Giving Douluo Dalu a Taste of Technological Shock

Personally speaking, after reading too much fan fiction, what I look forward to the most is to see the fan authors come up with self-supporting theories and to be able to complete the summary of the original work. There are always various setting conflicts in the original work, and the logic is difficult to be consistent, especially the long original work. What satisfies me the most about this book is that it has written new things, and it can be self-explanatory. The logic of the plot is discontinuous, and it has written my deepest impression of Tang San: a lowly killer who can't get out of the world.

Every world has its own scenery. The author is a talent who can write about the glory of historical changes and the grandeur of that era of change in a world of Douluo. Of course, the changes of the times are not a one-person show, and I hope to add some richer group portraits in the later stage.

Yes, it's one of the top 3 Douluo fanfics I've read. I hope it won't fall apart in the later stages. There are many books that were well written in the early stages but fell apart in the later stages. Most of them were written about emotional dramas but failed. My suggestion is that if the author is not sure, he still doesn't have a heroine or downplays the emotional dramas. He's afraid.

Can we break away from Shrek in the future? It is an investment institution. The teaching philosophy has not changed much from ten thousand years ago. There is no need to tie the protagonist to it.

Damn it. After reading novels for more than ten years, I can only count the few times that my blood boils. What is the radiance of wisdom shining on the earth? The introduction is absolutely correct. The time traveler itself can be a golden finger. I couldn't sleep at all while reading it. My mind was filled with the protagonist holding a sword to the sky. I was so lucky that I wasn't stopped by the sunspots in the book review section.

Although Tang San in the original book has various faults and is not a good person, he is still kind and kind. What I read here is that from the beginning to the end, I can't wait for him to rush to the streets in the next chapter. Although he seems to be the villain boss, from the beginning to the end, I don't have a good impression at all. Even Shrek's people are targeting it. It's too outrageous... Ask yourself how many people think that he would really do such an angry thing... It's not that I like the character of Tang San, it's just that he is too different from what I know about him. Of course he has a lot of black spots, but this is too much, and he is almost like another person! Regardless of whether you agree or not, I maintain the above views!

Does the author accept this book? Wang Donger, Wang Qiuer, Xiao Xiao, Jiangnan Nan, Tianmeng, Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, Liya, Lijing, Sea Princess Zhu, Bajiao, Gillian, Youyou, Orange, Luanfeng, Keke, Xu Jiujiu, Qingya, Wei Na, Mu Xue, Wu Ming, Lan Susu, Lan Luoluo, Nan Qiuqiu, Nan Shuishui, Nana, Meng Hongchen, Appreciating the Moon, An Leng Ye, Fei Yuyan, Yu Mengdi, Yi Chen (Dou II), Wang Chengxi, Cain, Dragon Girl, Wu Yun, Wu Yu, Tang Ya, Ma Xiaotao, Zhou Yi, Hibiscus, Han Ruoruo, Ling Luochen, Xixi, Zhu Lu, Cui Yajie, Xu Tianzhen, Bai, Muyue, Su Tong, Zhang Lexuan, Xue Lingxun (Xue Ying), Gu Yuena, Bi Ji, Zi Ji, Mo Huang, Lan Fuzi, Lang, Ye Xinglan, Xu Xiaoyan, Yuan En Yehui, Wu Siduo, Dai Yun'er, Long Yuxue, Yali, Long Yeyue, Mo Lan, Shi Mengshan, Xiazheng Leng, Tang Ziran's mother, Nunnally, Long Bing, Li Yaoyao, Ling Zichen, Leng Yao Zhu, Leng Yulai, Ye Lingtong, Xingxuan, Bai Xiuxiu, Lan Meng Qin, Tang Yuge, Yuan Enhuihui, Qiangu Yourou, Le Qingling, Yingluohong, Lan Bing, Tang Ximeng, Yun Liao, Elf Queen, Lan Butterfly, Nan Cheng, Chen Wuzhu, Zhang Chujia, Jia Lin, Long Tianyang, Crimson Mother, Song Lao, Cai Meier , Xian Lin'er, Ye Xi Shui, Fengling, Duchess, Huo Yuner, Dai Luoli's mother, Xu Yun, Xiao Wu, Xiao Wu's mother, Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing, The three Shangguan sisters, Feng Nu, Lan Chen, Sura, Li Haiyang, Any Ya, Xiang Luan, Ye Lianqin, the Demon King, Lily, Phil, Tian Qin, Piaomiao , Mo Yue, Mu Zimo, Hai Xing, Li Muzi, Evil Emperor, Princess Golden Dragon, First Angel God, Qian Renxue, Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, Ye Lingling, Xue Ke, Liu Erlong, Meng Yiran Chaotian Xiang, Doudou, Bo Saixi, A Yin, Dark Dragon King, Water Dragon King, God of Lust, God of Light, Water God, Bai Agarwood, Wife of the Dragon God, Sheng Cai'er, Bai, Lan Yanyu, Li Xin, Meng Qingqing, Sun Wanwan, Qiao Huan'er, Meigongzi, Su Qin, Peacock Princess (Luo Qingzhu), Jin Miaosen, Huo Ling'er, Reason Heart, Red One to Red Eighteen, Meng Te Shi, The First Generation of Peacock Demon Emperor, Cheng Zicheng, Ling Muxue, Huang Bingbing, Yan Yi, Liuli Tianjing Emperor, Crystal Demon Emperor, Tianyang Tianjing Emperor, Diyin Tianjing Emperor, Yuan Enxingtian, Li Jiangqi, Qiu Zixuan, Lan Yinhai, Ao Dai Li, Hepburn, Ling Menglu, Zisang Liuying, Yue Li, Wang Chang Xin, Ming Xi, Yan Yao, Tang Ling, God of Kindness, Goddess of Life, Lie Yan

The book is okay, with both advantages and disadvantages. The protagonist is a high-intelligence research type in the science fiction genre, a bit like Dr. Chen, but it is not the same type. It relies on the original world and high vision to overwhelm people. The author's writing is a bit awkward. On the one hand, he exaggerates the coldness and ruthlessness of the protagonist. His girlfriend died for him at the beginning, but on the other hand, there is no one he wants to kill. Even a bad guy like Ye Xishui needs redemption. The writing style is a bit stream-of-consciousness, which makes most of it enjoyable and a small part of it disgusting. It's like having sand in the food. It would be a pity not to eat it, but it would make people feel uncomfortable after eating it.

The writing is really good, it is a good book. If you maintain this quality, you can reach the top of the Douluo fandom. I will go to the Douluo group to help you recommend the book. If you can, please add it to me.

After reading dozens of chapters, it's okay. The setting is A, the writing is B, the plot is C+, and the poison index is 0.4 (A lot, 40% of people can't stand it). As mentioned below, it mainly depends on the Riddler. The plot is written in a general direction. The only thing that left an impression is that a multi-function detector like Dragon Jewel Kameng was installed in Shrek City. At the same time, it does not explain whether the protagonist knows about the Douluo novel or not, which raises the level of Tang San's divine realm. These are considered poisonous points. Because there is no specific technical description, it is all just for the sake of pretending. The author will definitely say that no one understands this except the protagonist, and he can only iterate on his own. But in fact, the sword codenamed "Exile" has no specific function, and there is no explanation after the word appears. It is just a pretentious term, as a guarantee of combat effectiveness, so the guy downstairs said "The Riddler". Because there is no explanation, readers have to "brain" what this is, why this thing came out, and are there any other novels, comics, and movies similar to it. In short, the setting is very good, and it is a virgin novel that is difficult to write and read.