American Police Detective: Starting from the American TV Series Rookie Policeman

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Rogue Jack Policewoman——Rosko (Pei Chunhua)

Is the author not a novice? This writing is very good.

Have you ever seen the American police law enforcement records uploaded by Bilibili? Really exciting, tense moments, emergency attacks, highway chases

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, I can't get used to the food in Jiangxi and Shanghai, let alone the United States. Regional differences have a great impact on taste. I beg you, please don't let Americans just accept Chinese food without any care. It's really embarrassing.

Let me tell you a little bit about my personal opinion. The author of this book is very good. His writing skills are not particularly deep, but he is definitely not bad. It can make people read. The plot is not a simple anecdote, so overall, it is a mid-to-high-level work that can be read. As for the shortcomings, the biggest problem is: the audience is too small. Compared with movies, the audience for watching TV series is inevitably smaller. I personally have only watched "Bones", "CSI", and "The Secret Detective", so I don't recognize any of the characters in the other works. If the name of a movie is more or less memorable to readers, it means that they can have a sense of involvement. However, the small audience of TV series will inevitably lead to a lack of sense of substitution. In the early stage, they will be attracted by the author's writing skills and plot ideas. However, as time goes by, as the sense of substitution becomes more and more lacking, interest will become less and less. I estimate that the early results of this book should be okay, but now the results will start to go downhill, which is caused by the above reasons. After the positive index generated by early attraction is offset by the negative index generated by waiting for follow-up updates, the readership will gradually disappear. So is there a solution? I personally think that we can create a few supporting characters that can create a deep impression and appeal, deepen readers' impression of the work, and enhance the sense of immersion. Instead of turning the characters of each American drama into supporting roles in order to describe the classic plots of each American drama, and just come and go to make soy sauce. The readership of Hannah after the character was transferred may be the result of an attractive supporting character being weakened in the plot. Finally, I wish the author will get better and better as he writes, and the novel will come to a complete conclusion.

It's awkward for American dramas to have various Chinese elements interspersed in their plots. Don't mix it up. You're a novelist, not a cultural promotion ambassador.

Author, your thinking is wrong. One case follows another, and you have to take a vacation or something to add some daily life in order to be normal. And what about the protagonist's system? Is it just gone? . To be honest, if you want to see who solves the case, your first choice is definitely Sherlock Holmes or something. As a systematic protagonist, you keep solving crimes and solving crimes. And it's not routine at all. I'm jumping through hundreds of chapters at a time, and it's still the same? ? I wouldn't watch Sherlock Holmes if I wanted to see Solved Crimes, would I, Charlotte? No matter how exciting the foreign crimes are, there is no sense of immersion. To be honest, apart from not harming those kind-hearted people, I don't feel that no matter how many Americans die, I may still feel that it is a bit less. You write a novel, and with such a defiant system, you are actually afraid of the protagonists of those TV series? No wonder your book is not popular. ... I can see that you put a lot of thought into this book. The writing is also very good. It's just that the thinking is distorted.

But I know why Mao gave up before reading a few pictures. Too proud. Authentic Chinese food is not popular with many Americans. China is a big country and there are many delicacies. Even when you go out of the province, the food must be modified to suit the local tastes. If you go abroad and do this, the boss in Chinatown will not cook you authentic Chinese-style dishes because you are a foreigner, unless you propose it yourself.

The prototype of Hannah, the young lady is really cool😎

Ever since Fenri came out, writing has become more and more boring. It's just one event plus another, with no breathing time at all. Maybe the author thinks it's easier to write like this, but it's very boring to read. Even Superman has to have his own life. Are you, the protagonist, busier than Superman?

The protagonist feels like a horny teddy

There is the original plot of the TV series, but it is not watery. It is written very cleverly and introduces the plot. For someone like me, I have watched it but it doesn't make me feel like writing the original version again like writing a diary. It is very interesting, and I really like this kind of plot with a little bit of flutter. Amry, why don't you write this like a gentleman all day long, just chatting and not saoing. The most important thing is that each character behaves and speaks in a different way. They have their own characteristics and are very comfortable to watch. There is no gambling on the intelligence. The protagonist is a little bit like the darling of heaven, but the impact is not big.

The writing is messy, daily life is not like daily work, there is no intense and exciting scenes, and there is no logical and rigorous analysis of solving the case. There is no motivation to climb up and no desire for wealth. What is the meaning of the protagonist's existence? What else is there to watch?

The writing is very good. There is nothing for readers to actively complain about at the moment. The main reason is that as a police officer in a certain country, I can be more legendary and kill more scum in the later stage. After all, experience comes faster this way. Don't be afraid of collapse. After all, there are so many skills in the world.

I'm afraid of provoking women in harem stories, so it's ridiculous to write too many female protagonists. Just these few women are written over and over again, and they all look tired. If there are more women, they will be fresher.

I read Chapter 53 and found the writing to be okay, but not very to my liking. I like the style of Detective Luke in the film and television world, where there are not too many restrictions and you don't have to think about other things, just kill it. Just this plot of more than fifty chapters. The police were issued a pursuit order by gangsters, and the author dealt with it in a cunning way. But to be honest, it's not satisfying at all, it's frustrating to watch, and it gives people the feeling of having to compromise. According to Luke's method of handling it, if you dare to issue a fatwa, I will put on makeup and deal with your entire gang management. Anyone who dares to speak out will be dealt with. According to relatively simple values, these people would not regret their death, and their killing would satisfy people's hearts. There are so many villains in American TV series. Luke was able to write more than two thousand chapters. You have one plot after another, and you can probably kill a thousand or two thousand chapters.

I have a question. You are already an American. Why do you still have so many Chinese elements in your body? You must know that American police and Chinese police have completely different methods of law enforcement.

It's really not good, just one case after another. Although it can be regarded as a life, it feels more and more dull. Basically, there is nothing exciting about solving the cases. I feel that I have no expectations for the future. I often fall asleep while listening to it. When I wake up and watch it, I don't feel the need to go back and catch up on the content. It becomes more and more dull.

1.85 Meters, 70 kilograms, one hemp pole

It can only be said that there are reasons why it is not popular. . . .

It's really unbearable to look at these pictures. I've been cooking Chinese food all day long. I came here to see the patrolman, to see the woman being fucked, not to see the cook.

I haven't read much, but I feel like the author's writing style has been significantly improved. Since I don't watch many American dramas, the plots of unit dramas are quite novel to me. I don't know which ones are original by the author or are already in American dramas. But after watching too much, I still feel a little tired of aesthetics. For unit dramas, I personally prefer dramas such as "Secret No. 9" And "Wonderful Stories of the World", which are unique in terms of setting and concept. For American TV series that have several seasons, I personally feel that they are too homogeneous. Therefore, my dissatisfaction with this work stems more from the aesthetic fatigue of the homogeneous content of united American dramas than from this work. In the process of reading this work, it is obvious that the author's writing style has gradually matured and is more and more consistent with the tone of the entire work. For example, detailed descriptions such as touching the head appear in the previous text, but are almost absent in the later text. In my opinion, descriptions like "touching the head" appear more often in anime two-dimensional light novels, or some Korean novels and other works, which will make readers (mainly me) have a clear sense of picture and ambiguity in their minds. For more "realistic" novels such as American dramas, "touching the head" is very inappropriate. It is too general and it is difficult to connect it with the ambiguous atmosphere. When describing the ambiguous atmosphere between two people in the play, close-ups are often used. The subjects of the shots can be diverse, ranging from the expressions and small movements of the two people, to even still lifes that do not want to have sex at all but have symbolic meaning. I think a more specific description should be used, or in other words, a more camera-like description, such as "the hair brushed by the ear" and "inadvertently looking at each other". The author's later descriptions have indeed become more camera-sense, reminding me of the interaction between two real-life Europeans and Americans. I really like a concept in screenwriting called "character arc", which refers to the corresponding changes in a character's setting due to the plot. For example, in the movie "Joker", the protagonist's character arc can be said to be very smooth at first, with some ups and downs. However, as the plot develops, key nodes have an impact on the character's inner being. The truth told by Thomas Wayne, the discovery of his own hallucinations, etc., Make the protagonist's entire personality take a turn for the worse. The transformation of the character arc is usually preceded by subtle foreshadowing. Once the change is too abrupt and the foreshadowing is not enough, it is easy to be criticized. For example, in the third season of "Black Robe", the butcher broke the contract with the soldier boy because of his son. Of course, it seems to be a very extravagant act to discuss "character arc" in a very long online novel, but this work does reflect it. For example, in the male protagonist's treatment of the relationship between men and women, he goes from being restrained at the beginning to gradually letting go. If such changes could be reflected in more parts, such as concepts of good and evil, attitudes towards justice, etc., The character would surely be more fleshed out. Overall, I think this is a relatively good work, very suitable for killing time. It is also a work that is easily boring and does not make me have too much expectations for its subsequent plot. Looking forward to the author's next masterpiece.

The author can add some real-life cases in the United States, such as a school shooting before. It took more than 300 policemen more than an hour to kill the shooter, and 22 people died. This is relatively simple and does not require causes and consequences. It can add two more chapters 🙂🙂🙂 (There is an up owner at Station B who specializes in talking about these cases, such as The Thin Blue Line 11)

It's just that it's so tiring to watch one case after another.

Basic food➕If you like the harem, it can be regarded as fairy grass➖(Mainly because I haven't watched the original drama and it doesn't affect my reading, so the bottom score is high) Let's talk about the advantages first The protagonist is likeable, has a good outlook on life, is kind but not a saint, kills when he should be killed, is systematic but not excessive. The author's writing is smooth and doesn't feel like a newcomer. Moreover, the author's progress becomes more obvious as time passes, and the cases connect naturally and there will be some good changes along the way. It's rare to find a cool American novel without any peeing spots throughout. Maybe it's a bit more general, but let's just say it's a fatal bend. After reading a lot of American comprehensive articles, I feel that The Fatal Turn is a watershed. A good author will arrange the rhythm appropriately so that the protagonist is neither strong nor weak in the plot, and does not lose the tension without being suffocated. As for the trick, he directly gives the protagonist a wit (the protagonist is too strong and does not feel nervous? Wouldn't it be better if he went out without a gun 😒) This book belongs to the former. Of course, there are still some minor glitches. Although there was a story about women dressed in plainclothes in the early stage, it ended after half a chapter (I almost gave up on it at the beginning). The plot where Jack was introduced was very slow, and the narrative was unclear. The previous cases were very comfortable even if I had not watched the original drama. But in Jack, I had no idea what the protagonist wanted to do. (It is recommended to skip it directly) Except for these two points, everything else is very comfortable, at least it is the most comfortable cosmetic surgery I have seen recently.

I've read forty chapters, and it's more than when I started reading. I can start reading 😊 If you're like me, stop reading, and rush out. I like this book and that one, Mercure. I hope you don't stop reading.

Basically, I rarely see books about criminal psychology in men's videos. This is probably the only book I've read that doesn't have a bad ending and has enough criminal psychology content. I really don't want to finish it.

There is no main plot, it is just the investigation process of various American dramas, so I might as well just watch the American dramas

Where did the system go? Lost?