Dark Fairy Garden

New books are released every day, at least two to three! I feel sorry for the audience if I still feel like I am constipated after updating this day!

I have to get up early tomorrow

Do you know why so many people said in the previous book that it was a pity to throw away the food if it was tasteless? It was always written from the third perspective under the guise of the first perspective. The protagonist was like a bystander with no emotions, no special personality and preferences.

It's so boring, it seems like I'm cultivating immortality, but I don't seem to be there; I seem to be in the underworld, and I seem to be playing dirty tricks in the officialdom.

Do time travelers have to have a sister?

I wrote it in such a hurry that I wrote several lines, including a clay figurine blood guard, a female ghost and the fairyland, a gang, and a family. It was a bit confusing.

The protagonist in this book is very shrewd, but every time he encounters some difficult things, he relies on cheating to solve them. He seems shrewd but is actually imprudent. For example, when the barbarians siege the city, they could have left early and concealed their strength, but in the end, they had to fight with two Dao Danjings, completely exposing their own strength. I really can't stand it anymore!

The writing is good, but the development is too slow. It has 650,000 words, and it is still a little guy. He has not left the novice village. He has been living in the cracks and being manipulated. Anyone can bully the protagonist. Also, how can the protagonist rebel in a world with such great power at his disposal? According to the meaning in the book, this is a fairyland that spans multiple realms. This kind of strength, without the strength to crush everything, is simply a dream.

The sense of peacekeeping is too strong. When I came to Fairyland, I felt that I had read the first few hundred chapters in vain. The levels were too different and I had no sense of participation. Why is it that the author has set billions of worlds and infinite planes now? Can it really be written? He only thinks about setting up the airs and not filling in the story. They are all empty airs and no story.

The villains in Jian Rujiao's books are too weak, and conflicts and excitement are hard to come by. Xuan Qingwei should be at the top.

I read more than a hundred chapters. I feel like the author should advertise or find other authors to PY. Although I don't know what writing style you like, I feel that it should be more than this. In addition, I feel that the title of this book is average. If I had not read Xuan Qingwei, I would not even click on it.

I think this book has one of the biggest shortcomings. If you write the plot of the sword hall, write it well. One moment, there is a battle between cultivators in the sun and clouds, and the next moment, you and I are cheating in the plot of the sword hall. Really boring. Might as well write the plot of the knife shop.

Everyday chamber pot, chamber pot, so boring, it seems like bitterness and hatred. If you talk about it too much, you will get tired of it.

It's too outrageous. When you set up an industrial park in ancient times when transportation and information were not developed, you didn't even have an upstream and downstream industrial chain, let alone the city owner who was not a figure in Xiuxian. In a small border town, even the blood guards of the provincial capital would not come unless the clay figurines were stolen. They want position but no position, and they want industry but no industry. Nowadays, there are many local urban investment projects. What did you have at that time?

From the first chapter, I have read more than 300 chapters of elixir formation! But I really have to complain! In the beginning it was easy to practice Qi and become a bit more awesome than a martial artist! Looking at Xuanmai to guide Qi is like looking at a child! This elixir has basically reached the top of Xia Bang! But the protagonist has become a Taoist elixir, and it feels like he is playing with a group of children! You've already changed the map ceiling immediately! Should this method be changed? At least it can show the power of Dao Dan, right? It's a bit unbearable! After all, I followed hundreds of chapters! Keep it first!

It's a waste to eat but to throw away The underworld writing is quite good But this is a novel about cultivating immortals where the power is attributed to oneself Most of the whole text is about intrigues and power structure But if the power is attributed to oneself, the strength is there This is because the power is dominant and the protagonist is stupid The author, you have got the key point wrong There is a reason why the writing is not good or not.

After raising 124 chapters, has the protagonist not yet entered the immortal world?

Vote yourself!

What a great book, better written than most of the books at the top of the list! I hope the battle strength doesn't collapse in the later stage.

The author seems to be unable to grasp the refreshing points of conventional cultivation. The writing is messy. You have a good grasp of the thick black officialdom. It is easy to collapse when you write it. Just like your last book, it is completely tasteless after writing and it is a pity to throw it away. I also read it one by one. Ordinary cultivation is a cultivation or officialdom is a cultivation. If it doesn't work, then bye bye

Dark Fairy Garden, half of the time I saw it, I was still playing martial arts tricks in that small broken city 😡😡

Have you written about "Biuquliu" now? Xuanjian Immortal Clan is "Biubu". This book is also "Biubu". It has four or five hundred chapters, and there is not even a trace of the so-called Immortal Court.

I can't watch it after Chapter 400. I'm in any realm. As long as it's not a pig's foot, I don't know how to die.

The writing is very good and suitable for reading slowly. Much better than many fast food articles. Already in a good land

There are 20,000 collections. There should be 2,000 all ordered.

Damn it, this book only has over a thousand subscriptions

I hope to become another Xuan Qing Wei

Finished spreading flowers!