Shrouding the Heavens: Starting with the Ruthless Great Emperor

I found that many readers compared the later version of The Cruel Emperor with the earlier version! This is unfair. Then let's briefly analyze the ruthless emperor. First: The Ruthless Emperor is from a mountain village and is most likely illiterate. Even if she is given a book of peerless skills, she will not be able to understand it. Second: The body is in ruins, the veins are broken, and there is no talent for cultivation. All of these things only came to light after the initial completion of the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique. The Heaven-Swallowing Demonic Art is so successful that he is the enemy of the whole world. Third: The little girl in Zhetianli is kind and cute. She is the incarnation of the Dao Fruit of the ruthless emperor, fused with the memories of her childhood. It should also be traces of wandering around after leaving his brother. So, the ruthless person in the early stage is still a kind person. People will not become cruel and ruthless all of a sudden. They need to have enough experience to change little by little. Fourth: If she has no talent for spiritual practice and is illiterate, how did she enter spiritual practice? Here it starts with eating! Start by getting to know good, compassionate people. There are so many poor people in the world, why do others sympathize with her? Looks and personality, they should all be there! So, in order to become stronger, what will a ruthless person do in the early stage? What do you think?

To put it simply, this is the only transformation novel by the author that did not make me feel psychologically "uncomfortable" I don't know why, but I simply don't like the routine of men dressing up as women and women dressing up as men, so I have never touched those transformation stories no matter how bad the book is. At the beginning of this book, I thought that there was no such thing as gender change in ordinary time travel. I just clicked to read the article about the heroine, but when I saw the author's sudden "critical attack" that she used to be a boy, I was about to quit reading, but I found that I didn't have the same "disgust" as before, so I could continue reading So the author can be regarded as the Bai Yueguang of my transformation article 😁

The Ruthless Emperor is the most talented woman in ancient times. She has fought against heaven, earth, and people all her life. She has looked down upon the past and present. She has gone on a killing spree during her rise, and even became emperor out of her obsession to avenge her brother. But here you have created a bunch of licking dogs, and a system... And the heroine's every move is written like a female video, and there is no style of the Ruthless Emperor at all.

After reading a few chapters, it was clearly a female channel style, with a bunch of men surrounding the heroine, and the heroine felt like she wanted to take advantage of these men, as if she wanted to express how beautiful the heroine is and how much men love her. But I just want to tell you that you can't write like this when it comes to female protagonists in male videos. What readers of male videos want to see is the female protagonist's progress towards independence and self-improvement. She has the mentality of raising a daughter. It's disgusting to see a bunch of men surrounding the female protagonist, let alone the benefits. Not to mention that he is a fan of Emperor Henren. Not to mention that in the early stage, Henren was just an ordinary person and had nothing to do with being good-looking. The style of Henren that wiped out all the geniuses of his generation was even more inexpressible. I suggest you find a few popular male-driven books with female protagonists or read them before writing them. . .

I heard that the anime "Zhetian" was launched, and I immediately downloaded the Tencent video. At the beginning, I saw the ruthless emperor wearing a sexy mask, barefoot, thighs and shoulders, and the suspected powerful Yuhua Sheng main character going back and forth What the hell is ctmd?

I was already frowning when I saw the main character's life-or-death situation in the first chapter, and then I thought things would get better after the main character Nalaoshizi's brother died, but in the third chapter another big thing happened. Haven't you already created your own martial arts and lived in the mountains for six years? Why would you join the village of the first person you see? Is there any benefit? As expected, everyone in it died again in less than one chapter, and then the protagonist was on the verge of death again, which was fun to watch. This is the result of insufficient plot organization, and the characters are not ready to fight. The result is that the protagonist is a clown, and the supporting characters are also clowns.

Ever since the two men, the Holy Body and the Tao Fetus, appeared, this book has become a bunch of romance novels in which the Holy Son revolves around the protagonist.

Abuse of the main story, the routine is that the protagonist kills all the old enemies with his sword for a period of time, then new enemies appear and kill the protagonist to escape, and then the protagonist rises up again, kills the enemies with his sword, and is hunted down again.

The main character portrays the ruthless sister as a saintly Mary Sue, and countless geniuses are jealous of the main character, which is very girly. But in the world of Zhetian, the ruthless sister is the least popular.

The description of appearance and voice is too exaggerated. They are all cultivators, so the difference cannot be that big. What you wrote is like those saint sons who have never seen beauties. It is too exaggerated to still miss the beauty after just seeing it once. There are too many descriptions of appearance. I feel that 10% of the words in your book are descriptions of appearance...