Miracle of Immortality: Starting from Awakening the Mark Ability

Read the introduction to explain why it looks like a dog peeing in an enclosure

I have no idea what the author wanted to write, or whether it was off track. And the sense of substitution is very small. After watching it, I wanted to know why the protagonist was left in the mortal world. Is it for better cultivation? Better to play cheats? Safer? It's strange that many details were not written. . Bear with it and watch. . Withdrawn.

I don't understand why the protagonist works so hard to confront that secret sect, and it's not beneficial.

Don't know what to write? It feels so contradictory. A big boss recruits a disciple and just gives away resources without saying a word. If he doesn't care, are he afraid of being killed along the way? And then he is confused when he writes that he can't understand the pig's trotters. 😮

Well, I don't know what the protagonist is busy with in the mortal world. . Don't practice the exercises and spells properly. . . . Moreover, the author seems to treat the skills and spells as game skills. You don't even need to study them just to look at them. You can just get started and master them directly. . . This golden finger doesn't have any added functions.

The plot right now is really bad, so bad that I didn't even watch it, so I gave it up.

Stop messing around with mortals. Your opening fireball spell is invincible to mortals, and you still have to waste words and ink on it.

That's too far off topic. What's your topic? Practice! Practice! Practice! You've gone too far!

After reading Chapter 76, let me tell you how I felt about reading this book (personal opinion, please delete if you don't like it) There is a problem with the plot description after apprenticeship. The protagonist is currently barely able to survive, and the output is not enough, but he is still looking for excitement. I wrote about apprenticeship earlier, and the master thought that the protagonist needed to stay, and now these few pictures keep wanting to go to the apprenticeship by myself. . . As for the world of mortals, it doesn't matter. It can be said that the master needs the protagonist to refine his heart and so on. The most disgusting point is that the tiger kills people at will and the immortal kills the monster and thinks the monster is miserable. (The protagonist is a human being, and the reader is also a human being.) After all, in the world of mortals, all teachers can be round, but the butt problem is very serious. . .

The book friend in front of me is right, if a fairy writes about the commonplace, it will lead to a dead end. Originally I wanted to start from the mundane world like ordinary people, but the rhythm was wrong and many book friends said it was dull. Now the plot turns to the world of immortality. Fortunately, the outline of the ordinary plot is also to kick off the turmoil in the world of immortality, so as not to deviate from the outline.

Shouldn't this thing be for cultivating immortals? Why is it all commonplace?

I don't understand why we are trying so hard to defeat this secret sect. Is this secret sect eating from the protagonist's family and not paying for it, or is it that the secret sect is playing with the protagonist and not paying for it? The author also said it was easy? It's easy for a master to chop a knife occasionally, but it's just a monster at the first level of Qi Refining that has to join in the fun when it just starts to develop? I don't understand the so-called logic at all. Forget it, stop reading and withdraw.

Why are you messing around with the protagonist's ability to become a god? You can just practice obediently. You also force the protagonist to level up. After so many chapters, it's still level 1.

A lot of novice authors make the mistake of making the plot very complicated, but it's not necessary.

The transition was too long, and the expectations were very high at the beginning, but in the end, I still bullied the children.

Don't write about the secular world, it's too bland and boring.

Top talents and plug-ins, the world of Xianxia is full of ordinary martial arts content...

I don't understand the main line and don't know what you are writing!

It's said to be a miracle. Apart from apprenticeship, the early stage is all about mundane things like martial arts. You think it's okay to go overboard. Is it necessary to get involved in such mundane things? There is not much spiritual energy in the secular world, and there are restrictions on the length of practice. I don't understand what is a good sign in this secular world.

Why does the protagonist love to find trouble for himself so much? Isn't he just a little jailer? Why are you so nosy? It gives the impression that a small security guard at the gate of the prison just hangs around the provincial officials, and then has to save face with them. I think the writing is quite good, but the plot is unreasonable and the characters are too nosy. If something happens, you just move forward. If something happens, you still move forward. The problem is! These things have nothing to do with you, brother. That secret sect didn't mess with you either. The good guy just went home and fucked his three brothers to death. Just do it to death. The problem is that I don't understand why you want to kill people? Oh Later I understood at noon that your protagonist is nosy. Killing the other party will do you no good, and keeping the other party alive will do no harm to you! You are harming others and not benefiting yourself, which is immoral.

The bad thing about this book is that it begins with the apprenticeship of a top-notch figure, and then the protagonist is left to practice alone while he is away from home? I don't understand what I'm writing about. Is it about the struggle history of the protagonist, a casual cultivator, from a young age? 😅

I read a few chapters, and I read them word for word, but why did I feel like I was jumping through the pages.

Goldfinger is good. In my opinion, marking ability is a casual cultivator. Good stuff for stealing skills. Good things on the run, good things in the secret realm But I can't understand what the author wrote!

Recommend a good book, read the latest chapter in one breath, it's already two o'clock in the morning. The current esoteric cult dungeon, demonized dungeon, and local immortal cultivation forces are quite coherent, with no obvious poisonous points. The reincarnation of the old banyan tree and the direct headshot of the eunuch are quite refreshing. Some of the protagonist's behaviors may be poisonous to readers, but that's the case for ordinary immortal cultivators. This could have been read as a semi-invincible novel. The protagonist can teleport away at any time and has the attention of the Supreme Elder, which makes people feel reassured about the protagonist's safety. Even if the author's writing is a little more arrogant, I think it's OK.

The plot is too baffling. There is no foreshadowing in the forest plot, and it gets bigger all at once. The main plot is unclear, and the combat power is skewed. It's like it's just where it's written.

The setting is good, but the plot is not. Let's summarize and plan.

Not great, boring in one word

Come on, come on, come on, it looks good.

I looked through the bookshelf and found this book. I was still wondering why it was on the bookshelf, but after reading two chapters, I remembered it. Wrong direction, going in the opposite direction, driving high and going low, blowing up the fish pond and getting mixed up with the fish... This book can be regarded as a quite classic case.

It has been tested and can be seen. The fairy novels are quite well written, innovative and new, the plots are not cliche, and the writing is smooth. Worth a look.