Chaos Phoenix Covering the Sky

Why do you have to seal it to future generations? Isn't it bad to directly preach? You have a good old man who has taken the road ahead. What are you afraid of? Just follow your father's path. And you have cheats. What are you afraid of? Judging from the original work, the treatment of the Heavenly Prince is not bad at all, but he was unlucky and met Wu Shi and cleared him. Otherwise, he would have been treated as the Heavenly Prince and become an emperor. The reason why he was not saved was because he could not save himself. I don't know if he could have been saved just by looking at the little fairy phoenix. Don't talk about the Emperor's lack of Taoism. Even the fourth-level emperor Ji Haoyue can eventually become an emperor. Those who have something to do are afraid that he will not become an emperor. Moreover, the Immortal Emperor is very good to the Eight Divine Generals. It can be seen from the Heavenly Sword that the Queen does not care if the Queen dies. He will take revenge as soon as he hears that the Divine General is dead, and he almost resurrected the Sun and Moon Divine General. So why would the Divine General not be with you? Well, your setting is that immortality is the best for the protagonist, so the god will definitely be your supporter. If you really want to declare yourself, I suggest ruthless people or Wu Shi Yi, and Ye Fan Yi. There are too many books, and I don't want to read them anymore.

Cut it off while you don't have much to write now, and then go and copy other things. Remember that the ancient scriptures are not important after you remember your identity, background, and resources. What is important is the process of growth. Chaos like you is the blood of the Holy Spirit and the Emperor. It is almost immortal. The supreme ones in the restricted area are all old and immortal. Those who are very interested in these don't think that they can sit back and relax with the protection of the Holy Spirit. There are also many people who are interested in the Emperor.

The God Emperor is immortal? ! That book itself is a little bit poisonous! He beats me every day for less than 10,000 years! Two points per capita saint! The three-point divine liquid will never be used up!

It's obviously a plagiarism from Divine Phoenix Immortal, and the writing is just as bad. It can't be a new vest, right?

The avatar suggests returning to the reincarnation and shaping it! You can also recycle some resources! Just like the author spent 1 billion gift money to marry a 40-year-old behind-the-scenes woman who gave birth to 7 children! The boss won't let you touch her later!

There is already a book similar to this one. The protagonist's bloodline is almost the same. He is a phoenix and a holy spirit. He is an enemy of Ye Fan. The emperor is not the protagonist who was transformed into a super genius with thirteen or four taboos when he was born. After reading more than ten chapters, I can't stand it anymore!

The background of the protagonist seems too strong. I feel that the background of your protagonist, Divine Phoenix Immortal, seems to have an invincible father and a heavenly mother, both of which are related to the Holy Spirit. Also, the Emperor and the Queen are not from the same faction, and the Queen is not the Emperor's biological mother. Of course, I'm not saying that it's not good for the protagonist to have a strong background, but I still can't understand why the protagonist has a supreme-level character under his command. What can you do to ensure that he can be loyal to you😓😓😓

There is no chaotic energy. Said he couldn't afford it. I was diagnosed with malnutrition when I was a child

I don't understand. How did you write such rubbish and get recommended?

Your punctuation marks look so hard

How awesome is it that even the Earthly Life Fruit can extend the emperor's life for a lifetime? The author must not have looked at Zhetian or not carefully looked at it.

Isn't this a bit long-winded? I'm not here to read the introductory text.

That's ridiculous! His mother lived three or four lifetimes? According to this statement, his mother is on the same level as Immortal, Emperor Zun, Rueren, Wu Shi and Ye Fan... Anyone who has exceeded the Emperor level of Zhe Tianzhong for more than two lives is basically a strong person at the level of Heavenly Emperor, and those who can survive four lives are basically mortal immortals. Immortal has been lying in wait for millions of years and bathed in countless emperor's blood before becoming a mortal immortal. His mother is just the wife of the Immortal Emperor and can live three or four lives? ? ? Poison……

I don't even know what I'm writing now.

As expected of me, I am a big poisonous person! You won't be disappointed! Will the world be repaired later? Then spread your message to others! I understand, I understand everything...

The author can sort it out from the beginning. There are many places where it is difficult to read smoothly.

Author, please revise it and repost it. It's hard to describe what you wrote, and it's not smooth in many places.

I came up with an idea, can I have the Divine Phoenix Sacred Body Tao Fetus 🙂, the product of the Immortal Queen's plot against the Wu Shi Great Emperor?

Come on, author. I hope the plot will be faster.

Unlike other Zhetian fans, the idea is very good, but the writing style is not strong.

The era of ruthless people came out

Please revise those places, author

Originally, it was nothing to cover the sky, but now I look at my colleagues and think about it, the emperor who did not commit suicide established a dynasty, and the common people surrendered some blood every month in exchange for shelter. This must be the case for most people, why has no one thought about it.

The symbols are used so casually, and the sentences are really hard to describe.

The teacher who corrects your essay must be hnb

Punctuation marks have lost at least half of their popularity here.

Now that I think it's okay, I suggest that I say goodbye to the ancient Zheng directly and develop to the time when Ye Fan became the emperor in the later ancient times.

Look at a book from a distance, look at a flying ball from a close distance

I wanted to write content similar to Divine Phoenix Immortality, and the background was more impressive than others, but you seemed to have tried too hard, and the writing was neither fish nor fowl.