Mystery Picture: Dimensionality Crisis

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I look forward to the heroine gradually becoming a scientific research boss

It's okay, but it's short. Come on, author💪

It's pretty good-looking, and the ideas are interesting. But I think it's not the heroine who solves the problem, but more the protagonist's own efforts, while the heroine is more of a pusher and a bystander. I often feel that after all these years, the heroine is no better than a native.

There are many details and rigorous logic, but the story is not that strong. For example, after reading the first volume, I wanted to know the ending of Cheng Die and why he made this choice, but it was not written at the end of the volume. Although the reasons were given, I still wanted to see the psychological process of the character when he made the choice. Only in this way can the character be truly portrayed. Nowadays, the word count of online articles is so long. If the story cannot be exciting and attract people to continue reading, the subscription rate may not be satisfactory. Just like Lord of Mysteries, the full text is so long, but many people follow it because the story is very strong. ps: It's just a sentiment, not necessarily the author's intention 😫

Does the author have any other novels?