Director: I Am Improving My Skills on the Set

You wrote 50 chapters in an online novel. It's so ink-filled that a group of people have basically left. Writing about entertainment, no one will look at how you make movies anymore. They all look at various reactions. 50 Chapters will be written if you have good grades, and a maximum of 10 chapters will be written about various things while shooting the movie. The remaining 40 chapters will be written about audience reactions, peer reactions, how much you earn, and what you can do personally. Strength (gold finger) improvement, enjoyment of life, emotional drama (harem novels are written about pao, pure love novels are written about sugar), etc. What is written is the value generated, not the production process, and even the shooting process is directly mentioned in one stroke. The data is written in two lines and the meaning is enough. Your way of writing doesn't necessarily mean it doesn't look good, but it does mean that fewer and fewer people are willing to spend time reading this type of writing.

First of all, this is my first time writing entertainment novels and I have little experience. But before starting the book, I also read novels of the same type, including feedback from readers. In the comments, there will be voices like "A TV series was filmed in just one chapter. It's just a running account without details. Are you planning to write a chronicle of China Entertainment?"; There are also voices like "Can you stop writing about Liu Yifei and Yang Mi? Are these the only female actors in the entertainment industry?" After reading too much feedback like this, and coupled with the serious homogeneity of online texts, I wanted to write a different story and engage in differentiated competition. Moreover, the user base of Qidian is large and inclusive. The current reading data has allowed me to get the first round of recommendations in such a popular channel in the city. Although there is a high probability of being in the first round, I am quite satisfied with this result. Secondly, I want to use the details of making a movie to help the protagonist gradually improve his strength and expand his influence. When I studied the writing techniques of online novels before, I said that the protagonist has a low status and high potential at the beginning. However, I have read a lot of entertainment articles, and the protagonists are basically film school students, with rich network resources, and some are directly rich second generation, and there is no financial pressure to make movies. That's why I thought about creating a protagonist who doesn't know anything about filming, and who is still an outsider. See how he squeezes into this circle step by step, solves difficulties, and finally becomes a master. If the details of making a movie are missing, it will feel like the protagonist upgrades too easily and gets what he wants without going through any hardships. Of course, I will try my best to come up with an interesting plot while making the movie, and I will never deliberately slow down the pace or word count. Finally, thank you again for your readers' opinions. I will work hard to make this novel better!

Those who can beat me are not as beautiful as me, and those who are prettier than me are not as beautiful as me!

Author, you are really talented. You can finish a movie by yourself. You are really talented.

Mouthless Girl｜Freely switch characters

The plot of the story is quite interesting. But the writing technique is standard for a novice novel, and the IQ of the supporting characters is basically worrying.

In recent chapters, the protagonist wants to make money at the box office by recording ghost stories. So first of all, how can you make a mock documentary starring a Chinese person and spoken entirely in Mandarin understandable to Americans? So far, a large number of Americans still watch movies without subtitles, so foreign movies must be dubbed in English. In addition, the success of "Ghost Story" depends on the fact that this strange event happened on American soil and the protagonist is an American. It can attract so much attention. The anti-intellectual education in the United States will make some people think that this is a real event. But the problem is, according to the American people's behavior, your strange incident in China is none of their business. They won't care about it and will treat it as fake news, because China is too far away for them. For example, do you care about the fate of the Brazilian rainforest? Even if the report comes out, it can only be paid attention to occasionally. How can a fire in such a distant place have sustained attention and have a large impact (another example is that the fire in Canada caused dust to linger in New York. This news was also reported in China. Do you think anyone cares?) On the other hand, the Chongqing wildfires received a lot of attention domestically, but would anyone care about it abroad? It's not them who are affected by the disaster. They don't care about their balls.

I personally felt that the plot was not slow and was written very carefully. The shooting scene, the shooting process, and the actor's state are all very immersive. I have read too many entertainment and fast-food gossip articles, but this one gave me a different experience. At least it made me understand the general steps of a drama from project establishment to completion, and the general work that each department has to do. It has the potential for fire, author, come on

The first look at the heroine is a book that will hit the street, so why not create something original?

The writing is okay, but if you squeeze out two-thirds of the water, it will be a masterpiece hahahaha

We've all entered a parallel world, and as a result, there are always movies from the real world. What else do we want the protagonist to film? What are the advantages? They are completely indigenous, and there are also reality stars appearing. Wouldn't you make up some characters and movies from parallel worlds? In this way, the protagonist can have an advantage and choose some real-world movie works. If you already have a parallel world, why would you let the protagonist film?

In fact, there are many generous actresses who have much better acting skills than Xiaohua. For example, Pan Chunchun, Wang Nidanni. Some big and unknown ones are better than today's little flowers. Both acting skills and figure should be good. By the way, I would like to complain that writing novels about time travel movies nowadays is just to gain popularity.

The pace is too slow! It would be better to speed up the pace a little.

The novel is well written, but the emotional scenes are a bit baffling and the emotional scenes are a bit too childish. The female characters that appear are all ambiguous, which makes it very boring. Although the novel is a novel, you should also pay attention to rationality and write slowly. Still need to grow

If you are a first-level author, I will forgive you.

Finished reading it, overall it's good. There's just too much nonsense, and it's a bit boring to write dozens of chapters in a movie.

Congratulations to the author for refining the Sunflower Book. When the sun rises in the east, I am the only one who is undefeated.

There is less emotional connection with women, which would dissuade female readers.

The male protagonist has a low status at the beginning, with no money, an unknown school he graduated from, and zero network resources. Later, relying on my own efforts and golden fingers, I gradually expanded my resources and opened a company, and then I slowly met famous actresses. So readers, please be more patient. In addition, which actress you want to see appear on the stage, you can leave a message.

Since you are a director, you should be a director. I am tired of seeing all-round protagonists.

The male protagonist has affairs with so many women. Is this a harem story? It made me a little panicked! Also, is this book about daily love affairs or about directing? It feels a bit messy, with a lot of nonsense, and misses the point. Come on, author!

"Famous" starring Ben Yu is actually quite good to watch, and the cost is not high.

Originally, it was okay to make a movie with no one writing about it. The second part is going to be a ghost story. Come on, author, I'll say goodbye.

It feels okay, but the update is a bit slow. Will it be able to make tens of thousands of dollars after it is released?

It turned out that the incision was still covered with a bandage, but this time it seems that the incision was completely done.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.