Douluo Starts with a Sword

Over a hundred chapters, the illusion of the evil god test (not a god), I think is a highlight. Changing the characters in the book to modern times, Qian Renxue becomes the eldest lady of the group, who is at odds with her mother... A very reasonable arrangement. The subsequent endings of each character are also recognizable. Take care of Qian Renxue until she grows old, kiss her goodbye, and wake up from her dream. What's so good about Douluo fans who are not in the harem? Yes, the harem is good. Isn't it bad to write emotional scenes seriously? I think it's pretty good too. A friend of mine said that he admires online novel authors, they can create a world. Love a character seriously and create a beautiful world for her with all your heart. That's good, really good.

Jie Jie Jie, will the author refer to this original setting

First of all, Dai Mubai's behavior is considered good among the nobles. There is a high probability that the nobles will not find a commoner. In the real world, rich people change their wives frequently, and there are many women who follow them, let alone the medieval European style Douluo Continent. Therefore, if the protagonist does not have the strength of a titled Douluo, he probably will not be able to win over Dai Mubai.

It fell apart in the later stages, and the author obviously went too far. The golden triangle of strength of more than fifty titled Douluo. It goes without saying what the ingredients are, so don't waste your money.

There is no need to accept Yu Tianheng, who is already close to that good-for-nothing Yu Xiaogang. Why accept him? Be a spy?

Shui Yue'er in the game

Is the protagonist weak and afraid of getting into trouble? Why can I say such things as being merciful and forgiving? When someone with a sword spirit encounters a provocation, he does not want to go back, but masturbates to spare the other person (the author should think carefully about the word "forgiveness" and the context in which it is used, this is obviously a persuasion to others or a word for masturbation)

Reading this novel, I felt it was not a novel. Reading it feels like reading the comments in the comment area

Don't think too much that Bibi Dong has changed those Bibi Dong's second settings. Bibi Dong has undergone major changes. It can be said that Bibi Dong has done all kinds of sexy things, including being a white-eyed wolf, wanting to kill his daughter, and being in love. In short, after watching all kinds of sexy operations, I felt like vomiting.

I personally think that instead of keeping a lunatic like Bibi Dong who could rebel at any time, it would be better to kill him and replace him with Qian Renxue as the pope.

Shui Binger in the game

Qian Renxue

I haven't read much, so I'm going to give you a hundred or two sentences for comments. There are too many typos, which seriously affect reading, and there are some problems with word combinations in some places. It is recommended that the author has time to overhaul them one by one. There are many things that are not explained clearly. For example, where did the 20 gold after leaving the Holy Soul Village come from? I just became a soul master and I don't have that much savings. These should be explained briefly. Another point is that it may be because the protagonist has no money. The reason for reading the original work is that the connection is not smooth enough in many places (I don't remember it. I wanted to endure reading it at first, but I couldn't bear it anymore). It gives people a sense of abruptness and fragmentation. I still suggest that the author has time to revise each chapter. The result should be much better. The author should be a newcomer. Overall, it is okay, but there are too many flaws, which seriously affects the reading and the performance of the work. There are no big problems, but there are many small problems. That's it. Slip away, see you again by chance

Anyway, let's just chop Bibi Dong, it's the same no matter where it is.

Now there are two versions of Douluo Spirit Hall, the whitewashed version of Shura God, the Rakshasa God caused Qian Xunji, Bibi Dong, and Qian Daoliu, which affected the thoughts of Spirit Hall, and the dark version, Qian Daoliu is pedantic, Qian Xunji has a wrong mind, and Bibi Dong is a white-eyed wolf.

Don't you want to let Tang Hao cause casualties outside? Just go to Haotian Sect and drag them all to Wuhun City to pay for Tang Hao. Tang Hao would kill a hundred members of the Haotian Sect by smashing one, and let the people of the Haotian Sect force him to show up, and then kill him. If he didn't come, everyone in the world would know that he was a fool. He had to kill his heart first.

How to say it? The talent setting at the beginning is okay, but there is still a little bit of frustration. That is, there are one or two foreshadowings that talk about using amplifying soul rings to follow, and the next one comes with a ghost sword and slaps me in the face. It is frustrating. Also, there are a lot of descriptions in the middle, and what it is like. And there is also the biggest poisonous point, not to grab the fairy grass. No matter how it is set, this is a great point for Douluo, how can we not grab it.

The early stage was really good. I thought it was a rare and good product. However, in the middle stage, the author felt a little messed up in order to round out some settings. It's a pity. In fact, when writing a book, just let nature take its course. Don't be so stubborn. It's true that you like some heroines, but sometimes you have to consider whether the protagonist's personality you set will come together. When it's time to let go, don't mess around. It's a pity for the protagonist and Jiang Zhiwei in "The Lord of the World"! But she and the protagonist can't get together. They are not the right people at the wrong time. There are really some settings that should be left alone. Unless the skills are very deep, it will be chaotic.

To be honest, this book is indeed a masterpiece in terms of setting. It is slightly lacking in writing, but considering that it is the author's first book, there is nothing to worry about. However, it always feels like it looks messy, and many of the plots are also plots that have been seen in other novels. Good luck, author.

The writing and logic are actually okay, but the failure is in the settings. DNF Ghost Swordsman can be written in five books for five professions. The skills of each profession are very good. It's a mess when you mix them together. The combat power of level 58 is close to being banned. There is also the setting of the gun. It is set to be so powerful that it can kill a super Douluo like Bone Douluo. The soul master will not disappear in a hundred years. There is also a ring that kneels down to propose marriage. It really shocked me.

What I hate the most is the plot where the male protagonist is bullied by the female protagonist. It's very uncomfortable. Qian Renxue is blindfolded and not allowed to look at other women. It's really boring. It's very unpleasant to hear.

God TM Ye Lengleng, is it Ye Lingling? 😰

The main character looks silly and sweet, I can't stand it anymore

What I wrote is just a running account, nothing more than rubbish.

Has the protagonist watched the plot?

The Nether Civet is mainly Nether? Maybe it's just because of the fast-growing black guy with a martial soul like this that he has a nice name. He is so self-righteous that he covered his glasses so as not to look at other girls. He laughed to death. Not to mention how frustrating this look is. Normally, no woman would have such a request for a man right from the beginning, right? You don't have to look at the road? Or is the woman simply trying to find an excuse to kill someone, and it seems to be one of the three major delusions in life: "This girl likes me". The auxiliary theory is even more sandbags. Do you think she is stroking her? Why, there is a distance limit for auxiliary skills? Or can Ning Rongrong, whose shoulders and legs cannot resist injuries, help you resist injuries?

Like most fans, Douluo's plot in the early stage is relatively simple and well-written, but it starts to get messy in the later stage. The most speechless thing is why in today's romance novels, when you meet the parents, you will see your girlfriend forgetting your son, etc. There are also strict rules on the parents and wives, etc. It's like wholesale. Wouldn't anyone find it awkward?

What (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣ Thing, big stallion

Ye Leng (len) Leng? Isn't it Ye Ling (ling) Ling?

I wish the author's talent in book writing and creation is like the endless flow of the Yangtze River. It is also the beginning. I would like to recommend the new fairy tale novel "The Beginning with an Ax of Punishment".