I Am a Director, but I Have the Skills of an Actor

I hope the author can write about Inception filmed in China

Naughty people should not write about entertainment. Male entertainment is all about being shameless.

The movies I make are all written by myself, so why should I write a rebirth story? I won't watch it.

After reading Chapter 15, I found several problems. 1. The author has a big problem with sentence fragmentation. Anyway, it seems awkward and uncoherent to me. Sometimes, due to the fragmentation of sentences, it takes a long time to read a paragraph to understand what the author wants to express. To give a simple example, there is a sentence in the conversation between Chen Yumo and the protagonist in the article, "Yan Dong, what do you want to tell me?" Just reading this sentence, my understanding is that the heroine is asking Yan Dong what he wants to tell the heroine, but combined with the context, it is clearly that the heroine is asking the hero what Yan Dong wants to tell the heroine. This is the case in more than 80% of the sentence fragments in the first fifteen chapters I have read. 2. There is still not enough information about the author. If you don't know a lot of things, just check them. If you don't want to check them, don't write. For example, "The Blind Shaft", the author wrote in the article that it won an award at Cannes, but it clearly won the Berlin Silver Bear and did not go to Cannes at all. 3. The plot introduces some characters inexplicably, which is completely unnecessary, just for the sake of water. The male and female protagonists should have been considered when writing the script at the beginning. The results were all ready. It took two or three chapters to complete the script. It was only after Yu Feihong was introduced that Chen Yumo was confirmed to play the female lead. What's the point, just for the sake of success? 4. What is the background of the protagonist and where did the filming funds come from? Maybe I didn't pay attention and skipped it. 5. I don't belittle the original script. But for an original script, you should at least use one or two chapters in advance to introduce the script you wrote, the original intention of the creation, the plot outline, the character design (the background of the main and supporting characters, etc.), What the film focuses on, what is promising after filming, and why you want to film this script. You have to write these out from the beginning, right? Does it have to be like a real movie, where the plot is hidden in the early stage and only the plot is revealed after it is released? You are writing a novel. As a result, after you finished filming, you introduced half a chapter to the plot? After reading it, I was confused, what did you write? What is the background of your male and female protagonists, why are there these plots, and who are your supporting characters? Who plays the supporting role? If you don't even write it down, where will the sense of immersion come from, and who will be able to read it? You obviously wanted to write something original, but you ended up writing according to the transcript. The transcript briefly introduces the plot at the end because this movie actually exists. Readers who don't know it can use Baidu. Those who have seen it will bring the actors into it and experience the different changes. Which role the actor you choose plays, people will compare the actor you choose with the actor chosen by the director in reality, and readers will have a general opinion. It's not like you. I don't know a few sentences or paragraphs about the plot, and I don't know anything about the characters. I just know that you and your girlfriend are starring in it. As a result, your character's appearance and background as the protagonist have no real-life counterpart, and your girlfriend Chen Yumo has no real-life counterpart. It's like if I just read your description, I will see a picture: a man + a woman, starring in an inexplicable movie. Then everyone in your article is amazed and praising you, and you can even win awards abroad. To the reader, this just looks confusing and completely incomprehensible. What's the point of reading this kind of entertainment novel? 6. The self-pleasure plot is too serious. The original script is not the problem, but the choice of originality has to be written according to the genre. The original heroine is not a problem, but you can't do it all together. If the story is original, readers can also imagine it based on your description. But the characters are inherently difficult to imagine. The protagonist is originally fictitious, and the heroine is also fictitious. Fictional male protagonist + fictional heroine + fictional script = what the hell? Because the author is writing a book, you write descriptions based on your own imagination, but what readers imagine after reading your descriptions is completely different from what you imagined. This is self-indulgence, and it is also the reason why your book fails.

I like it anyway

I originally thought it was a cool article, but later it turned into a land-washing article. It would be a pity not to become a civil servant. It is awesome to say that real estate can be the happiness of millions of people in exchange for the happiness of everyone. It turns out that only millions of people live in houses in the country. If you are afraid of writing, you don't have to write. If you want to write about a game with depth, you don't dare to write. No wonder the writing is good but you can only throw it away.

800 Million is just unlucky to be the best in domestic entertainment. There are many tax evaders and money launderers in the entertainment industry. In fact, she is the only one among the three beauties of Huanzhu who has a little less problems.

It's so funny to start your own company but contract it to someone else.

Reborn as an actor, what a clown. Wouldn't it be great to be a director, start a company, run theaters, and build a platform? Feel free to play when you want to act

Do you think we read Zhengxin Entertainment's articles just to read your original work, right? Besides, you are always original and the plot and script are terrible. Do you know what you are writing?

Let me ask you, if you were reborn and went into the entertainment industry, wouldn't you want to date Liu Yifei, would you want to date Jia Ling? There is no problem with the aesthetics of the masses

An entertainment article written by an author about intrigues and intrigues all day long. The protagonist has a really unlikable character. He wears all kinds of expressions on his face all day long. How did he get the Berlin Best Actor trophy without even the ability to control his expressions? Every time I was interviewed by a reporter, I was asked angrily. Every time the protagonist went to a place, he offended people and asked others to punish him to death. I just wanted to ask the author, how annoying does the protagonist look to be so unpleasant everywhere? Being bullied by others everywhere, the protagonist's character is really not suitable for being in the entertainment industry. He doesn't say anything about being straight, but he always offends people with his words. He thinks he is aloof all day long, and he still wants to act cool when he doesn't have the ability. How did the protagonist's character stay in the entertainment industry for decades before time travel? If you can stay at the bottom of the entertainment industry for decades, you can at least talk to people and talk to people, but you can't tell the truth, right? The protagonist is still so naive in his thinking. Does he really think that he is still an ordinary college graduate? You must know that the Film and Television Academy is a shrunken entertainment industry. Such naive thinking is really caused by spending four years in the Nortel in vain, plus decades of entertainment life in the previous life.

I don't understand. Zeng Li wants traffic but not traffic, and she doesn't know her acting skills. Why do so many people regard her as the heroine? I think it's not as good as the novel with the heroine Zhang Xiaofei!

The author made the protagonist look like Shuangzi (schizophrenic) watching a meteor shower. When someone else says something, his expression changes accordingly. I was shocked and very uncomfortable. In the end, Baoyi put it in his mouth, but he refused again, and then he was poked by Bayi, and his face began to feel cool again. I feel tired just looking at it. At the beginning of the article, the description of graduation, life in the capital and Li Chengru's literary play are all very comfortable. After I started to want to become bigger and stronger, I felt that I had to rely on being cool to write the plot. Perhaps the author wants to express that the more successful you are in the entertainment industry, the more you will look like the second coolest person. Crazy criticism and inexplicable

This book is so bad, it should be reported

After watching Fengshen, I realized that Urshan was a rebel, made weird remarks, and even released an album "Huanghuo". You may not know this, so let's spread the knowledge

Nowadays, entertainment literature is basically useless. There is no one that can be read. I can't say that there is none. I can only say that I can't stand it after seeing those few articles. The plots are about the same. The film and television works are about the same. The heroines are about the same. There is no progress at all. They all want to eat Liu Yifei and Yang Mi fans. As long as you write entertainment articles, the heroine must be a few of them. For the fans' rewards, there is nothing new and new plots. New characters have entered an endless cycle. What I want to say is that as long as you write well enough, no matter who your heroine is, you can be popular. And those authors who are not confident in their writing skills will brainlessly choose those heroines. After all, there are bonuses to eat, but it is precisely because of this bonus that the writing skills will never improve. The next book will still be the same. Change the setting of the male protagonist. This one is an actor. The director is next. I was originally a screenwriter and the plot was pretty much the same. Now that I saw those heroines, I quit silently. I felt nauseated after seeing them. Even if I didn't hate them, I would hate them. This should be the aesthetic fatigue that normal people have, except for fans. Recently, I have read a few books with heroines that are not those ones. Although the author's writing style is not very good, don't tell me, there is still a different flavor and a bit of freshness, even for some female stars. I don't know the star, so I'll look it up on Baidu. Although I'm not used to it in the early stage, it still looks good. I hope someone can come out and reform the current situation of entertainment literature. It should be a hundred schools of thought contending instead of Liu Yifei and Yang Mi's family. I would rather see the author write about some beautiful but not popular female stars and slowly cultivate them. Plant the seeds to germinate and then bloom into beautiful flowers. Wouldn't this be more fulfilling? Of course, if your writing skills are good enough and your writing skills are good, it doesn't matter who the heroine is, you will definitely be popular. Of course, if your writing skills are bad, you can just rest and enjoy your bonus. I won't read it anyway, but I hope some authors can stand up and resist the current status quo!

Alas, it really feels a bit strange. I always feel that the protagonist is very separated in his behavior. He only focuses on the female protagonist, but the female protagonist has little sense of presence. The supporting female characters have more roles than the female protagonist. Then, when doing things, people should be forward-facing rather than backward-facing. When doing things, people feel that their emotional intelligence is very low and there is a sense of hostility. However, this kind of dark character likes to talk about worldliness, so he will keep an eye on something, and if something goes wrong, his girlfriend will solve it. I was almost finished watching it, but when I saw the part where Master San said about Ning Hao, I really couldn't hold it anymore. The co-protagonist is the Phoenix man who should help you, I am shameless and you are shameless? How can you just take advantage and not suffer losses? It would be fine if the protagonist can justify himself and solve the problem. Basically, the heroine solves the problem through God's help. Then the male protagonist eats soft rice while going back three or two times a year. The two of them are still inseparable. And Mr. Han, he was a good uncle when he helped you before, but what happened later was the box office of a movie. He was so aggressive about this matter that he almost fell out. Counting to return favors, favors are only established by playing with each other, it's really outrageous

Advantages: They are all original scripts, and there are no girls from the Yusan Family of Entertainment. Disadvantages: The original scripts do not have a strong sense of substitution, and if they are not refreshing enough, they will become slow.

Relying on the defense, there is no sense of immersion. Since you want to write an original story, why write about the rebirth of the protagonist? It's better to write that the protagonist doesn't know the future or has amnesia.

Read the first 50 chapters. . . I just want to say four words. . . Do not overestimate your own capabilities. . . Bye-Bye

I thought I was the only one who couldn't stand it, but I didn't expect that many people felt the same way. The limited-time free version is indeed different, but it just doesn't work!

Who is the heroine? Tell me

Speechless. . . . Magically avoids everything and feels better! In order to create a dedicated character, all the 75 flowers, 80 flowers, and 85 flowers have lost the premise of being described - even if you choose an actress at random, you can still get a bunch of fans' votes, right? . . . . . A typical pseudo-literary youth.

The copyright is no longer for sale? Go home after winning the award? How about making a movie? No more money?

It doesn't feel any better, and I have no desire to continue reading.

You can dismiss the series just by looking at the synopsis, it's self-directed and self-acted, and you don't even bother to read the table of contents.

It's too watery, with too many irrelevant plots, and even plots are added just to add sea water! Then, the original script is not bad, it is even better, but you don't say what the script is about. At least you have to have a rough idea. You talk about it later, but when you start without saying it, it makes people disconnected (the emotional connection is not connected)

The protagonist is sinister and cunning, and his partners are cheating him. If there is no verbal commitment in the contract, can he ignore it? I can't stand it anymore, give up.

You're convinced, why don't you insist on adding a golden finger to become an actor? You are a director and a company boss. Fortunately, few paparazzi take the initiative to expose you. Does being an actor have privacy? Aren't you tired? You've been reborn to write, direct, and act. You want to do all the work by yourself.