The Substitute in Hogwarts

I feel like the author has not read Harry Potter carefully. The wizard Blue in Harry Potter means that the magic is unlimited. No wizard has ever lacked blue. Maybe the author of the original work didn't think it through, but the setting is like this. You can play the new game Hogwarts Legacy.

It's a rare self-made stand-in, and there's nothing wrong with the writing. It's like finding a warm steak among a pile of frozen meats.

I don't really like that the protagonist in the extraordinary background is a Buddhist young man.

There are too many internet slangs and modern slangs, it's very confusing

Not bad. Although the original work does not say whether the wizard has an upper limit of magic power, I personally prefer the idea that the wizard has a blue amount. For example, if the original work sets the result of the obscurus' magic becoming substantial, then the amount of black mist is the magic power. If the wizard really has infinite magic power, then the release of energy when he becomes an Obscurus would be the end of the world. It is recommended that the author add a setting to the mana linked to mental power, willpower or mental strength. The mana should be longer. After all, these little wizards can practice spells and transformation spells continuously for a class.

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Well written, you wrote well!

Well written, keep updating. Just give me a ticket - from Brother Xiao Ming who is passing by you🙃

The bad thing is that the avatar 1 can talk and communicate with the protagonist at any time, just like a portable system. 2. Write Dumbledore as a conspiracy politician. I think everything in the book was arranged, and even the war in the school after death was all Dumbledore's fault... The dead man will also take the blame.

It didn't last long enough to be released on the shelves. Starting in the second grade, the writing style shifted to nanny writing, which completely followed the plot, which was a pity. You should write more plots about developing a substitute or about the growth of the protagonist. The nanny style is no longer popular now.

If it's heroine Hermione, please give me a kick.

Hey guys, if heroine Hermione kicks me

Will the protagonist's basic avatar panel be strengthened if he learns to summon divine guards in the future?

I'm all in for the heroine Dakota! ! !

Urgent, urgent, urgent 😍

Personally, I think the precision of this stand-in panel should be increased. The precision of C is too low. After all, having a stand-in can control the details when doing some experiments. After all, he is a wizard. Don't be too rigid. You can study the blood talents of magical animals and so on.

Stereotype, the movie version of Zhang Qiu really does not conform to Chinese aesthetics

I have an idea that the skills of a substitute can actually be used through magic spells. By shouting an epitaph, you can see the future a few seconds later. Then there are some special bug abilities that cannot be used if they are not understood. After the time system spell is mastered, it will consume magic power at the speed of light.

I can't stand the language. It's quantum, it's volume, and it's good brothers. What do those British wizards have these words for in their conversations? No one in the Muggles in the 1990s understood them, right?