
Listen to the Voices of the Dead
倾听死者的声音
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- Completed
- Length
- 411k Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Detective Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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[New book trial reading] Essence of suspense! A crushing game for mind readers!
Status: Serialized Number of words: 180,000 words Potential of this book: 🌟🌟🌟 [Plot Summary] A young man who is in agony because he is forced to hear other people's noisy voices, and a girl who cannot improve her work efficiency because she cannot speak out, meet as if by fate and embark on the road of helping each other to resolve suspense. [Highlights of this book] 🌟The setting of the protagonist in this book is very interesting. The male protagonist has the ability to read minds and is righteous but a little immature. The female protagonist can talk to ghosts but cannot speak. They are like two puzzle pieces that fit together closely. Just like the title of this book, "Listening to the Voices of the Dead" is the fusion of the male and female protagonist's abilities. 🌟As a quintessential suspense novel, the best part of this book is the cases and their cracking process. This is very important because this book has supernatural elements. It should not involve too many supernatural elements to make the case unreasonable or too easy to solve. At the same time, it should also ensure that the case itself is logically self-consistent and interesting enough to satisfy the suspense readers' desire for exploration. This point seems to be up to standard from the case setting and reasoning process of this book and can be used as a highlight. [Expectations of this book] 🌟The portrayal of the supporting characters and even the protagonist in this book is a bit flat and lacks the process of emotional change, which makes many actions of the protagonist group seem reasonable but actually a bit abrupt. 🌟There are some imperfections in the setting (probably not filled in). For example, the author often has a psychological description of the female protagonist, but at the same time, there is no portrayal of a male protagonist who can hear her heart. Maybe the male protagonist's ability occurs automatically, but this is contradictory to the previous article where the male protagonist cannot sleep because of his ability. Finally, my evaluation is only my personal perception of the book as a reader, not a professional. I hope the author can write better and better (´▽`) {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}
The writing is great. The murder case is laid out in the opening chapter without hesitation. The method of death is also novel and fascinating. I keep thinking about why. The plot is compact, not sloppy, and highly suspenseful. Looking forward to the revelation later 🥳Thank you for your support and encouragement. I hope your logic will become stronger as you write more. It's pretty good now 😉
It would be great if the author and protagonist were more capable. It would be better if there could be a few more twists and turns Don't talk about those crappy articles Also, there is no official one? I really don't understand
Ah, it's so well written. I finally understand why I can't sign the contract. My novel is rubbish. To be honest, the first story is a bit scary, but I have a heart-wrenching desire to see the follow-up. Will the murderer be sentenced to death? It must be, no killing is not enough to satisfy my anger, really, beast, eh, the sense of substitution in the latter story is not as strong as the first one, I don't feel that angry, other emotions, because the description is too far away from me, the thirty-second generation Crescent Girl, the introduction is not enough or my imagination is not enough Taihang, the first one seemed to happen to me. My hands were shaking after watching it. I was worried that Luo Yan would be discovered. He was in the same room with the corpse. His heart was too strong. I didn't understand the reasoning for a while. Why was the hand cut off? It seemed that there could be other ways. I only found out the reason after buying a huge amount of insurance. It seemed that my brain was not strong enough. I had to lay out all the clues to understand. The person who can be the protagonist is indeed not a mortal. The ability to read minds is just the icing on the cake.
It reminds me of a comic I read called Listening to the Voices of the Dead. It's also a childhood sweetheart where the woman is given a free start, turning into a guardian spirit and following the hero. It's a heavy genre. I quite like it.
Import: A rare suspense novel. Even though I haven't read a mystery novel for a long time, I was still attracted by the author's ability to combine comedy culture with plot. I have to say that the author has indeed put a lot of effort into the construction of the plot and characters. If more highlight elements can be added, it may be more appropriate. Book title: "Listening to the Voices of the Dead" Author: Bitten by a Cat Tags: suspense, detective, ghost girl Rating: 3 stars Plot analysis: Can you continue to school calmly after your childhood sweetheart was brutally dismembered in the beginning? In order to bring the criminal to justice, Luo Yan went back to school to collect clues. Unexpectedly, the breakthrough point turned out to be a transfer student. The first highlight of this book lies in the coordinated use of the abilities of the two protagonists. The male protagonist can read minds but can only trigger them passively, and the female protagonist can communicate with ghosts but cannot speak. Their cooperation can really achieve the effect of 1+1>2. They can deduce the whole case from the minute details and solve the case quickly. After working together, the two hit it off and began a strange life of constantly encountering horrific cases. In order to retain the sense of mystery, I will not spoil the specific case here. I can only say that the reading experience is very good, and the author is very good at laying out clues and foreshadowings. Character Analysis: In the author's writing, the most successful aspect of Luo Yan's character is his "youthful youthfulness". This innocence is sometimes blended with some jokes, which also adds a little joy to the horror atmosphere of this book. Contrary to Luo Yan, the heroine Shen Lingxue has outstanding appearance and bubbling beauty, but she can only keep company with ghosts every day. She has been involved in countless cases, big and small, and was even retaliated by bad guys and became mute due to this. Experiencing the darkness of society makes her always incompatible with everyone. The two protagonists are so different, but they redeem each other. Whether there will be more emotional entanglements in the suspenseful and horror tone is also a focus of debate among readers. Audience: This book is highly logical, and the author must have put a lot of effort into it. The overall plot pace is relatively fast, which is very suitable for readers who like suspense and mystery novels. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}
Without any bias, I think the author's writing is really good. I have scanned many suspense novels. The text is dense and the story is long and long. I can't stand it at all. But I just opened it and read a few pages and found that the story description is very clear and not sloppy at all. I hope you can stick to it more. It doesn't matter if no one reads it. I will always support you.
Just reading the introduction, this book looks like Riqing rather than Qidianwen.
A bit miserable
Pig's feet Qingmei is really disgusting, the green tea bitch is the ultimate. The pig's feet are so revengeful for her that she sold the pig's feet for the sake of her own existence. She also pretends to guarantee that the pig's feet will not be hurt. This is the green tea bitch's extreme. She deliberately involves pigs in solving crimes and committing such fatal things. Haha, don't talk about the initiative. The second female lead threatens the protagonist as the second female lead. But Qingmei takes the initiative to sell the protagonist's information to the female second. All she can say is that the green tea bitch is a green tea bitch. Her conscience is fed to the dog.
Chapter 5: Dissuade! I just said something before. I know a lot about the protagonist. If I contact the protagonist first and build a good relationship, sooner or later I can get the protagonist to join the team. What follows is deception and threats. The protagonist is forced to join the gang! Do you want it to be so blunt? The author doesn't think such a heroine is cool and attractive, right? It's just a matter of isolation, right?
The protagonist should be written as a time-travel personality. The time-travel personality is enough to give new memories and strange relationships, so the death of a childhood sweetheart can be tolerated. There is a problem with public logic, and the supporting characters feel brainless
There are some problems with the logic. The text is too pale. It is recommended to be as watery as possible. I am not encouraging you to be watery. I just mean that the text is too pale. If there are too few modifiers, the content will be empty. Starting from the beginning, the word childhood sweetheart appears very abruptly, without any foreshadowing. An objective person explains third-party facts. There is no transition period in the plot. The target character is directly inserted and the narrative begins. The relationship between the characters is blurred and is completely supplemented by narration. The subject matter is not new, but it is innovative and does not follow trends. The writing style still needs polishing, and the plot connection needs to be considered. Come on💪
Novel mystery novel with special abilities
It is a mystery novel with novel routines. It takes popular murder cases as the theme and uses superpowers as the routine to solve the cases. The protagonist has the gift of mind reading. What magical phenomena will happen when a detective with mind reading solves a case? What if such a foul detective had a partner who could arrest the souls of the dead? Add in an uncle who can predict the future, what magical things will happen? [Rating]: ★★☆☆☆ [Subject matter]: Suspense-Detective reasoning [Book title]: Listening to the Voice of the Dead [Author]: Bitten twice by a cat [Status]: Serialized [Evaluation of the work]: Personally, I think this book is not very well written, because the author is a newcomer, so there are many flaws in the book. But if the author is writing a book for the first time, it can be said that the talent is relatively good. And the choice of this subject matter is very courageous. First of all, the author's writing style is not very good, and he is not sure about his writing power and the words. Therefore, the places that should be described are not described, and the places that should not be described are repeated many times. The places that should be paid attention to are not paid attention to, and many environments and plot descriptions are not in place, making the whole chapter seem pale; the places that should not be paid attention to are over-emphasized, resulting in some places having only one page, but "Shen Lingxue" appears five or six times. If a sentence appears once, it will make the reader feel very verbose. Of course, this is also the norm for new authors writing books. Being too nervous leads to some parts that they fail to notice. I hope that the author will read it before publishing the book and improve it before submitting it. Secondly, the author is somewhat unable to control this subject matter and the characters in the article. Of course, this is also a problem that new authors can easily make. In fact, this subject matter is already considered a relatively difficult subject in the novel world. It is not only popular in online literature, but also has a large number of fans in traditional literature. Of course I can confirm that the author is a fan of detective novels, but reading a novel well and writing a novel well are two different things. So in this book, the author's description of the suspenseful atmosphere is not adequate, which will prevent readers from feeling that atmosphere; the reasoning process is too simple, and the whole incident is too hasty, failing to achieve the effect that the author's psychological threshold can achieve. The protagonist is set up in the article as a genius with high IQ, clear logic, and rigorous logic, but it is only the narrator and the supporting character who narrate the matter unilaterally. The protagonist's character description, action description, etc. Do not tell the readers at all that he has any special qualities other than his abilities. The reasoning process is also too pale and weak to add too much sense of authentication to the protagonist's character. There are even some minor problems in some logic, making the protagonist's character more paper-like. Furthermore, I personally feel that the author's cultural heritage is still a bit thin. (This does not mean that the author has a low level of education.) It just feels like the author has not been exposed to many such classics, which makes some of the words or descriptions in the article from a professional perspective particularly hollow. Finally, I feel that the author's plot writing is still very good. If the description is not too simple, the plot is still very attractive, and the characters are also very clear; he has added a lot of innovations to the normal reasoning article, and dared to choose this kind of subject matter that is too difficult for novices. The talent is good and there is a lot of room for improvement. Come on, author! [Recommended group]: Readers who like mystery novels and intellectual battles, Readers who like suspense novels. (ps: The above is just my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.) {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}
Very good, very good. This book will live up to my expectations in the future.
Come on, but you're updating too little. At least you're updating three or four chapters a day.
I'm very curious, what if the ghost I encounter is not obsessed with finding the murderer, for example, the obsession is that he doesn't want to die and has not lived enough, or if a family member is seriously ill and asks someone to help him save his family. Of course, this is not the point. It is normal for novels to have unreasonable situations, and such things that do not involve the core of the plot can naturally be ignored. I feel like the first case has a faster pace. Some things were not explained clearly. For example, the death of the murderer's brother. If two people were caught drinking outside and were caught by surveillance, how could the body be sent to the shed? If it was in a residence, it shouldn't be difficult for surveillance to find out that two people went in, but the other person never showed up again. And what is the murderer's motive for killing? For suspense novels, this is quite important. Collected for now, let's see how the second case goes.
Dear Shennong, what do you think of this book?
I have a question: Who is the murderer in the unsolved case?
I have a question, folks, I just read a few chapters of this book. In the chapter "Reincarnation People", were the mothers of the deceased Cheng Quan and Qu Chuyue from Xinde Village? I just finished reading the story of Crescent Moon Girl and I am a little confused.
It feels like reading a diary. Each cell is very short. Normally, Mermaid Villa can last about 150 chapters. I pushed Gal to have a normal ending.
That Shen Lingxue threatened the protagonist with his childhood sweetheart, shouldn't he be killed?
The author wrote it very well. But some plot twists feel a bit abrupt, I hope there can be more details