NBA: I Am the Master of Dealing Cards

To be honest, I really don't want to see you write about online trolling. Besides writing about online trolling, what else do you write?

To be honest, Yang Yi's plot is too nonsensical. How can a Chinese sports commentator hack a player who is famous in Europe and the United States for basketball and football? Not to mention a great player like Sun Yue who can enter the MVP discussion. He can't play for more than a few minutes in a season. He is mainly for comfort. When have you ever watched him cheat? Just say that Huang Jianxiang is not fighting alone. If he fights against a Chinese player, do you think he will be expelled from CCTV? As for the exact traffic, that's even more nonsense. If Yang Yi dares to play blackmail like this, then he must be scolded. Reporting the phone would definitely result in his death. Have you not seen what happened to Ke Fan when he said some unpleasant words because he was not Zhan Mi? If you want to argue with American commentators and pig's feet, there's nothing wrong with that. After all, the culture there, the commentators have to have a clear-cut stand. It's commonplace to play black in live broadcasts, but I really don't believe it in the Chinese commentator

Two chapters of pure water today. Pure water. Just, does it make sense that the catch-up period is so low? If you are so popular, who dares to subscribe? In my opinion, writing a book is like doing business. You are the entrepreneur, and the platform's commission is rent. As an entrepreneur, you cannot guarantee the reputation of your product, so why should consumers pay for it?

Obviously the rhythm of the game is okay, but why are there so many online trolls? I have to use several pages every time. 눈_눈 It's okay to write a novel with private life, but can you shorten the scope? 2 Or 3 chapters per game, one or two online trolls, and one or two in daily life. Let's not talk about it, but who of the basketball novels likes to see you being an internet troll?

I left when I saw that prediction of 0.1. It was just a stupid basket setting. Do you know how long 0.1 Seconds is? When the brain receives signals, even 0.1 Seconds is not necessarily enough to give instructions to the spirit. You also need to add reaction time. What actions can the body make? Even if you blink your eyes, it may not be enough time. It's just a stupid dog setting.

The author himself said that yellow people are not good. Are you right about athletes like Su Bingtian? Are you qualified to write sports articles with your three views?

I'm convinced, the Knicks paid a big deal for you, the boss still trusts you, and you built the team step by step. You go to the Lakers next season, just for the sake of licking. I've always been fully booked. This chapter makes me sick.

Reporters like Yang Yi can only praise players and flatter them, so how can they go against popular players? The author also worked hard for the word count.

I watched the free part and there was a lot of online trolling. I don't know what the point is. Please be careful if you mind.

The title of the book should be "After two years of hard work, I can finally go to Los Angeles to be a dog."

Author, let me give you a suggestion. When writing the names of characters, write the names seriously. Wade will be Wade, Bosh will be Bosh. Don't write Uncle Wei or Uncle B. Occasionally, forget it. These people don't have names in the whole text. It's really uncomfortable to look at it like this.

Athletes like Su Bingtian have worked hard for so many years before they got rid of the stigma that yellow people can't run under 10 seconds. Foreigners dare not say that yellow people are not physically good. You, a novelist or a sports writer, pick it up and carry it with you? Is it okay to just talk about race when you come up?

Brother Shui's article is a bit too embarrassing. Yang said that the data is too watery. This is unlikely to happen. If a Chinese player really gets a stable starting position on the console in the NBA, whoever makes comments will not be boasting! Why do you say data is watery? Black and mindless. Is it to please those Harden fans?

No wonder I didn't get good grades in the book. I just wrote randomly. I couldn't stand it when I saw that I was going to the Lakers even if it was a limited exemption. I had to write hard just to go to the Lakers. If I could win three consecutive championships, I wouldn't have to lick Kobe.

Durant, right? He likes online spats so much

How come there are so many filial sons even after Kobe is dead?

Stop reading, he has stopped writing and is preparing to become a eunuch. He told me this in a private message.

I've read more than 100 chapters. I started reading this book because of the title. I feel like the protagonist should play the traditional number one position so I came in. Now it feels like a lot of them are swayed by forwards and defenders. I just want to see people like Nash and Paul Kidd who like assists. I hope to pass the ball to the main player to get more assists in the future. The poisonous point is obviously that in the early stage, there will be too many lines with netizens. After being scolded, things did improve. But I think it's overkill. You can't have it all and you can't have it all. Don't be conflicted for the sake of conflict. Write more about universals and less about extreme remarks. Just finished Chapter 102. After entering the NBA, I felt like the protagonist was playing a stand-alone game. It's like you're alone watching a football game without sound. The most important thing about competitive writing is to write about the feeling of passion. This is a sure kill. It's just a sure kill and nothing else. There is no commentary to exaggerate the atmosphere with the audience. There is no passionate chest-to-chest with teammates. I think the most important thing about competitive writing is the passion mentioned earlier. The second is the sense of rhythm. You can't keep writing about competition. It's also not possible to write in detail about every game. Otherwise it would be too monotonous. Fatigues easily. There needs to be multiple voices, not just the ball itself. What the author needs is to highlight the game. It's like hyped news. But the essence of hype is only a means and should also be focused on the news. This requires a good combination of writing both on and off the court. This way it will be fuller and not too monotonous. Key matches are discussed by all parties before the match. You can add some commentary programs as appropriate. The commentator joked before the game started. You can also write gossip about celebrities on the sidelines. Then there are some debates and highlights of the game that need to provide enough atmosphere for the guests and the audience. Interview at the end of the game. News and discussions among netizens. ... Write some training routines off the court. What does the protagonist represent in love? The most important thing is to grasp the degree. Everything is about balance. Don't put the cart before the horse. Which ones account for a larger proportion and which ones account for a smaller proportion need to be considered. I don't know how to write online articles. Everyone has their own favorite genres and plots. I just want to say that my thoughts may be able to give the author some suggestions. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more.

I came to watch basketball, not to watch online fights. I want to watch online fights. If I just go to a social platform, wouldn't it be better than what you make up?

Not until around chapter 200! Invincible in the first season! It's even funnier to pretend to be! 0-3 Comeback! Why don't you write a season finale faster?

I was persuaded to quit. In the tiebreaker of the finals, my absolute core was destroyed by the opponent. I was still able to play well. I can't bear to do this.

After reading novels for more than ten years, one of the characteristics I have summarized so far is that if the book reviews are about a few chapters, 90% of them are bad books, and this book is no exception. Put aside the water, how can there be so much dialogue in a game of football? He's also crazy about using personal information, and I don't know who I learned this sentence fragment from. Did you graduate from elementary school?

Half of the chapter is about trolling and being trolled, there is no need to read it, and there is no need to waste too much time.

I read a few chapters earlier and jumped to watch the draft. It makes me laugh so hard, don't write about pig's feet. There are so many scenes of pig's feet in this book. The way your dad talks, does he sound like he's an agent? The lack of security is so frustrating. One final comment, second-round pick, your fucking contract is still to be determined. I asked you to play in the summer league, but you still didn't go. I didn't know, I thought you were the first pick in the first round.

A protagonist who plays four teams in four years and has no lower limit to his character.

No, it's broken 😰

Can you play like this? Why don't you let me destroy Curry? Compared with a flagrant foul, wouldn't it be a win if Curry is simply eliminated? Don't you want a championship ring? I was speechless. You have finished writing this book. The plot is already thin, but you ended up writing it like this?

Three teams in three years, nomadic dynasty, targeted poverty alleviation 😅😅😅

Entering the palace? Although it was sudden, it was expected. When I went to the Lakers, many people opposed it. My grades in basketball were mediocre. TJ could only say that it would only happen sooner or later.

Don't write about a basketball game. In one chapter, half of it is about inner activities and half of it is about complaining. I guess the protagonist wakes up at the end of the book and finds that he has had a very long dream.