Era: Retired from the Army at the Beginning and Returned Home

Author, I think the novels you wrote in this era are quite interesting, but I hope you will pay attention to the sensitive content and avoid being blocked. Personally I think this novel is quite good, it's a pity that it has been blocked!

It's not good-looking, and there's no logic at all. I'm also a post-2000 generation. I'm very aware of these 60s and 70s. I also cherish food and won't litter. This novel is a bit toxic.

The book is good to read, but there is too much water

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It can be seen that the author is a novice, but can you clarify some issues? What you write should be understood by everyone, instead of others understanding it and continuing to talk about it. Also, you have to read more related books before writing. It has just been opened not long ago, and you can still adjust it. If you don't change it, it will all be like this. Everyone knows that, what, what, what you are doing, writing a novel is not a review, you can't do that, and it is not related to politics. I am very confused.

Why do I look so awkward, as if people from the city insist that I live in the mountains. And the setting is unreasonable. People who were soldiers in that era were discharged and said it was difficult to walk. So what are you wearing? ? ? Then you didn't train when you were a soldier? Lying down and eating nothing every day?

This type of period articles are very interesting, but most of the period articles that I have searched for are about the Siheyuan, and they are very violent. I would like to recommend a few similar ones. In addition, the author should take his time, come on.

Can anyone read this book? The first chapter left a deep impression on me. In 1961, cans of rice-treasure porridge were thrown away casually and were picked up by others. He also said that the protagonist is a good person and would laugh if he didn't report him back. The same goes for instant noodles later. Is the taste of instant noodles something ordinary families can produce? In an era when spying was the most stringent, it would be strange if you were not reported.

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The Absurdity of Water After reading Chapter 66, it seemed like six or seven days had passed. After being discharged from the army, he went back for two days, looked for a job for one day, went to the city for two days, returned for two days, and went to work for another two days. He wrote 66 chapters.

Oh my god

In chapter 70, the book is already over. It's brainless, it makes mistakes, it doesn't understand the situation of the times, and it's over after the punishment? Impossible, he will definitely die in 1966. There is no need to read later. The author has already written that the protagonist will die before 1966.

I've only read a few chapters and I'm a little speechless. In the 1960s, if you were canning some special food, you might be arrested as an enemy agent 😂😂, you can't imagine it if you haven't experienced that era.

Abandon the pit, holy bitch, raising the whole family is not counted, but starting to raise the whole village, and using public resources to produce thousands of yuan of feed, it must be misappropriated by the farmers, the feed and feed are gone, and the livestock and livestock are stolen or eaten by their own people. In the 1950s, if you don't shoot someone, let's see how you can get through it.

1. There are many typos, and the author's verbose writing style makes the reading experience not very good; 2. There are too many words in each paragraph, which makes people feel very depressed and has a poor sense of substitution; 3. What is the theme that the author wants to express? No writing outline?

You put poison in the beginning. How dare you take out the barreled instant noodles in 1961 and share them with each other? You are so awesome

I died from poison after seeing Chapter 80! I really can't stand it anymore, it's so long-winded, it's only been four days since I've gone through thirty chapters, and there are explanations everywhere! There is obviously a golden finger, but there is no sense of existence at all. Every point needs to be explained in detail for a long time. Readers don't need to be so careful. Everyone has read a lot of novels of this era and has a general understanding. Obviously, these can be passed by in general. It mainly talks about some things that happened to the protagonist. What is the use of arranging gold fingers? The result is a lot of nonsense! I can't bear to watch it anymore. What's the point of arranging golden fingers? Even the details are not so verbose. Now that I see it, I feel that the protagonist is incompetent, has no temper, and has no brains. The whole one and three have no product!

I have read about 10 chapters. The main character has always been like a retard. I really can't stand it. I am speechless. This novel can be considered a high-quality one. I am speechless.

When you read this book, you will find that the thief is frustrated, the protagonist is careless, and he still has no sense of age after being reborn for so long. (Many trivial matters can be solved with just one mouth, but forget or do not understand common sense, which leads to various contradictory plots.) He is obviously a great engineer, but he lives like a roadside aunt who can step on him. He has not followed up to retaliate, and all the weaklings can bully him without fear of retaliation. The most outrageous thing is that this book contains a lot of narration and popular science, with very few dialogues. .

It's very, very wordy, and the plot accounts for less than 20%. It's probably like this, introduce, introduce, introduce again, take something, I can write half a chapter, why can't I take it here, what-what system, what-what-what, so-and-so department and so-and-so department, in the morning so-and-so year, because of something, how it was at that time, so this rule was made. Put down the one on your hand and take the one on your right. The things are the same, but this is a rule, what the fuck,

The writing is okay, but the main character's family is really disgusting to me. My family is so skinny that they keep giving away food to outsiders in the village. My sister only dares to eat one packet of peanuts, and she entertains outsiders for free.

There are a lot of seventy chapters, but there is no content. I was discharged from the army and returned home, local reports, assessment and grading, and then the target struck, so I wrote the beginning. Writing so many chapters with such a small amount of content makes the plot a bit incoherent!

The author is capable, but he just didn't catch up with the good times. If he had signed the buyout contract back then, this update would have pulled out the wool 👍

The first three chapters of the book are written to attract readers. You made the protagonist very stupid, but it was still successful. You used the protagonist's stupidity to attract some readers, including me. Then the first ten chapters are used to retain readers. Do you want to read the first ten chapters you wrote from the perspective of a reader? I can understand that you want to write about a post-2000 generation who just left school, and did not understand the hardships of that era. I thought that after the first three chapters, the protagonist saw the hardships at home, with a bare family, lack of food and clothing, and could change. As a result, in chapters 4-10, you directly gave him water, and even chapters 8 and 9, the whole two chapters were written about the protagonist sleeping. You said that you are from that era. You can obviously write a slightly mature and intelligent protagonist, but you can't write a stupid post-00s who does not understand history and the times. Are you screening readers? You succeeded. First of all, you screened out the readers who were born after 2000. After all, you wrote about the people born in 2000 who were so stupid. Secondly, you also screened out most of the readers. After all, the protagonist you wrote was too unbearable.

This novelist is still a masterpiece. But when I think about the current novels, they are so brainless.

When you come back from the army, you share all the money you spent on food with a large group of relatives. It's really unpleasant to write like this at the beginning.

It's extremely long-winded and just shows off the suffering, for fear that others won't understand. After reading dozens of chapters, I found that it was almost the same as not having read it at all.

Aren't you afraid of being shot if you give instant noodles to others? At that time, only Taiwanese instant noodles had meat sauce buns.

See Chapter 14. The author said that soybeans are a coarse grain 😰 At that time, soybeans and mung beans were sold at 20 per month. They are all available to people of a certain level.

It's written in a very awkward way, and the legs look like pigs.