Pushing Martial Arts Horizontally Starts with Adding Points

I really don't know why the protagonist is still in the martial arts gym? For the protagonist, staying in the martial arts gym is of no use at all, and will only cause trouble. Just to avoid troubled times? Or maybe it's better to enjoy the shade under a big tree? Looking at the protagonist becoming a knife hunter, he doesn't look like someone who is practicing stably.

Judging from the writing style, it doesn't look like it was written by a newcomer. I guess it was written by an old author and the writing is pretty good. It depends on whether we can write the pretentious charm of Yakuza-ryu. The Yakuza-ryu currently on the list are not pretentious and have no flavor of Yakuza-ryu.

Chapter 29: The plot of the woman in white is not good, like a thorn stuck in the throat, not going up or down.

He joins a gang inexplicably. I can't figure out the author's thinking logic.

What do you call a horizontal push? Wouldn't it be better to ask Gou Dao to add some points?

I don't know what your world view is? The martial arts school is supposed to be the most rubbish force in the city. It would be better to find a sect to learn martial arts than this one. If you stay in that martial arts school for a day, you have to become a disciple and join a gang, I can only say that the rubbish protagonist has no vision.

The pace of training is a bit too fast. You can write more, such as developing things that are stronger than warriors at the same stage.

It was written in such a hurry, I feel like the pace could be slowed down a bit 😏🤫

Very well written and very enjoyable to read

It would be better if the exercises have passive magical powers

Very good, come on. I have never been able to find a good book in this style, and I want to write one myself. Unfortunately, I am too busy with work and have limited writing skills. But now it's up to you, hahaha

Follow-up reading is so important to this book. If you have time, please turn to the last page of the latest chapter, which shows the page read by the xxth person.