Rookie Vs. Jordan, I Became the God of Basketball

Some suggestions are that the protagonist should not be too tall, because I am tired of watching the whole court dribbling the ball at a height of 2.2 Meters, and it is not new at all. Also, it is best to enter the NBA when you are 18 years old, otherwise it will be another poisonous point.

The pace is too slow. You made the protagonist so invincible that it's almost 150,000 words now. The book hasn't even reached March Madness yet. By the time you get to the NCAA Finals, I'm afraid it won't be at least 300,000 words.

Let's talk about the number of shots and scores, so that everyone doesn't think the data is too outrageous. The average number of D1 NCAA teams in 2023 is less than 57 shots per game. In the 1989-90 season, this number was 79 times. The most LMU even had 87.9 Times. In LMU games, the two teams averaged 169.5 Shots per game in 40 minutes!

Jordan was packaged by the NBA and promoted to the world. It was to strengthen the influence of the NBA in the world. No matter how good a Chinese you are, it is impossible to promote you. Jordan is the result of relentless media promotion. You are a Chinese and who can promote you? What are you dreaming about?

More foreign horses are better than anything else. Jordan's lover is much older.

Why do you always do weird things? Does the person who died of a heart attack have anything to do with the protagonist? There's always the butterfly effect, the butterfly effect, and was the protagonist an American before he was reborn? He knew all the things and people in the NCAA in the 1990s. This one died of a heart attack, that one failed in the draft. The protagonist knew everything, and there was nothing he didn't know.

It's so long-winded and nonsense, it makes my head hurt just to read it.

Why do you have such a long wingspan? A person with a wingspan of more than 2 meters is already outstanding if his wingspan exceeds his height by 10. People with a wingspan exceeding 15 are extremely talented, and those with a wingspan exceeding 20 are rare. But many superstars do not exceed 15. And I feel that if it exceeds 15, it looks a bit uncoordinated and ugly.

Let me tell you my opinion. If you want to compete with Jordan, it is best to go to a Western Conference team and then face Jordan in the finals. Since the protagonist wants to be the god of basketball, it is best not to lose to Jordan on the stage of the finals. It is best not to lose the series in the finals. It is best not to write that the protagonist is outstanding. Okay. Let Jordan win several championships, but not by defeating the protagonist. You can write some reasons for the protagonist to be eliminated early. For example, the protagonist's teammates are not strong enough or his teammates are injured. In the first few years, the protagonist can compete with Jordan. In the next few years, the protagonist can dominate the league. The main point is to let the protagonist defeat the peak Jordan to win the championship.

Why do the Chinese want to benchmark against Jordan? Even if they can surpass Jordan in writing skills, can they replace Jordan's promotion role? It's like being a Chinese who travels back in time and is smarter than George W. Bush, but can he become the president of the United States?

Now I don't like reading Invincible novels less and less. I'll get tired of it after one season.

Pay attention to typos. Another great write-up

Come on! Great writing! ! !

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With a height of 183cm, it is easy for someone to exploit him defensively.

When kand saw Chapter 70, his face was so full of laughter that he couldn't help but comment. It was super fun to watch, and I didn't mean to be funny, but I couldn't help but make my face sore with laughter along the way! ! And this team owner is so great! Totally a fan of the main character!

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