Douluo's Guangling

There's a lot of nonsense, and it's too belittling the Guangling Divine Bow Martial Spirit. It's too nonsense.

It feels a bit overwhelming! ! ! Really, you already have so many helpers, why are you going to Gengjin City? The Pope can just take it, and those elders can take the Ice and Fire Eyes, a mallet, and a sweet date! ! ! Ink stains! ! !

It's all nonsense and the writing style needs to be improved.

What he said was too poisonous, and completely inconsistent with the original character 😅

It was fine in the beginning, but when it came to the action part, it was awkward and low.

It cannot be maintained. If it is maintained, the author will have no motivation and what will happen if it ends unfinished.

The heroine Qian Renxue and the author are preparing for a grandson-grandfather relationship?

🙂 What the author wrote is more or less difficult to describe in one sentence At the beginning, there is a chapter in which he said that the time traveler disliked Guang Ling for wearing boots. I just want to tell you who have traveled through time, why do you have to dislike him for wearing a pair of boots? He obviously looks good in boots. If you dislike him, why do you want to wear them in his body? When I started reading, I also looked at the male and female protagonists. You won't know if you don't see it, but you will be shocked when you see it. Guang Ling and Qian Renxue. Should you say it or not, there is something wrong with your choice of male and female lead. Guangling is over ninety years old. They are several dozen years apart, and the male protagonist can almost become the heroine's grandfather. What do you think of your writing style? I can read it, but I don't recommend it. I'm a fan of Guang Ling. You said at the beginning that a person traveled through time into Guang Ling's body. It's over, the time traveler still dislikes Guang Ling. You more or less make me unhappy. After reading the beginning, I had no desire to continue reading. I even kind of hate this book. I suggest the author change the male and female protagonist. And that person who time-traveled, don't time-travel, he's in the body of Light Wings. You'd better time travel into the body of a passerby