Affectionate Male God

Anyway, I can't understand why the protagonist, as the top scorer in the college entrance examination, chooses Shenzhen University. Even if you say that the protagonist, as a Cantonese, doesn't like the dry climate in the north or is too far away from home, so he doesn't want to choose Qingbei and Zhejiang and chooses Sun Yat-sen University instead, I can understand it. Also in Guangdong, Zhongshan is not 10,000 times better than Shenzhen University? Alumni are all over the political, legal and business circles. In what aspect is it not better than Shenzhen University?

Let's change the name, since affection doesn't match at all, just change it to a Neptune-type male god.

Simulation is too frequent, must I write a novel? Isn't starting a business and becoming a big shot in line with the male god's setting?

It's boring to want to get involved in any industry. After being reborn, you still live like a social animal.

Let me give you a few suggestions. The pace is too fast, and many places are not developed. It looks like a running account. For example, the excitement of being the number one scholar in high school is not expressed at all. The feeling of being proud of the spring breeze is not expressed at all. The pleasure of writing a book and singing is not reflected at all. Just knowing that you have written a book and sang a song, how refreshing is it? It's not exciting, and the pace of the game is too fast. Attributes can be added, but the cool points of skills are not written out. For example, if I have guitar skills, I have to excel in this skill. It doesn't have to be famous, but I must fill it out smoothly when I can show off! It's like playing a game and achieving a superb record, but what about the passion in the process and the feeling of pleasure after winning?

According to your pace, now the protagonist can basically rap and dance and make tens of billions of dollars, but what about your life after making money? Where is the fun? There is no inner description of the characters at all, they are as bland as water

It's all simulation, with a little bit of reality, and no sense of immersion. This is an urban novel, it's all simulation, and I can't stand it.

The author's writing is good, but there is no main plot, the love line is too complicated, and the simulation hook is a bit too big. This hook can help our country research various weapons, especially the H-20, nuclear-powered aircraft carriers, AI military robots, etc. The most important thing is that there is no Shura Field 😢 I suggest the author read the fourth novel I recommend below

This is a simulator system. It feels incompatible with affection, and it is forced to move closer to affection. If it is an anti-heroine, you can still watch it, but if there are multiple heroines, forget it.

The plug-ins don't even give you any money. I don't know what the author is trying to do here. Why don't you read the book about Shenhao who earns 200,000 yuan every day?

The author's title should be called Neptune's Self-cultivation!

Generally speaking, it is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

The simulation is too tight. You can simply go through the simulation. I skipped it. The title of the book is affectionate, and there are several women in the chapter, and they also want to have a harem. Personally, I don't like to have a harem in the city. It doesn't matter how many harems are in the fantasy genre, but the urban reality genre always feels weird.

If you have any good suggestions, you can give them here, or if you want to complain, you can also

You still have to consider the reader's sense of immersion. When you fight the boss after all the hard work and the equipment explodes, it's great. But when you enter a private server, with a sword of level 999, and the screen is filled with artifacts, will you be surprised? You're being too open-minded.

The appearance is too low, so I can't get in! Abandoned!

The free attribute points do not add attributes that cannot be added with acquired hard work, but add attributes that can be increased by exercising the body through acquired hard work. They are also talents. Shouldn't all the best choices just a few days away from the college entrance examination be to add mental attributes? Add some fitness?

Additional refinement

The pain of flesh and blood, the mechanical soaring 😰

This update by the author has very few words, so there is no chance to order all of it?

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but the details could be a little more detailed.