I Am Reborn and Just Want to Retire

The character of the protagonist is too serious. How can a middle-aged man still be a low-level worker who has been polished? How can there be so many unnecessary emotions involved? In addition to family ties, at this age, people are dominated by their own interests. They can be cold, heartless, and dark. Even if they want to have a harem, it is normal. In short, if this kind of character is not established, you will not want to pursue it.

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The entry point and planning are very good, but it looks very boring. The protagonist doesn't seem to interact with the world at all, like playing The Sims. In the scene with the fire truck, if you are directly approached by the fire department, you will have to take an iron fist. This assessment is in the Education Bureau, which is a major political mistake for the principal. Later, he and the fire department co-produced a promotional video, and things took a 90° turn. The principal went from mismanagement to promoting our school's students' style of study and using the Internet to link functional units to promote positive energy when he knew his mistakes. This is a proper bonus. The school will actively cooperate later. The president of the university will be guaranteed to be at the bureau level and be able to mobilize a lot of resources to coordinate the development. Moreover, the protagonist is also engaged in the Internet, so he can be included in the college student entrepreneurship base. There will also be an interest-free loan. After the protagonist achieves results during Double 11, the school can have more support.

The self-pleasure situation is more serious and I have brought a lot of accounts in one go. Many people who read the book may not have watched the videos on station B and cannot understand the points. The resonance is much less. It can be deepened. Some barrage feedback and comments can also add some cool points, such as informal talks. That's it. Let's at least talk about hot topics in one issue.

I've read more than half of it, and I'm 100% convinced. I won't talk about your previous mistakes. Just one point, that share is given to your father, which is a poisonous point. It allows the old man to do something else easily. He sits in an office for you every day and takes care of things. I still haven't come across anything I don't like. There are also the New Year pictures. If you can't write well, can't you just skip it? It's just disgusting.

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After the forty years of life, there is basically no passion. It can be said that you can see clearly the warmth and coldness of the world, and see clearly the indifference of the world. Basically, you live for yourself and your family.

There is no visual sense in any of the protagonist's programs, no specific side description of any audience comments, no sense of progression, just a straightforward summary.

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There are too few comments. Is it because no one reads it? Have you tested poison?

I was too anxious, everything I did was in a hurry, and it didn't match the title of the novel, so I didn't see retirement life.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I won't talk about the writing. The biggest problem is: there is no main line, no outline, no interesting points, and it seems boring.

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The results of my book are similar to yours. It has 180,000 words now and will be on the shelves soon. How much royalties can I get in a month?

E-commerce sales of RMB 60 million, but only RMB 1 million in profit after tax deduction. Although it is 55 points with others, it is a profit of 200 to 300. I have never heard of this.

Read it in one go and tell me your opinion. 1 Internet celebrity route, there is no video of the detailed process and reaction, which looks a bit awkward 2 The career route is good, but it is too urgent and the old problem is not detailed. 3 There are too many daily routines, and there is a strong sense of dissonance with the opening chapter.

Is this why you published it with only a hundred thousand words? I just found out now that I didn't plan to write it properly if I sent it out for less than 500,000 yuan. It was all a scam to get money.

Again, there are no people in China, let alone the Koreans. .

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