Conferred Gods: Reborn Yang Jian, Racing All the Way

When we are reborn as Yang Jian, let's call him Yang Jian, not Lin Bufan anymore.

This author is completely using quotations indiscriminately, without any feeling, but it will only be awkward. For example, the sentence about double pupils is the road to invincibility is not coordinated at all. If you want to change it, make it smoother. For example, although double pupils are the road to invincibility, I have no fear even if I have three eyes. Another example is the changed sentence. I hold the sun and moon in my hands to pick up stars. There is no such person as me in the world. Can you change it to a god? Is it appropriate? Although there are not many gods who can hold the sun and moon and pick up stars, there are also quite a few. Do you think it is appropriate for you to become a god like this? Why don't you hold the ancient palm of heaven in your hand? There is no immortal like me in the world. Although it's a bit crazy and a bit suicidal, at least it won't be so embarrassing.

The early writing was very silly and funny, but unfortunately the part about going to Chaoge to be a national teacher shocked me quite a bit. . . The coolness is there later on, but it's not enough to be ridiculous. . . It's a bit tasteless.

If you don't get 30 pictures, you'll be charged. Isn't this a Qidian book?

All I can say to the author is that you are such an invincible parallel importer! Really capable of water

Can the heroine have Princess Long Ji? This couple has been cute for a long time!

The author writes very well, come on, come on, come on, come on

Does anyone know how much the author orders per month? I also want to write a fanfic about Yang Jian recently, but I don't know the market price

Let's just say, can we give more? It's too little.

Come on! Well written, I like to see this kind of comedy! What a pity it's so cold! 😂😂

Can the first person be directly changed to Yang Jian? It's also Lin Bufan. It's awkward to read.

If you don't get the treasured gold and the sea-defining pearl, you can get the golden dragon scissors.

If we put some ideas of later generations into the period of the ancestors, it would not be a dimensionality reduction and suppression of their thoughts and doctrines.

Keep it up, the quality continues

Author, I still hope that there will be a Howling Sky Dog. The Howling Sky Dog in the Lotus Lantern is very loyal. If you have a Howling Sky Wolf, don't delete the Howling Sky Dog. I think it's a pity that this loyal dog will meet each other by fate. Of course, it's just a talk.

More than a hundred or so pictures are not good, they don't look good, but the front ones are okay.

The author came out and said something, and I checked to see if it was a studio article! ! Not a reward