The Chaos of Secrets

If you don't know how to write a love line, then don't write it. It'll be so embarrassing that it will break through the floor.

The protagonist is unlikable, selfish and self-righteous

The other world text is too outrageous like the previous life text. I suggest you change it.

The character's emotions are too exaggerated, slightly depressing, a common problem for newbies

The previous chapter was fine, but what the hell is going on in the latest chapter? How did the protagonist become like this? What kind of capital does he have to challenge now 🤔

The character dialogue is too scripted,

There are still academy places available, and it looks like I have to go to the academy! Just become a master and go to the academy to be a stupid student.

The protagonist is awesome, but his personality is quite extreme and irrational. Logically speaking, the living environment is okay, but working hard is weird.

The protagonist is quite good, he is a destined person, he has researched the parasitic killing flower and the amplifying potion, and he dares to expose himself and show his strength. The current Gou Daoliu is not like a turtle at all.

Except for some minor issues with the details, this book is really good-looking. It has a dark protagonist, no jokes, and is very consistent with Western fantasy. In the current Internet environment, it is rare to find such a good dark book.

He is actually a Gong Douwen🤓

Come on, author, stick to it until it's on the shelves 🙂

Surviving from the death of the protagonist after time travel, the description of Goldfinger, the description of the parasitic killer flower and the impurity-free potion, and the exchange of interests with Jess and Oakley, reflect the protagonist's ruthless and sinister style of behavior, without flinching or holding back. If a novel about such a protagonist is written with 4 or 5 million words, it will definitely become a god...~

It feels quite boring and makes me want to sleep just watching it.

It's beautiful. I don't know why there are so few people. Please give me more.