I Write Novels and Become a Saint

First impression: This is a novel that was attracted by the introduction. The novel uses the creation of novels as the entry point, which made my eyes bright. But the subsequent plot fell into cliche again. However, the overall performance is still a qualified work, and there is no doubt about this. Work information:[Soul Transcendence][Extraordinary Cultivation][Memory Golden Finger] Story Overview:Why? Why? Can anyone tell me why? ! Other people who traveled through time traveled to a world where there was nothing, but I came to a world where everything was there. This is nothing, I can accept it, but can anyone tell me why the time traveler does not have a system? ! I have no system and have traveled to a world where nothing exists. What do you want me to do? ! If I can't copy poetry, will I have to write a novel? ! Huh? Right! Write a novel! Why didn't I think of that! I am a self-media person! I'm proud! However, copying novels is not impossible, but isn't this the Tang Dynasty? ! Why do they know magic? Can anyone tell me why? ! Oh, yes, I am that unlucky guy Lin Qian, and this is my unlucky time-travel life story. After reading: This is a time-traveling and immortality novel, which belongs to the category of Confucianism and Taoism. The novel is very clever. It uses novel writing as a starting point to successfully promote the novel and solve the bugs in the setting. But from the overall plot point of view, writing novels is just an entry point. Later, the author did not stick to the end, but returned to the conventional Confucian and Taoist routines. Of course, this way of handling is not bad, but for combat, this kind of behavior can easily have a bad impact on readers, unless the author can write wonderful Confucianism and Taoism. Personally, I think there is nothing wrong with the novel's handling of it this way. At least the current plot is still very attractive. As for the characters, many readers feel that their personalities are inconsistent with what they are doing. In my opinion, it's not that serious, it's just a common sense bug. But after all, this is the author's story. As long as everything conforms to the logic of the author's story, it won't be a big problem. However, I would like to remind the author that he hopes that when writing a book in the future, he will try his best to deal with this basic logic as it will really affect the perception. To me, the whole book is just a qualified Confucian and Taoist work. Of course, it is just a qualified Confucian and Taoist text. I just hope that the author can write well in the future and contribute a different and still wonderful Confucianism and Taoism. Maybe then many people will be attracted by the wonderfulness of the novel. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

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As of Chapter 22, I still feel something is wrong. In this kind of world, capable ministers and Confucian ministers should work together, nor should they look down on each other with various prejudices. If you want to fight against the enemy, you have to rely on high-level Confucianism cultivators, farming and praying for rain to ensure smooth weather. This proves that the two are inseparable from each other, but the author forcibly separates them and creates opposition and contradiction. It is really incomprehensible.

It was good at first, but when I saw modern poetry, I was really a bit overwhelmed, and suddenly it felt boring. If you ask the top authors of ancient poetry to accept modern poetry and think it is good, it is very frustrating. A group of people who are accustomed to concise words, deep meaning, concise word count, and sonorous rhythms think your modern poetry is good? I don't deny the excellence of modern poetry, but taking this poem of yours as an example, you made writing this sentiment a memory, but Li Shangyin, who was already at a loss at that time, felt that your "open the door and help me cover the quilt, you are still beside me" was well written. You said it yourself, in terms of rhythm and diction, how can your so-called modern poetry meet the aesthetics of those people? They are afraid that they will think that your stuff is not as good as the lyrics they wrote when they were drunk in a brothel. I don't deny the significance of modern poetry, but I can honestly say, after so many years, how many modern poems can you remember? On the contrary, how many ancient poems can you remember?

The timeline of this novel is not logically consistent. Since all literati in ancient times lived for hundreds of years, there should be many excellent poems and articles. Since poems and articles can be converted into force, judging from the situation of Chinese culture crushing neighboring countries, even if Daqian has internal problems, it should be the most powerful in terms of force value externally.

It's too sewn. It's both copying and sewing the actual history of various dynasties and various administrative reforms into the novel. It would be better to just throw it into an imaginary history without any autonomy.

Don't expect the ancients to appreciate modern poetry. This is the first time I have seen an author copy free verse in the ancient world for the ancients to appreciate. Personally, I think modern poetry is the product of the invasion of modern Western culture and the promotion of vernacular. In addition, the emotions that modern poetry wants to express basically require me to write an appreciation of the poem. Modern poetry is too obscure and difficult to understand compared to ancient poetry. Just like this modern poem copied by the author, if the author himself did not say it, who would know that it is about maternal love? Moreover, modern poetry is a typical literary expression of Western individualism and liberalism. In ancient times, without the impact of Western culture, it was basically impossible for anyone to appreciate and resonate with it.

It turns out that 🤫 Xu Qian's soul traveled from Blue Star to Dafeng and became a watchman and was responsible for the national destiny of Dafeng. However, by chance, Xu Qian's soul traveled to the sage world of Confucianism and Taoism again. The exit was the certification of heaven! 😥😁😁😁

If someone reads an article and contributes, it will be amazing. But then, he forgot that he had read this article. After reading this article for the second time, can you contribute a second piece of praise? If possible, can a big family specialize in raising a group of forgetful people, so that they can rack up the number of auction cases? The navy of the talented world.

I become a saint by reading books. I become a saint by reading books. I live forever by writing books.

The writing is not bad, the writing is smooth, there are no eunuchs, it is just a bit short. Summary: The writing is okay, but short and weak. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

The title is, I wrote a novel to become a saint. What about novels? I thought I would break the tradition and really rely on novels to become a saint. In the end, the key to sanctification is still traditional poetry and articles? (＠￣ー￣＠)

If you write like this, it will be difficult to end it without revolution.

I seem to be able to see Lin Qian killing Emperor Qianyuan in the later period, marrying Yongan, and supporting Wencheng to become the empress.

Many people refuted my previous question. I always felt it was strange, but I didn't know how to express it. After reading a book friend's reply, I realized what was wrong. If we make up history, no matter how serious the opposition is, I can understand it. If there is an extraordinary world, In the world, everyone in the court is extraordinary. No matter how serious the moral dispute is, it is not surprising to be fooled. However, in a world where there are extraordinary people, some people have extraordinary people and some people do not. As a result, people without (low) extraordinary people squeeze out people with (high) extraordinary people. It is really incomprehensible. Not to mention anything else, in such a transcendent world in the article, are poets really willing to place their affection on the mountains and rivers? They can use their own power to forcibly gain the right to speak above the court. Even if there is an opposition, it is a confrontation between the transcendent and the transcendent. Li, those who are talented and learned, but do not have much power or no power at all, their right to speak in the court should be relatively low. They can have a certain influence, but they cannot obtain the right to speak. Otherwise, those poets with such high cultivation are just feeding dogs. So there are conflicts. There are factional fights among these poets. Some of them have the right to speak, and some have no choice but to withdraw. It is understandable. After all, their cultivation can fully support them. They have this confidence, instead of all being squeezed to the political fringes, leaving a group of capable people with no cultivation or low cultivation to run the court. If nothing else, if a poet gets angry and wants to kill all the courtiers in the court, how can they resist?

Why do I feel like this book ends? Oh, so bad?

Some poems cannot be written without that experience and state of mind. In this talented world, those sub-sages and half-sages have become famous early and then have strength. How did the poems that are the most mature in the second half of their lives come about? The experience was completely different. So there are huge loopholes.

... The latest chapter is a bit weird? You don't have to be so forceful to create conflicts. He questioned the authenticity of Jieyuan, but wasn't it appointed by the emperor? How could he have the courage to question it? And the author, don't forget the name of your novel. The plot of your poem exceeds the plot of the previous article. Will Lu Mingyan have to write another poem next? That would be cliché.

How should I put it, although the setting says that all poems are included, but to be honest, poets who are not in a desperate situation can't write those poems, right? At least I don't think that Du Fu, who lived a good life, wrote the song about leaving the hut destroyed by the autumn wind, and Li Qingzhao couldn't write the poem about being a hero even when he was born, and a ghost even when he died.

The writing is a bit rough, and the ending is rushed 🥱

The first chapter was fine. I bought 200 chapters in one go and started writing about the harem halfway through. The status was raised so high in the previous chapter that a scholar with half-saint potential could just go to the Tai Hospital. He was called a slave and the protagonist was also a cheap one. After licking this and that, the character settings conflicted! Don't authors need to write an outline when writing a novel? If you want to be like Da Feng, your character design is very solid. It looks like a Stitch Monster! I can't stand it anymore. If I don't finish the subscription later, I'll treat it like spending money to buy a lesson.

It's too heavy-handed, it's a bit mindless, and if you can't control it, it will end badly.

Come to a suite building! Example: Name: Wang Zhuan Appearance: A white-haired old Confucian, with excellent temperament and demeanor Personality: hot-tempered, capable of doing things without being rude, and full sense of justice That's it, keep it simple, just give it a name. Other additions are also fine, such as background stories, etc., Which are strongly welcome. The more detailed it is, the more likely it is to be adopted. Friends who are adopted can also enjoy personal likes from the author, so don't miss it if you pass by! I definitely didn't build the secondary building just because I was too lazy to think of a name (dense fog), I did it to give you a stage to show yourself!

Is this the pace for finishing the book?

Looks good, but updates are a bit slow

Although a lot of logic doesn't make sense, for the sake of the fun writing, I'd better vote for it monthly.

Not bad. In fact, the best thing is that it is not as lengthy as other books. It is relatively short and quite enjoyable. Looking forward to Qianlin's next article.

Come on 😍