World Ll Yuantian
世界ll渊天
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The first few chapters did draw lessons from Zhetian, and besides, Ye Yuan... (Ye Fan may disagree), it can be different in the later chapters. After all, I didn't copy too much, so there is no need to get too entangled. (Come on!) Don't let other people's words affect your writing mentality. (We haven't talked about fan derivatives yet~"
This book is suitable for novices, not bookworms
The plot of the story is a bit fast-paced and feels like there are no details.
This plot is too weird. It has no rhythm to the story and is more like a narrative. And it was written too fast. The plot of the earth is just that small. Then the two protagonists go to the world of cultivation, and then someone comes to take over as a disciple. It's a bit outrageous and really boring. It would be better to remove the previous earth segment and just write about two people who inexplicably traveled to the world of cultivation. In addition, the same goes for accepting a disciple. Someone came out and wanted to accept you as a disciple and you agreed? What's the reason for becoming a disciple?