The Wizard of the World of Immortality

The title and introduction of your book are quite attractive and make people want to read on, but the content is a bit off. First, the wizard has no sense of presence and is dispensable. It is just a traditional start of a fairy tale. Secondly, the protagonist lacks inner motivation. There is no reason why the protagonist practices or wants to become stronger. Finally, the overall feeling is like reading a detailed outline, not like reading a novel.

The plot of Hiring Jindanqi is too nonsense, I really don't worry about being hacked.

This golden finger is awesome, it's a "death license", why not go wilder!

It was hard to find a bloodline, and it turned out to be a power system. Whether he was a cultivator or a wizard, his image was gentle and elegant. This gorilla-like image was really unsightly. Can't he get a talent for the space system? Even a stealth talent is good, right? What's the use of a physical talent?

After reading nine chapters, you are trying to sell yourself as dog meat? I haven't seen the research and study of wizards, only cultivating immortals, or cultivating immortals without any feeling of wizards. You should at least study Qi training. If you have perfected Qi training in avatar, just consider promotion directly. Write an upgrade resource flow wizard.

Irregular plug-in resurrection will lead to unhappiness. I didn't feel happy at all after seeing about ten chapters that should have been exciting, such as successful foundation building, increased combat power, etc. It was lighter than the farming novel. Because all the gains give people the feeling of being like a running account with no emotion, no substitution, and no growth? Also no story. This is the most outrageous. In the ten or so chapters, there are basically no impressive protagonists or supporting characters, or interesting and memorable plot scenes. Maybe that's why it's boring.

I really don't understand, how are wizards compared to cultivators? When a wizard studies something, he has to put it on the dissection table, decompose it bit by bit, observe bit by bit, and do experiments bit by bit. In the end, after working hard and getting a little result, he can be proud and happy for countless years. When the cultivator of immortality sweeps away his spiritual thoughts, he directly knows that the great road is in his heart, and all the methods can be used for his own use.

Shuhuang is interesting to watch, but it's too single-player. It basically has a protagonist fighting monsters, farming and upgrading, and the supporting characters are all NPCs.

This book is actually quite good, especially the many weird ability settings. Mirage

In this novel, the magic of the wizard is not revealed at all.

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The Earth Immortal's dojo is just like a wizard's tower. The key is that people also have their own magic weapon. From an earthly immortal to a heavenly immortal dojo, he ascended into a small world. The world can still grow. Also, there are so many Witcher novels, but there is no one that completely controls one. I'm talking about the source of one thing. Except for the prehistoric novel period, his novels have no source of success. I read a lot of novels about going against the flow of time and fighting against the big guys from the ancient times.

The bloodline is still mainly pure, I don't understand why they want to fuse with mixed blood. And this mirage is a bit corny.

It's well written, but it's been a while since I updated it.

It's really interesting. Just one chapter has just been released. Do you still want to become a god?

It's a bit open, and what kind of clone it is is even less interesting. What I want to see is how the wizard system deals with cultivating immortals, not the dual cultivation of immortals and wizards.

The most powerful ones are always the immortal cultivators in the wizarding world, the magicians in the immortal cultivating world, and the warriors in the magical world.

I didn't change the name of this book, copied and pasted it, and even if I changed the loopholes in the data, the results would be ten times better than the author's, haha.