Building a Salvation Organization from Scratch

How to say it? After reading 100 chapters, I feel like I've seen Yan Returns before. It's a bit like "The natives of this world are very ferocious". Come on, it's really troublesome. That guy has written almost 700 chapters. You can double it. Come on!

++++It's Jun Liuzhao++++ I saw Chapter 204, let me know what you think Generally speaking, it feels a bit interesting, but it's not poisonous, just a bit pure. 🌹The control of the plot in this book is too bland, and the text description lacks tension, making it difficult to bring it into the story. 🌹 Regarding the setting of each character, we can easily see that the author uses solid language and stories to construct the personality of each character. Each character has its own unique personality, characteristics, and story. Each character also has his or her own highlight chapters and plots, but the novel is still a bit poor at describing big scenes. Among the big scene descriptions, the only one that gave me better feedback was the highlight of Xuanzang on the river 🌹 As for the new plot of Godzilla landing in Japan, I think the writing is quite good. I feel that the author can actually be better. For example, you wrote that after members of the organization witnessed the appearance of Godzilla at the scene, why not describe it from the perspective of the media reporters at the time in the next chapter? ? Introducing it directly from the reporter himself, and then writing about the shock he received when he wrote the press conference, it is much better than using the organization members to get used to the hugeness of Godzilla. Because Godzilla's landing is a small climax in the middle of this novel, it would be boring if you don't include some ups and downs ❤️ Of course I respect the author's ideas, and I am just expressing my own understanding and experience 🌹 In terms of plot development, when you read it, you will find it difficult to empathize with the characters' emotions. There is a serious lack of explanation of the character's own experience and analysis of his own emotions in the novel, making it difficult for people to empathize with him. In other words, it lacks emotion, is not passionate enough, makes it difficult for people to empathize, and difficult to appreciate. This can be seen from the fact that there are very few comments in each chapter ❤️ After seeing this, I honestly commented that this book has a relatively new spiritual energy recovery setting, and it also boldly incorporates real-life facts and mysterious organizational elements. There are also a large number of similar old competing products in this genre in Qidian. This book performs well among them in repackaging old wine in new bottles.

Introduction: When the abyss began to erode the universe, and when various extraordinary monsters appeared on the earth, the protagonist Chen Sheng, who obtained the salvation system, began his road to salvation. Of course, salvation cannot be achieved by just one person. A big lie, an organization called Yongzhi, what a heart-wrenching story they will show us Book title: "Building a Salvation Organization from Scratch" Author: Evil Wang Zhenyan Saigao Type: behind the scenes, management, salvation, ideological enlightenment Book recommendation: Point 1: With the main line of resisting the invasion of the abyss, building an extraordinary organization, attracting talents from all over the world, and following the organizational management and development route. Highlight 2: Create extraordinary relics and fabricate epic salvation stories. The fabricated stories that have appeared so far include: "Then Become a Spark - We Live to Die". When you hear this name, don't you feel like the blood of a middle school soul is burning. I have to say that the author's writing is still very touching Disadvantages: If it is not cheeky, the writing is still quite shameful. After all, it is a ideologically enlightened novel. I just have some suggestions, can you turn the background of those ruins into real things? An empty shell alone has no soul. From the reader's point of view, you can't just use murals to explain it. It looks too empty. For example, we are born to die. There can be a lot of things here. Briefly describe the origin of Yongzhi, an evocative story. You can use murals. I have tried it a few times, but the feeling is not very good Overall, it is very good. It belongs to the salvation organization and is a good source of fabricating extraordinary things. It is worth reading {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

I read it all in one go with Changdu, and I judged it to be a piece of history.

I think the author's thinking has become rigid a long time ago, and I can basically guess what the plot will be next. Let's do this, you send me the saved manuscript and I will help you revise it😏😏

After reading the author's latest chapter, let's do this to get a boss .

These kinds of books are all good to read, but unfortunately they are easy to read 😭

Is there a possibility that the abyss is the dark side of the protagonist? All disasters are caused by the dark side of the protagonist. 😏This protagonist is the biggest disaster!

I feel like I'm hanging on too hard, and there's no sense of the threat of impending doom. The protagonists feel like they are basically ordinary people relying on system upgrades, and they have not shown the ability to lead the human spirit or belief. It can be read as a fairly good farming article. But it lacks a sense of salvation.

Speaking of which, I have read a lot of similar articles. I wonder if there is a model for establishing large-scale legion operations. It is too petty for an organization to have some superhero-like superpowers over and over again. For example, like the Astartes of Warhammer, the Custodes are superhuman troops that have a high degree of military organization and carry out large-scale legion operations. Not to mention the power armors of the Custodes and cans, they are really handsome

The idea is very good and the thinking is very clear, but the writing is not enough to support it.

I have read a novel before, and among all the abyss settings, it impressed me most deeply, and it was also the one with the strongest sense of despair. Other aspects of the abyss in it are similar to ordinary novels. The difference is that there are very many abyss demons, too many to be understood. There is a supporting character whose world was destroyed by the abyss, and he vowed to kill all the demons. A demon taunted him: No need to kill, just think of an actual number in your mind immediately, and then that number of demons will die immediately. You can always think of the destruction of the universe, and the ratio of the number of demons you want to die to the total number of demons is infinitely close to 0.

I think the early stage is very interesting, and I have basically finished watching it. I just feel that the post-production span is too fast, so I will directly work on the moon. I feel that I can write more on the earth and then work on the base station on the moon, otherwise it will feel too fragmented.

Is there still a trace of group portraits in this book now? Not to mention the new supporting characters, the impression left on me by the old supporting characters is that they only have meetings and meetings every day. What is the organization doing every day now? The newcomers enter the whole process of conceptual change, and there are no hymns from the supporting characters. There is only the protagonist who retrieves something and the crowd roars, "Yongzhi is awesome," and then starts the next cycle. The protagonist behind the scenes actually does not have to end at all, and all the highlights are given to the supporting characters. What is the significance of the existence of these countries in the book? Either downplay it directly or cooperate fully. Saying they are useful or not will have no impact. Saying they are useless means their presence is higher than that of Yongzhou cadres, neither above nor below.

The writing is quite good, but it's clearly supposed to be a refreshing piece of writing, but it just doesn't feel that satisfying. It's a bit watery.

Brother, please give me one more chapter. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, I beg you, please give me one more chapter. I'm dying, please. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more chapter. Just one more chapter. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother, it's really just one chapter. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore.

The subject matter is very good and the characters are well written, but it is not good at all. There are too many repeated introductions, which is a bit annoying to watch. It would be better to polish it more. It is okay to use repeated introductions to write dialogues between characters, or inner monologues.

How to say it? I feel that this leveling system is too low. An organization that spans human history uses simple numbers to divide levels? According to the setting of this book, the Indians had not invented numbers at that time.

Why do we always talk about Qin's merits but never mention its faults?

Personally, I think the group portrait tag in the profile can be removed. There are no epic supporting characters in this book. Each supporting character actually only has a few strokes, and the other labels are quite consistent. Seeing now, in addition to the supporting character with the same name in the historical myth, there is also Bai Yu, and I can't remember the names of any other supporting characters. The sense of presence is too low. When I read more than a hundred chapters, I still thought about whether I should remind the author that this book is missing an epic story with a supporting character. I don't think so now. Overall, this book is very interesting and I will continue to read it. Although it doesn't match my original intention of seeing a group portrait.

There isn't much sun... Let's make do with it

A book friend in the book review section said that the plot has begun to speed up, is it about to end? My answer is: It is indeed ready to be finished, so the plot is accelerated. The main reason is that my writing is getting worse and worse, and my grades are getting worse and worse. There is no need to keep procrastinating and spending money on hard writing. That is really irresponsible. It's the Chinese New Year, so I plan to write an ending that doesn't involve eunuchs to give readers an explanation, and then I can finish it and take a break for the Chinese New Year. Then I will start a new book after the new year. Thank you all for your continued company!

Write slowly, don't rush, think carefully! There are very few novels of this type that can be made into high-quality products. You, the author, have already succeeded! Pay attention to the details and quality! Day of great fire

It's pretty good in terms of salvation writing, from the beginning to the middle, but from my personal perspective, I felt a little tired while reading it, and it was written slowly and carefully, giving me the feeling of being filled with water. The novel itself has no big problems and the idea is good.

This is so handsome

When I read Chapter 204, there are a lot of problems. You can still read it when there is a shortage of books. Compared with the Aboriginal book, this one is more like the Holy Shield book, which is more likely to crash and have more bugs. Generally speaking, it is still readable, but the group portrait is not like the group portrait, and it feels a bit like paying attention to one and neglecting the other.

It's really good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, but too little. It feels like it's all in the early stages right now. I hope the author can grasp the feeling of doomsday darkness that brings to mankind and the feeling that eternal day brings to mankind's light, which will give it a more epic feel. Come on

Finished spreading flowers! The novel is okay, but some chapters are too watery. The world view is grand and spectacular, and the plot is a bit embarrassing. It cannot depict the feeling of a salvation organization. Of course, maybe I am too picky, and I slightly lower the writing requirements, but I feel it is okay. For the invasion of the Abyss, I feel that the time is too tight. Although it may be written that the Abyss is too stable, but the Abyss that feels stable is not the authentic Abyss... At the same time, the invasion frequency of the Abyss at the beginning is too compact. If the Abyss invaded unintentionally, it would make sense, but when the Abyss realizes it later, it is too hasty. The time concept of the Abyss consciousness should not be so tight That's all. I still like the protagonist Chen Sheng and the salvation organization he created - Yong Zhou. I look forward to the author's next novel being even more beautiful and exciting.

You can adjust it, write more about ordinary life, describe the beauty of life, and create an ancient salvation organization. The plot of My Neighbor Totoro is very beautiful, touching, and harmonious and beautiful with people, so that the world will appear worth protecting.

The troublesome one looks more comfortable, but it's a pity that it's unfinished.