Douluo: I've Decided, You Can Do Whatever You Want

The heroine must not be so scared that Bibi Dong is about to vomit!

Chapter 2 sets up a supernatural soul power the day before yesterday... This... You have to say that Bibi Dong, Qian Daoliu and the like help you awaken, knowing that there is something higher than innate soul power, which is reasonable. In the end, a little soul master knows this kind of secret? In the original work, the only ones with level 20 soul power today are the descendants of gods, and the only known one is Qian Renxue... Alas, it's a small loophole. Let's see what happens later. I hope it doesn't get more outrageous as you write.

I hope the author will write well. Your last two books both started well but the combat system collapsed in the later stage. I am still optimistic about the start of this book and hope it will not explode in the later stage 😏

The latest chapters are quite problematic. Ning Fengzhi has a son. And he has many sons. In the original work, the reason why Ning Fengzhi loves Ning Rongrong so much is not only because she is the only daughter, but also because she has level nine innate soul power, and her martial soul has not yet awakened. This point of view is useless. In other words, even if the protagonist is now engaged to Lin Rongrong on the spot, it will not affect the Qibao Glazed Sect, but can only affect Ning Rongrong's relatives.

The protagonist gives off a sense of levity. The protagonist's character is supposed to be that of an adult. You shouldn't be so willful! Full of dirty words! The rogue rabbit written by the third young master of the Tang family does not use the word "mother" as a curse word. Since the author is a black man. The protagonist should pay attention to these details. Don't seek reason for big things, but don't be unreasonable for small things.

Receive them all, it doesn't matter, we love watching them

Eunuch, stop looking

Don't be a eunuch, someone supports you

Is there Ning Rongrong as the heroine? No, can you add one? I like her very much

The recent chapters have been jumping around so much. The time span is so large that the plot is not coherent and feels a bit stiff. Personally, I feel that the author's handling of this is not very good. If he really wanted to skip time, the author could have written about fighting for a year, and then briefly write about the emotional drama between the protagonist and Qian Renxue and Bibi Dong in the next four years. Right now, I feel like I'm overthrowing my talent. Yesterday I saw Qian Renxue's deep love for the protagonist and I always felt that it was twisted. I hope that the next emotional scene with Bibi Dong can be written better. The current development is okay, keep working hard. The author should not take the above remarks too seriously. Time jumps are really not easy to deal with. I have written them now. I hope the author will pay attention to them in the future. No surprise, I will always support you

You have been a eunuch all the time This is not okay Be brave enough to break through yourself Write this book

You didn't write a book for critical readers.

There are a few people who criticize you, a few people who read your books, and only a few who find fault with you.

Come on, isn't this someone's vest? Do you think so? My Beidi!

I don't dare to watch anymore, so I just want to ask Tang San if he's dead this time.