Bianxia

The author's writing is good, but his description of politics is too immature and contains very strong personal subjective emotions. Assassinating Guo Jing at the beginning is a bit outrageous. Guo Jing is just a small person. This is equivalent to wanting to exchange a handsome man for a pawn. Looking at the background at the time, the entire Bian Kyoto was in panic of the enemy attack, and everyone wanted to pray to gods and Buddhas in exchange for peace, so even if Guo Jing was not there, Li Jing and Zhang Jing would appear. I don't have a clear understanding of the so-called treacherous ministers and loyal ministers. I feel disgusted when I see treacherous ministers such as Qin Hui, and I feel heartbroken when I meet loyal ministers in history. The ministers under Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty were the famous ministers of Lingyan Pavilion. In the Song Dynasty, they were a bunch of sycophants, the four traitorous ministers, and more than 20 traitorous ministers. Loyalty or traitor always depends on the emperor's employment. Qin Hui repeatedly opposed the cession of territory and sued for peace in the early stage. Did Yue Fei really want to be killed by Qin Hui? Ancient history always liked to pick out the emperor and then push someone to take the blame. Cai Jing was also a treacherous minister. He imitated Wang Anshi in the early stage and wanted to change the law to become stronger. He was deposed halfway through the reform, and then fell into disarray. At the age of 78, he lost his eyesight and was pulled out to be the prime minister. Under such an emperor, not to mention Cai Jing, Zhang Juzheng and Yu Qian had to become treacherous ministers.

No, brother, more than 500,000 words have not been signed yet? Your perseverance👍👍

Ah, there is not a single post. The author has been single for so long, it shouldn't be.

It's actually quite well written. After reading more than 50 chapters, the only bad thing is the part where the protagonist flirts with women. It's too awkward. A common problem with Qidian. Com. Is it because most Qidian writers are otakus?

The writing is okay, at least you put your heart into it. It is a comfort to read your words after a hard day, but you have to pay attention to the rhythm. The anti-gold curtain should be opened after about 1 million words. There are also some small shortcomings that are difficult for readers to discover without mentioning them. For example, the characters are too idealistic, there are too few people driven by interests, and conflicts are not sharply expressed. At a very late point, I remember it was around 400,000 words, before the blood started to show. In short, these are common mistakes of some novice authors.

Being able to write half a million words shows that you love words👍

I read Chapter 20. The material selection is actually very good, but the content is too trivial and intellectually depressing.

If you don't have a fan base, you can choose themes from the late Ming Dynasty, which are more popular, have longer names, and name the theme. Even if no one is willing to come in and read your name, the writing is okay. Just spend more time to conceive the plot.

After only watching the first part, I feel that the protagonist looks a bit like Liu Bei.

The writing is so good, I don't know why the single volume is 500,000 words. It stands to reason that the writing of this book is not bad, and the pacing is also well controlled.

Politics is so childish and conjecture. Politics is not about treating guests to dinner. After finally leaving the capital and then coming back, the author, you think, treating guests to dinner is rubbish novel and fantasy.

After reading the first five chapters, 12 recommendation votes were sealed

I want to ask if this book can speak like an adult, love Qing, or something like that.

It feels so familiar, Zhao Zhen. I seem to have seen the same protagonist in the novel before 🙂

The book is good, but maybe the reason why few people read it is because of the name, which is a bit too profound.

Faster pace. Revise it again, and then you can invest in it. Of course, if you don't rely on this to make a living, you won't need it. The content is fine, but it's too slow.

The writing is too detailed, don't feel bad. After dozens of pictures, you are almost ascending to the throne. You, the protagonist in more than a hundred pictures, have not done much.

Brother, I suggest you change the title of your book. It's hard to find the name.

Not even a cover? ? ? ? ? Who is watching 😅

The quality of this book is no worse than some books on the shelves, but it is a pity that it has no traffic and is not very popular. Waugh had a way to get the book to a wider audience. Wo Wei: CCJCCJ129

What bullshit novel? I don't know what to write in more than half a million words.

There is a reason why he is not popular. Although he can do it, he said at the beginning that he was out of town for more than 50 chapters, but ended up being 180 and still in town. It made me understand that the author is a fluent character.

Looking forward to today's update😁

I feel very good, keep up the good work

I haven't finished the first one yet, so I give it a 2 recommendation.