Immortality Begins with the Golden Bell

The protagonist suffers from pinkeye, and turns red whenever something happens.

The protagonist is sick, but later he gains the strength to destroy the Zhang family and becomes a holy mother.

Author, I read the protagonist you wrote, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I became, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I became.

Hao Lei. A maid used to oppress him and now he kowtows to her Now he wants to treat her as his own woman and give her medicine to cultivate her I feel so awkward and give up.

I think, since you can't kneel down, there is no need to stay, especially if you have already acquired martial arts and have the initial ability to protect yourself, it is best to run away directly. In the world of martial arts, government control is definitely not strict. If you go into the mountains or become a bandit, or go to other places to hang out, if you have family, you can fake it a little. It definitely doesn't matter if you are a servant.

What kind of rubbish is written? It's amazing to be able to read two chapters. It's Shen Nong. In order to say a sentence, I ordered one chapter. It's extremely rubbish.

The poison that leads to poison every day, you need to be cautious when entering the trap, I don't want to comment on other things.

Don't write a protagonist with such a sympathetic character in your next book.

The first three chapters are very well written and have a lot of flavour. The more they are written, the worse they get. By the 30th chapter, it seems like someone has changed. I won't say more. You can see for yourselves.

The protagonist's mentality is so bad that he is worse than ordinary people. It's all thanks to golden fingers. I can't write a thread about this kind of rubbish.

General-purpose novels, a very common type is to travel through time and become a slave. With plug-ins, they are very useful even if they are said to be useful, and they are useless even if they are said to be useless. What is useful is that without the plug-ins, you cannot practice martial arts at all. If you say it is useful, you can practice martial arts. If you should practice for decades, you will still practice for decades. If you should be defeated, you will still be unable to defeat. Mainly Kakuzu is rubbish. The only great thing is that God (the author) has taken care of him. If he wants to practice martial arts, someone with a sick mind will come to teach him. If he wants to make money, he can immediately get a universal copy. All in all, it is a very ordinary novel. The only thing that is not ordinary is that it is worse than ordinary novels!

To be honest, I feel uncomfortable watching it. The logic is also inconsistent. For example, if you kill someone for money the first time, you should at least fight back when someone intercepts you on the road. The second time when he was robbing money, he saved someone and asked for money in the name of saving someone. Moreover, when I rescued people for the second time, the logic was inconsistent. Why would a woman go to the wilderness with dozens of taels of silver?

The author's writing is good, but the description and conception of the characters feel a bit immature. He wanted to write a heroic spirit but ended up with a character who lacked IQ. This is a problem. I would like to give you some advice to the author. Don't be angry. I recommend you to read this book. The protagonist in it is portrayed very well, he is reckless but not stupid, rough but delicate, heroic but also a little bit arrogant. Anyway, the author has a lot of room for improvement, and I hope his writing will get better and better. Finally, I hope that the protagonist will take the route of a fierce general, instead of using a sword and use a heavy weapon (Changsu, Fang Tianhua halberd, saber, mace, mace will also work) 👍 Come on 😊.

The fight is so grueling. Others are pushing horizontally. I wish I could fight for 300 rounds.

The protagonist can't do it! I especially like to do small tricks, but the key is that I have no strength. Although it seems to be a very ferocious life crawling at the bottom, the life at the bottom is only its appearance and not the real thing. It cannot describe the suffocating life of the real bottom. Life at the bottom can never be separated from two things, women and money.

Nothing else but the golden bell? There are dozens if not hundreds of such books. Annoying just looking at it

Author, could the protagonist not use a sword? 9 Out of 10 people use a sword. This makes me sick. Replace it with a mace, a machete, or a Miao sword, but don't use a sword.

This thing I wrote is like a foot wrap

Why don't you learn other martial arts, just a golden bell meat bun?

Tomorrow is 520. Judging from the author's writing style, he is just a single guy. Why not write more chapters?

The routine is serious, lack of money, rob, buy medicine, upgrade, and then do it again... Boring

Just a golden bell, if you don't learn anything else, isn't this a meat bag?🙂🙂🙂

Author, you update one chapter every day, do you think it's okay?

Use the black-and-white routine twice? Seriously?