LOL: This Guy Is Definitely Not a Professional Player

I feel like not many people are following it. Basically every time I read it, it's in the top 100. Come on

No matter how much you create a support, it's hard for people to believe that someone can lead the table and win the championship. I really don't believe that someone who can say that he just wants to enjoy the professional atmosphere and forgive himself can do it.

Can the author read the comments and make a suggestion? Can your character's dialogue be changed? It's uncomfortable to watch, let's take a look at a few clips "Professional Gejes has a very high winning rate, 80% in 10 games" Miller added. "Isn't there enough time?" Ai Luoli said. "Because I can't get it" Miller said. "He chose it himself" War Horse Road. "woc, I'm going to kill him alone" 369 said in disbelief. The author especially likes to use "Tao" to end the dialogue, which seems particularly unnatural, Miller added. It was Miller who continued, Ai Loli said. Let Loli express her doubts Would it look more natural?

Don't create an original heroine. If the emotional line is not easy to write, don't write it.

What you are writing is your Moroccan fried pancakes😅. I started to get angry as soon as it was put on the shelf. It's not my hand. If you continue like this, you are still writing about the devil's reward. One solo is more than six chapters, so you should go home and remove the ice😅

I'm curious about who the support is in the summer split. If I lead Fan Zhuo to become the champion, I think a lot of people will be disgusted and leave.

Is it written on s11? Is this trying to steal the edg championship? The results written like this will not be very good. Several popular LOL books dare not write like this. They either write before s8 or s12.

Do you think a professional player can be so dark?

No, I have always subscribed. What did you write in these pictures? I'm convinced that duck killing is this thing. If you write about werewolf killing, the audience will be higher than this thing.

It's up to you, the author

After reading the public issue, let me briefly talk about my views on this book. The first impression after reading this book is that it is very fragmented. The whole text is almost all short sentences, and there are very few paragraphs of more than 200 words, which gives people a feeling of fragmented writing. To be honest, the reading experience is not very good. I'm not saying that one paragraph and one page of writing will look good. Both are more extreme, and neither of them feels friendly to me. I hope moderation will be better. The second feeling is that it is very jumpy. There will be situations in the book where after describing the lineup at the beginning, a dozen words will suddenly jump to the third level of laning. Sometimes, even if you read it too fast, you will not be able to react. You need to pause and think for a while to understand what the author is saying. It is recommended to add some excessive sentences, which will make it smoother and less confusing. In addition to the fact that there are no connecting sentences, the picture description is also very jumpy. There are a few chapters where I am still writing about one thing at the end, and then suddenly jump to another thing in the next chapter. After writing a few hundred words, I pick up the events at the end of the previous chapter, which is very abrupt and feels incoherent. It's like (for example): I picked up an apple and put it to my mouth (end) – (beginning of next chapter) I looked at xxx, chatted for a while (more than a hundred words, and told the other party that apples taste good. The article is not so exaggerated, but it left me feeling very torn. The last thing is the text of the character dialogue. There is really no need to divide it into two paragraphs. You can just say it directly xx said: "..." This format is very good, really. That kind of, "..." xx said. This format is really not very comfortable. Putting aside these writing problems, I personally feel that it is still a good e-sports article, so you can read it.

Was it written by AI? It looks really awkward to me.

What the hell are you writing about? I haven't read it for 8 chapters. You're not done yet. Who's watching you write about other games? No one will really read it.

Zhuo is actually okay. He was very aggressive with Shuizi during the laning period in tes. The biggest problem with this person is that he has no brains. To be precise, he can't command the laning all over again. Moreover, this person will be under great pressure if he loses too much. Hong Wen... The male protagonist of this book is still winning. It just so happens that Baolv's best in the past few years was the Spring Split. So it's not a big problem to win an MSI in this book. But to win the S11 championship, you must change the support. Otherwise, I don't know how to beat dk and edg, especially when it was actually the soft support bottom lane version. It is difficult to open up the situation by placing an order

You wrote this too far back. Someone will read it if you write S5-6-7-8-9.

There is nothing wrong with this, but there are a lot of mismatches in the sentence segmentation and scene connection. Just as I was talking about the office rebutting the coach, I transitioned to introducing rng, and then the dialogue and argument were gone. This. . . . . . All I saw were fragments. I read this by myself. When I read it using quantum reading, I felt that the screen was more torn apart. What's going on? . .

There are many mistakes. The white crescent moon behind the war horse's BP in the front is one. The conqueror enchantress becomes the electric torture enchantress. This is one. The first one is to brush the ancient dragon. This kind of mistake will not be changed at all. Who can continue to read?

It's all typos and grammatical errors. Your content is okay, but these two points are taken for granted.

The author writes very well, but there are a lot of problems with the schedule. Edg lost to Taobo. Rng also lost to Taobo. In the end, both of them can still be in the loser group. In your grouping, Taobo should win one team and Xiaofenghuang win another team. Then which loser group of Xiaofeng and Taobo will win? The way you write it, which team did Xiaofeng win? Go directly to the upper bracket finals. You don't even understand the competition system.

Can the upper limit be waived even for unfinished work?👍👍👍👍

You always give the protagonist two main runes, right?

There is no update today, and I won't say anything about it. Should I cut it? 🙂

When the third substitute in the Korean server arrives at the end of the season, the coach will at least give him training games. If he is given training games, can't the coach see his strength? A pure black war horse.

It's bad, but the more I write later, the more perfunctory it becomes.

After it was put on the shelves, there were many common sense mistakes? You can learn e-skills in seconds at level one, and it's all in the commentator's mouth. How about learning q-skills at level one?

Is there any book sage who can recommend a book for starting from s2s3? What books are written now that are after S7, even those players can't recognize them all?

If not, let's go to APEX 😃