Honghuang, the First Person Under Jie Jiao's Sect

First of all, the plot is boring and full of nonsense, and the foreshadowing is okay. The key point is that the foreshadowing is too messy. Secondly, the description of the characters' expressions is too messy, making it difficult to watch. Finally, one word is so messed up that I can't stand it.

This book has chosen the wrong time travel vehicle. If you choose Lu Yue, you might as well create an original character! Anyone who has read Honghuang novels knows that Lu Yue is an unpleasant villain who plays with the plague! After reading the introduction, half of the people are not interested in reading the main text! Moreover, Lu Yue is not a core disciple in Jiejiao. He is neither a direct descendant of the inner sect nor one of the Seven Immortals. He is a character with a weak sense of existence. He really has no advantage in writing a fanfic. Not to mention that as a human race, using walking plague as a training method and his villain attributes are not lovable! After all, those who read your novels must be human beings. Except for a few people with extreme personalities, no book club would think that a practitioner like Lu Yue is a positive character! There is a saying called preconception, that is, a person's first impression is very important! Therefore, you must be careful when choosing a protagonist template. The protagonist does not necessarily have to be a good person, but it is best not to choose a recognized villain!

His strength is zero, not as good as the sage Baidu Encyclopedia. Lu Yue himself doesn't devour the time traveler, so he doesn't agree with it very much.

Poisoning people will not pay for their lives, so I persisted in reading twelve chapters.

I have to say something, this introduction is to persuade me to quit, as it is written in the book, I will throw myself into the street

The update speed is too slow, not to mention that based on the few chapters written here, the writing is not outstanding: the background and foreshadowing are redundant (a little too much nonsense), the plot is dull, the contradictions are not obvious, the conflict is lacking, the sense of substitution is not good, and there is no refreshing point. The author must at least increase the amount of updates. Not to mention three or five chapters a day, at least two chapters. Otherwise, it is unreasonable for the update speed to be popular. Even if you join V, it is the fate of a eunuch.

The aura of the protagonist is too heavy. He had so many magic weapons when he was not a disciple at the beginning, and he could do things like formations at will. It was too fake.

The protagonist wants to make a big pot of rice in the ancient times. Instead of seeing the superiority of the protagonist, he cultivates his teammates. , The amazing growth of teammates makes the protagonist's ordinary characteristics make the book fade.

Rubbish book, when did the artifact come out?

After reading several chapters, where are you concerned?

After reading three chapters, there are too many dark and cold scenes.

The introduction successfully persuaded you to quit. It's better to stop writing books and go to the factory to drive screws.

It is really a set of ordinary people. All kinds of conspiracies.