroy light Key points! ! The seventh soul skill: 1 Spirit Avatar (the spirit evolves permanently into Gyarados and uses the spirit to become the spirit Avatar without any side effects) 2 Mega Evolution (can evolve into super Gyarados but there is a time limit and a one-day cooldown after use) The Eighth Soul Skill: Dance of the Dragon Gigantamax (this one I plan to use has the same time limit and one day as the mega switch) Cooldown) (But they cannot be used together, after all, they have different focuses, one is a high-sensitivity special attack and the other is a heavy-duty violent physical attack) The ninth soul skill: Dragon God Dive Dragon Stars (dragon-type ultimate move, okay, although Gyarados does not have a dragon-type, but it is handsome and does high damage, and they are all dragons, but they are sticky, right? It is really not possible and just say it is a magic modification of the system) The tenth soul skill: True Dragon Comes into the World (immune to water attribute damage, other injuries The harm is halved) (the focus is to obtain the blood of the true dragon and evolve into the true dragon) The setting is done here Complaint I think the current Douluo fan fiction has been poorly written for so many years in the Tang San line and the Wuhun Palace line, and has made readers tired. Moreover, the general Douluo novels are generally too fast, and there is nothing written about Douluo after all. The original text is not very long, either it is about opening a new map or there is nothing to write about at the end. If you write slower, readers will say you are not good at writing And the emotional line of Douluo is very difficult to write. After all, the original text is not very good. Both of them are love brains. I also thought about the outline and it probably has a general direction, but it is still a bit messy so I won't post it

The first few chapters were okay, but after Xiao Wu appeared, the protagonist started to turn into a monkey

The soul power level is chaotic. Xiao Wu was at level 54 in Chapter 115, and did not break through to Soul King until Chapter 137.

It was fine at the beginning. After a hundred data, there were various errors, and not just a little bit. The data in the entire page was wrong. It felt like someone had changed. Otherwise, it would have been impossible to have such errors in the time data of only a dozen pictures.

I just found out that since I am torturing the third person and the strong one, and at the same time I will not join the group or enter the Wuhun Palace, I have two questions to ask 1. Does Tang San have a chance to develop? It stands to reason that the protagonist will grab all kinds of opportunities to grab Tang San, so Tang San's cultivation speed will be based on the normal innate soul power. In the middle and later stages, he is not qualified to compare with the protagonist (when the protagonist becomes a god before the age of 25, Tang San will have the most soul saint), not to mention forcing him to take the god test and give away opportunities, forcibly making Tang San an enemy that can threaten the protagonist. 2. Will Bibi Dong, the white-eyed wolf, die? After the plot started, she was just a pure licker. If she touched her anus, she was hostile to Bibi Dong. Bibi Dong was a pure lunatic who wanted to destroy the Douluo Continent. The plot can be designed so that Qian Renxue kills Bibi Dong when she knows that Bibi Dong killed Qian Xunji but does not know that it was Qian Xunji who played with Bibi Dong. This can just solve the problem of having to consider Bibi Dong if she wants to take Qian Renxue. (All of Bibi Dong's sufferings are essentially self-inflicted. Qian Xunji's only fault was not playing with Bibi Dong, but not using Bibi Dong as a tool for the inheritance of Wuhun Palace's martial arts. Bibi Dong's normal ending should be to be imprisoned by Wuhun Palace to give birth to children for a lifetime as a tool for inheriting high-quality martial arts spirits.)

To be honest, the group flow has been written badly now, and the comments are also a different kind of group flow. I may have read too many Douluo and others. Dou Yi can't write anything new. Pokémon Spirits are interesting, but it's a shame.

This is the most ruthless book I have ever seen

What kind of heroine do you want? Just throw one hand at the earth and hold the Douluo Continent to smash the God Realm, and then use xy fusion to project Arceus's stone slab to create the world.

I hate Xiao Wu before the sacrifice. Xiao Wu who has no soul after the sacrifice is the best Xiao Wu 😂

In fact, the martial spirit that travels through the Douluo Continent is a fire-breathing dragon. I have had this idea for a long time. Qisi even wanted to write a novel before the meeting. But the author's ideas are somewhat different from mine. The settings belonging to the content are a little different. I think the awakening of the martial spirit should be Charmander. Because even the Blue Silver Emperor is still Blue Silver Grass in the initial stage. The protagonist's martial spirit at the beginning is a fire-breathing dragon, so the upper limit will be set at this. This upper limit does not include XYA evolution. This evolution is recognized as strong. I think if the martial soul is a small fire dragon. At level 20, the incoming wave evolves into a fire dinosaur. The level 40 incoming wave evolves into a fire-breathing dragon. This can also be used to set waves. Let the protagonist absorb the soul ring life upgrade. For example, if you upgrade and evolve a level 20 fire dinosaur, the life of your soul ring will be increased by 500 years. When level 40 is a fire-breathing dragon, the age limit is increased by 1000 years. His skills can also be upgraded in waves from the early stage to the late stage. For example. 12 Two soul rings can be grasping and spark attacks. When evolving into a Charizard, it can transform into dragon claws and spray flames. This step-by-step approach makes sense.

I asked the editor today and found that the reading is not very high. I still hope that readers who keep books can click on the latest chapters every day and read them bit by bit, so that the book can go further. Thank you!

I know the reason why this book has not been doing so well recently. In the past, I remember that when the author first started to update, I followed this book and gave him a ticket. Now that I see these paid parts, it feels like a running novel, like telling a story. When I read it, I feel completely unable to get into it. Why do I feel that the writing is better when there is no charge, but the author becomes more lazy after charging?

Damn it, I saw half of it and I'm really afraid of you eunuch

This book is internally invested, and we are now preparing to sign the contract. You can invest more coins.

Hurry up and update, it's very tiring to watch it all the time.

What the hell do I need to re-subscribe to a chapter that I have already subscribed to?