There Are Too Many Speed Bumps in the Evil World

I have finished reading the eighteen updated chapters and leave a book review Judging from the previous book, the author still has many advantages. Excluding a large number of bad jokes that will not only fill you up but even make you vomit... He has a clear outline, and his mood and updates are very stable when writing the book. The result is that the story of the entire book will be very complete, and the setting and world view have been designed and unfolded step by step So in fact, to be honest, his book is relatively suitable for reading with your brain. In terms of writing skills, he can write stories, and the dialogues, battles, and wits are all good, and the emotional expression that follows the plot can really move me. Although the big scenes are not very rich, the perspective only from the protagonist group is still very complete. Therefore, his story will appear to be a linear narrative based entirely on the protagonist group. The entire world outside the field of vision is relatively static, but this does not prevent him from fully presenting the story he designed to you. In terms of character creation, the two protagonists who correspond to reality are very soulful, but judging from other characters, the author's ability in this aspect is relatively weak. The life cycle of supporting characters is very short, so the characters tend to be flat. After the relevant plot is over, the sense of existence returns to zero and gives way to the main plot. The author especially doesn't write female characters without a plot. What he comes up with are all five wisdoms, big and small. Excluding objective analysis, just speaking from my personal subjective opinion, there are no logical problems in this book. I enjoyed reading it, and it was both exciting and touching. In summary, there is no reason not to like and support it. Okay, this is enough for new readers, because next I will ruthlessly talk about some of the problems I see in this book: 1. The opening is difficult to swallow. In the world that the two brothers entered together in the previous book, the Sani Tower is responsible for carrying the readers' rationality, restraining the development of the story, and giving the readers a sense of safety and comfort; Rusalka is responsible for providing fun throughout the whole life, and Zaiqiang is responsible for cutting through, so that the conflicts in the plot can be resolved physically. What about this book? The narrative structure of the opening chapter has changed. Leziwanqiangren does not see his brothers for the first five chapters. This period of time is the ultimate torture for readers. I think this is also the reason why some book reviews directly concluded that this book cannot be read with brains. In addition, the shaping of the heroine also had side effects. Although the cat also appears at the beginning, she is equivalent to a part of the things the protagonist group encounters during their adventures in another world, and their mystery is gradually explored. But the heroine here is thrown next to the man who is having sex, and she is given too much first-person perspective, making the reader know her too well. Then readers will become more curious about her affairs and expect her to interact with things, but this is not within the author's plan. So the summary at the beginning is that the reader's sanity anchor is not there, and the reader can only watch with fear as the fun goes crazy. The other protagonist next to him obviously gave the protagonist a lot of information, but inexplicably acted like an NPC and did not respond or interact. He followed the whole scene like a new member of the team but didn't say a few words in total. You can only hear him saying "Then I'll join you" and throwing dice in the battle round. The reading experience can be said to be very poor. 2. The protagonist group lacks personal charm To put it simply, the attributes, settings, and division of labor are basically the same as their father, Uemoto's protagonist group, but with the addition of a young good brother. This makes them relatively similar and reduces their personal charm. After all, Shang Ben is a social person, and Sani Tower has more of a sense of detachment. When the two of them are plotting, he can give people a sense of certainty that all the agencies have been figured out and things are under control. No matter how much Rusalka wanders, he will not exceed the expected range. If something really happens, he will definitely be obedient. If necessary, he will even include Rusalka. But there is definitely no way for the little brothers to be so clear-cut. In fact, the rational nature of this book cannot suppress the chaotic fun part. 3. The world view is not consistent enough This is not sure, it may be controversial In recent years, this world view with low magic and low martial arts, full of weirdness, and having to pay a heavy price to gain power has become very popular. But I think the key point of this kind of game is to have a B style. It has to look miserable and handsome, and it has to be heavy, dark and high-pressure to highlight the protagonist's will and hard work, and to overturn the game and escape from death. Looking at it this way, this world view is incompatible with either "excessive strength" or "fun people"...

1. Coming from the pigeon nest next door, the last book had good results and was completed 2. The highlights of this book are only bad jokes (continuing the style of the previous book) -Wonderful battle of wits -Delicate emotional drama -Impressive supporting characters None of the above Yes, only bad jokes! Moreover, it is a combination of a large number of bad actors, second games and hell jokes that are extremely bad. People can't help but sigh that the current novel circle has already involved people to meet the needs of this sinking market.

You come to Qidian to enlighten yourself, not to fish. In Mao, if you update once a day, I won't pick on you, because there is a waste house, Mao, and there are very few people who can update five thousand times a day. Even if there is only one chapter, I will hold my nose and admit it, and I will only say that it is a pity that there are not many updates. After all, there are only a few good books about cats, and they are gone after reading them. In most cases, readers can only wait eagerly for updates from their favorite authors. But this is the starting point. If the daily update is less than 10,000, everyone will switch to other books to read. By the time they think about it, they may not know how long the book has been on the shelves. So Yuyu, you should update more often. I don't ask you to be on the update list. Just update 10,000 times a day to retain new readers. Most readers of Qidian will not be as patient as cats, but you can't lack these to achieve enlightenment. So, come on, fish! 10,000 updates per day, platinum master.

Now that you understand everything, do you want to invite Hajixian to your family?

Five wisdoms, bad ideas, excessive strength, the right way of our survival

The plot is too dense, and the density has affected the logical continuity when reading. The thoughts are constantly interrupted, and there is no sense of substitution. It can be seen that the writing is good, and this kind of narrative method should have some strength. But this book is already filled with jokes just for the sake of making jokes. Some of them are quite unpopular, which affects the perception of the book. The performance of the book should not be like this.

At first glance, this system is run by Rusalka herself. Is the father the system for his son? That's a bad joke 🙂

Have you ever used a wheelchair? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

I am a bad meme😡I am a bad meme😡I am a bad meme😡 Without the bad meme, I can't tell who is Yuyu's son and who is Teacher Sa's son

Provincial, the ending is that Teresa kills Hammurabi, the five wise men die with her, and Hammurabi wins by resurrecting the two of them. Teresa accidentally reincarnated into a world and finally met the new Five Wisdom Hope.

It's a very threshold book. If you don't understand this "circle", don't read it. Thank you for not reading it at all!

Chapter 1: 285 points. The number of points to break through the upper limit is not mentioned.

Can we call it the second generation of Fishman?

Why can't I even understand the introduction? What is this book about?

It's Sky Striker Reiyi, but she's forming the Tear Legion. Tell me, is it a spy sent by Yi Shihuan?😡

Brother, how did you get to the starting point? Your original writing is okay, but is it so difficult to mix it up?

Did he fail to prove his truth after all?

The chapters in the past two weeks have felt wrong, they are all just a running account. There are not ten lines of interesting content in one chapter. I thought the author was in a bad state recently, but it turned out that he was a eunuch. It's better to pause the update and finish it later. I really want to prove myself and write something in-depth, but the bad meme genre itself is not suitable for dark and dark content. Wouldn't it be better to just write a light-hearted story? I don't quite understand. It was disgusting when Maomao died, so why bother? Best wishes, I don't like this treatment.

The storyline and characters are exactly the same. Just make some bus jokes. I copied the whole plot. Should I read the book or watch the bus video?

Damn it, when I saw the first picture, I wanted to know who the author was. Where did this dice come from? You are the devil from outside the realm! 👊🏻

Then the author's last book can be included in my top three. They are: Will the Beast-Eared Girl encounter Rancho Story? Is this still Warhammer? And the author's last book, Where Did You Roll the Dice for Me? I haven't read much of this book and I feel it's a bit confusing.

But it's reasonable. After all, my thinking is messed up.

I haven't seen it for a long time, I didn't expect it to be gone.

Where else can I read such a wonderful novel? Please recommend it, please~ (ps: I have updated to the latest chapter~)

If I don't have Toyo's ass, I'll

Still chopped! 🐱's Ma Niang really doesn't update anymore?

What game did the author write about?

I didn't understand this introduction 😂😂😂

Mouth... Epilepsy! ... Support first~

It's the same routine as the previous book, and I have no desire to read it at all.