Passionate Youth

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Initial impression: This is a book that directly points out the ownership of a system, and it is also a book that made me curious because of its introduction. After reading the novel, I found my interest in reading books again, and I regretted that I almost missed a copy of Xiancao. Work information:[Soul Passing Through][System Space][Inspirational Era] Story Overview: If you were suddenly brought back to that special era, and when you were suddenly glad that you had the system, would you keep at it step by step, or would you let go? Jiang Ping'an wisely chose the former. In the face of poverty and people's hearts, he always maintained an honest appearance, but in private, he quietly planned the future through the system until he welcomed the trend of the times. This is the story of Jiang Pingan, a passionate story of years. After reading: This is a time-traveling novel. It is different from the cool novel about starting a career after going back. It chooses that special era. Facing the known history and unknown life, Jiang Ping'an travels between neighbors while planning the future through the system. Although there are many logical bugs in the whole novel, in fact, after reading the whole novel, I personally feel that compared to the refreshing novels with obvious lines, it has a bit more life, or a bit more popularity. The protagonist is no longer a person from God's perspective, but a young man with a certain vision but who has to run for life. The supporting characters are no longer harmonious and friendly tool men and fellow villagers in the background. Instead, they all have their own little thoughts and calculations. Although the author didn't describe much about the supporting characters, through just those few descriptions, I seemed to hear the voices of the little people in that era, and I seemed to be reminded of my life when I read rural novels. What I have to say is that although the author does not write too much about love, it always reminds me of the time when I read rural novels when I was young. Therefore, I personally hope that the author will not directly write a rural novel in the next book, so that readers can feel refreshed and enjoy themselves. Of course, after all, the works on this subject are actually poorly written, but perhaps it is precisely because the author captured the fragrance that I always admire the author for bringing the characters to life when reading. It can even be said that it is this close-to-life writing style that makes this book stand out and eventually be seen by more people. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

The author is really awesome, I don't know what the three methods of his work are, but it is full of flavor. Awesome. I used to think that Chicken

Please write more words. The last book was only 1.54 Million words. This one should be 3 million words.

Concept map of the heroine

Concept map of the heroine

If the elder brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the younger brother like this? It seems that the younger brother is being sentimental. The older brother is weak and needs more rest. The younger brother urges the elder brother like this, but it seems that the younger brother is not considerate of the older brother. Injuring the elder brother's body also makes the younger brother feel distressed. Unfortunately, whether the elder brother is injured or not has anything to do with the younger brother? Finally, the younger brother wanted to ask his elder brother, does he want to update more?

Why do I feel like I'm going to collapse after writing this book? It's a bit too homogenous with this book, and the author is probably being talked down by the editor, so many small articles about driving are afraid to describe it 🙂, after all, the last book took off so well. I was quite looking forward to the story of Ordinary World at the beginning, but it ended in just a few paragraphs. (Is there any restriction on the platform?) Then the timeline jumped another twenty years, and I jumped to subscribe to the next dozens of chapters. Some chapters just took a look at the titles and I didn't want to read them. I knew that some things were difficult to write in that era, but it was only over 600,000 words. I seemed to have no patience. I took out the outline and was about to end it hastily. Isn't it really a eunuch? 😐

It's obvious that the author doesn't know what to write. It's too similar to the previous book and it's hard to come up with new ideas. I suggest starting a new book with the background set in the Republic of China. Starting from life, with cheats, the plot can be richer and there is more excitement to write.

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This thing has been written all the way to Siheyuan. Now that the author who has left Liangjian and Siheyuan can't write a book? I vomited at the sight

This was an absolute masterpiece of literature in its early days, but now it suddenly becomes a bit decadent. Authors, you should know that familiar characters in fan fiction do not need to be deliberately portrayed, but in this pseudo-fan fiction, many non-fan fiction heroines need to focus on writing when characterizing. Why I say it was good-looking in the early stage is because the first little widow was really wonderful and down-to-earth, but the current heroines, especially Guo Yan as the wife, have too single characters, lack unique personal charm, and have too few depictions. One more small suggestion, while maintaining the educational characteristics of Cao Thief's novel, this article must add a little more to the excitement of the non-color plot. This is why this stage is a bit weak, whether it is the promotion of the protagonist, using space to get supplies, or even getting some special colors to pay for the current situation, otherwise it will be difficult to break through this bottleneck period. It's a pity that this work has the qualifications to become a god.

The author may find that he can't control fantasy, so he comes back again

Come to water Come to cheat Come to sneak attack

I feel that this novel is a bit different from the author's previous novel. Although there were many female protagonists in the early part of the previous novel, they all maintained a good balance. The main character in this book is completely unable to walk around when he sees a woman, and he can agree to any request 😰 without even using his brain.

Tian Shu describes so much, but ends up giving it away to others without even drinking it. I really don't know what the point of describing it is, just to highlight the protagonist's modesty and caution?

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Brother Your new book means nothing What's wrong with you At least tell me what's going on.

The more I write, the more restrained I get. I go to the kang and do some exercise. It's hard to write. This is starting to put a curse on Lao Cao. There are fewer and fewer people commenting.

Why bother with a small village in China when the space is set up to be so awesome? Isn't it better to run hk directly and take the international route? Isn't it wonderful to take advantage of the underdeveloped technology at that time to fill space with precious metals?

Hurry up and open the next book Change the subject Otherwise the LSPs gathered by your name will be almost scattered Even if you say that one trick is popular all over the world, you can't really just write it again and again Aesthetic fatigue can't be tolerated 🙂

Damn it, what's going on with Lao Cao? Open a new book and cut each one. Are you going to live in the palace and not come out?

Everyone knows that Cao Cao is a person, Cao Cao is a spirit, and the spiritual inheritance will never die, so when will a new book be published?

Jiang Ping'an plays with the women and their order in (love-filled courtyard + iron rice and iron + silly spring + golden wedding + roots in the imperial city + little girl under the Zhengyang Gate + flaming years + home-cooked food + bloody romance)

There is a huge gap between this book and the previous book. The logic of the previous book is really reasonable, but the main character is too perverted. I have to say that the author's use of space is really rigorous.

Devastated? Open a new book,

When will the new book be released🙂

Just for Mr. Cao!

Write a story about summoning soldiers to engage in the Golden Triangle

Where is your final winner? Completely gone? Maybe because I touched mother and daughter?