Douluo: I Am Not Dai Yuhao

The plot design is too focused on cultivation, and occasionally uses female characters to adjust. There is no battle, adventure, and enjoyment of exploration to enrich the daily and fantasy worldviews. There is a lack of rhythmic tension and conflict climax to bring growth and change to the character arc. It's time to go outside to open maps, fight monsters, collect resources, make new friends, and show off. The protagonist is too mature in Rebirth and lacks the high-spiritedness of a teenager. The character interactions are also shallow and the emotional level is slightly depressed. Because the timeline jumps too quickly, the charm of the characters has not been revealed through more events, making it difficult for young readers to empathize with it. Sure enough, we still need a soul from Tianmeng whom we have known for thousands of years to chat and liven up the atmosphere.

Little Huo Niang

Very well written. The protagonist has clear goals, focuses on practice, and does not hold back on petty sentiments. The content is detailed and appropriate, and the writing is smooth and interesting. I have a question. The protagonist's Eye of Destiny and the center of the God Realm merge into a silver flowing cloud pattern, which is reborn with the soul. The third martial soul exists as the origin of the soul and can still use undead magic. The second ice martial soul comes from Tianmeng + Ice Emperor base. It is understandable that the soul is gone. Is the first martial soul just an ordinary spiritual eye martial soul (which must be awakened step by step for the second time), rather than the god-level martial soul Shura Pupil because the main body is not enough to support the temporary return to the initial form, and can be completely liberated as long as it grows to a sufficient stage?

It is very important to follow up on the new book issue. Please mark the last chapter and the last page of the book, please.

Huo Yuhao didn't have the ability to bite his master, let alone dare to confront Tang San.

Can I finish the book directly and receive an investment reward?

The introduction seems to be a parody of Don't Confiscate My Registration. I don't know if the direction is similar.

Little Huo Niang

Little Huo Niang

Damn it, how long have you been gagging? I already left the group, but then I found that you updated

Some authors of Shan Hai Jue Hai may refer to The Turbulent Waves by Yang Guo, the Divine Condor.

Bibi Dong

It's okay, just a normal practice article, a bit monotonous, but not too poisonous

There is also a shortage of books😭

It's not bad, but the apprentice and the heroine are a bit toxic. It would be understandable if you were just coveting Bibi Dong's status and resources as a disciple. The heroines Qian Renxue and Hu Liena. It's not that they are not good-looking, but I feel that Huo Yuhao should love Wang Qiu'er or Wang Dong'er more.