An Otherworldly Adventurer in Teyvat

You said that hatred cannot be forgotten in a thousand years, provided that the people in this family do not continue to cause trouble in this thousand years, but with the unrepentant and persistent trouble in the game, directly betraying Mondstadt's defense map, collaborating with the enemy and treason, I think they will not be forgotten even in the next thousand years.

How should I put it, this plot is constantly cut and confused, one world jumps to another world at the beginning, and then another world opens in another world. I don't understand what the author is doing. Is it a matryoshka doll? Can you write well? Can you come one by one? First it was time travel, then it was projection, and then it was a clone. The clone was transforming. It was such a mess that it made my head hurt. In Teyvat, which I originally thought was good, is obviously not bad at writing. The second world is also okay. But the more I write, the more crooked it is, reaching the sky. I just hope that when the protagonist travels through the world, he can first complete the things in that world, describe the process, gain gains, complete the summary, and then switch to the world when it is completed or halfway done. Instead of just writing the beginning, jumping to another world, and then repeating it.

The flow of heavens with the original god as the main body. I can accept those two designs. After all, there are many things in Genshin Impact's worldview that are not smooth enough. There are two main points - One is that there are too many typos. An old man picked out most of them, but I saw that there are still some missing ones, and the author has corrected only a handful of them. The other is that there are too many explanations in the main text. It is not necessary for every decision of the protagonist to be followed by an explanation, and the explanation should not be a few paragraphs long. 😨It ruined the reading immersion several times in a row, and the plot progressed slowly and was suspicious of hydrology. Although many people say: "What's wrong with the free chapters?" But the problem is that the free chapters are so good, what's the point of charging money based on the number of words later? ? 😓

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I didn't want to chase anymore, so I hit him with a hammer and a stick. First, Shuangcheng wrote a little bit, and then suddenly ran away from Hokage. Naruto wrote a little bit, and then suddenly ran away from one person. . . I can't imagine how many more worlds there are in the future. The key is that I haven't finished any of them. I just suddenly ran into another world without any warning.

As far as Zhutianliu novels are concerned, I can read it, but it is very messy. After chapter 170, I can only talk about fun. For Genshin Impact fans, they are just selling dog meat in sheep's clothing, and they will soon have nothing to do with Genshin Impact. There are more than 200 photos of Genshin Impact that don't even have ten chapters!

It is similar to Xiao Yiren next door In order to prevent being invincible too quickly, the next door has added several restrictions. In the later stage, the settings are too many to remember It is similar here, paving the way for each world to suppress the combat power, and then just paving the way, you will not take a step, where is the infrastructure No matter how hard you press, this is a spring. It will rebound when it hits the bottom. It's not like eating a handful of melon seeds in one breath. How can you eat them without taking them out? Just realized, how did you write a person into a chat group I won't go into details. I don't know how to change it, but it feels easy to collapse.

Stop jumping around the world, write more about Teyvat. This is just a title. The previous few worlds have been jumping around the world without much development. This kind of writing is a waste of time.

Is there anyone who can read this book? Now I see Naruto, One Piece, Marvel and these three things and I feel a little panicked. Can I read this book carefully? 😳