My Mysterious Journey to the Mountains

Rare and exotic objects are used as dowries, and hundreds of thousands of mountains are used as betrothal gifts. I just want to say that anyone who commits the crime of smuggling precious animals protected by the state shall be sentenced to a fixed-term imprisonment of not less than five years but not more than ten years, and shall also be fined; if the circumstances are particularly serious, he shall be sentenced to a fixed-term imprisonment of not less than ten years or life imprisonment, and his property shall be confiscated. In addition, land is owned by the state and collectively. It is prohibited for any unit or individual to buy or sell land.

Ignore the introduction, ignore the title, and ignore the rebirth setting at the beginning. This novel is really good. It has the qualities of a masterpiece and is suitable for adaptation into an online movie. To be honest, the rebirth setting in the early stage is really unnecessary, and it is a bit exaggerated. Its only function is to tell the protagonist to cherish his fiancée, and it has nothing to do with the main plot. The name is "Mountain Walker", which is very cool. Although it is not very friendly to new authors, if you have writing skills, you can survive the early stage and take off. If you really can't write an introduction, it won't work. It won't attract people and will drive them away.

It is written about modern times but there are some weird things that are a bit hard to understand.

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I was a little confused when I saw the fox getting married. The protagonist has experience as a mountain walker. What kind of ashes and widow's tears were prepared before going up the mountain? In the end, he almost died at the hands of a fox. So why did the murderer survive without any preparation, and nothing happened at all. Why can the fox only detect the protagonist's scent of a living person? Why was the murderer not discovered by the fox? Did the author put too much pressure on the protagonist? I'm afraid that everything will be smooth sailing for the protagonist and there will be no plot to write.

A semi-disabled male protagonist who was out of breath even when picking up the garbage went into the mountains for the first time. He dared to climb a cliff with bare hands without protective equipment... The corners of his mouth turned up at every turn, and he was immediately persuaded to quit.

The front ones are fine. From the time I got to the tomb, it was either written by someone else or by AI. The preface does not match the postscript, and many characters' names appear inexplicably, and they are incoherent. Bye bye

The first step was fine, but I went to the tomb to persuade them to quit. Don't tell me that other people have done nothing in archeology for a lifetime. As soon as you came here, all kinds of ghosts appeared, and you even got involved with the police chief and so on. According to modern people's thinking, as long as any mountain spirits and ghosts dare to show up, they are destroying mountains and destroying temples. What kind of monsters and mountain gods are there? If they dare to harm people, the mountains will be blown up for you. You really treat others as fools.

When encountering a shocking or incredible event, the pupils will either dilate, constrict, shrink slightly, or twitch. These adjectives come back and forth. My dear, you have so many eyesores.

After reading the previous 5 chapters, no wonder I wrote this beginning to call others mentally retarded. Whoever wrote this good book is wrong about rebirth. When I see an important person, my mother, my father, or all kinds of things, I lower my body to be moved and cry. It is written so straightforwardly that it is easy for you to feel yourself except for the author who wrote it yourself. As a reader, I really hate this kind of beginning. You can write it from the side or put it at the back, but if you put it in the front and focus on the description, it is disgusting. , I started reading books like Abnormal Human Lost Chronicles. Unfortunately there are too few. What you wrote above is so touching that it won't impress the readers.

It actually started off well, and the subject matter was quite interesting. I thought it was a young grass, but it turned out that it started to feed poison after taking the wild ginseng. As a mountain walker, I thought I would walk hundreds of thousands of mountains and explore the wonders of the world, but it turns out that all the good things are in your Zhaojiacun mountains, right? Mountain walking ginseng is written as hard to come by, but it turns out that it is available in your mountains, and it is even rarer. Background In the modern world of science and technology, atheists or people who do not believe in superstition go into the mountains a lot, and it is normal for them to talk about gods and ghosts without any restraint. But when a TV station went to your mountain to film a documentary, you were possessed by a mountain spirit? According to this, many people around the world should have disappeared inexplicably or died in the deep mountains and old forests. The logic is messed up. Forced feeding of poison And it is easy to get lost when a TV station goes into the mountains to shoot. They go into the mountains without hiring a local. After being possessed by the evil spirit, you rely on your paper to escape the danger, and then you realize that you have entered. Deep in the mountains, and then I actually want to find the protagonist by relying on footprints. There are mostly dead leaves and weeds in the mountain forest, and it is rare to find footprints. The puppy is so small, and it can actually follow the puppy's footprints clearly in the mountains. What kind of awesome eyesight is this? I don't know how to connect the plot and force it to yy, right? It makes my scalp numb.

Tired. It's getting harder and harder to read a novel. Originally, I only needed to be a Shennong, but now I still need to distinguish whether it was written by a human or an AI. I came up with a good material for nothing. It started out pretty well. It was probably co-written by human and AI. It became more and more excessive, and when I started going to the tomb, all the AI ​​was generated by visual inspection. The key is to choose a weird AI tool that doesn't have a preface and a follow-up, not to mention whether it's smooth or not, whether it has emotions or not, the logic doesn't make sense, and it can't even follow the plot. I am also convinced by this writer who is reluctant to even deceive people. I am also a jian, and I actually ordered more than 300 chapters. While calling for cherishing the fruits of writers' labor and supporting genuine publications, no one cares about the AI ​​cheating of shabby writers. Just haha.

I was pleasantly surprised when I found this book at first. Although it had some flaws, I could still bear it. However, when it came to the tomb-robbing stage, the description was too watery and the plot was vague. There were no characters with distinctive personalities. The supporting characters lacked knowledge and life experience related to their professions. They knew nothing about it and couldn't even use it as a pendant.

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The more you get to the back, the more nonsense it becomes. It's almost impossible to watch. You can just give away thousand-year-old Ganoderma lucidum and thousand-year-old ginseng. The plot is incredible.

This background is really disappointing. What if you talk about an imaginary different world? Writing this in the current national context, don't you think it's a joke? What age is this? The Dragon King's son-in-law, urban superpower, must be reasonable.

Next to the tomb is nearly 100 chapters. Is the author being disgusting?

To be honest, the female protagonist is not in good health. The male protagonist said that he was determined to repent, but in the end, the female protagonist still went to work in the fields, and the male protagonist was a mountain driver, so the female protagonist had to do the work in the fields. I don't know how many acres of land there are, but if there is a lot of land, can the female protagonist's body bear it? I can't stand it anymore, so I gave up.

The front is a little better, you can read it, but you can let yourself go in the back. The title of the book should be changed to My Pretending to Climb the Mountains. It's too intellectual. The more you read, the less interesting it becomes.

This kind of novel has a modern background, which seems awkward no matter how you read it. Putting it in the background of the late Qing Dynasty and the Ming Dynasty brings in a lot more

The heroine came out wearing the same outfit as riding a donkey, came to see the protagonist, and did a little hygiene. Then she moved in without saying a word, without even discussing it in advance. It looked like a clueless person 😥

The idea is very puzzling. It is understandable that there were many strange things in the Republic of China. Is it still like this now? Or is it only like this here? The more I look at it, the less I can understand it.

Without further ado, let me ask, if one day you find a book, the content of which is obviously a variety of novels about ghosts and monsters, such as some yellow-skinned man seeking a seal or ginseng essence, etc... Then will you regard this book as a teaching material, follow it and implement it, and prepare to use the content in it to make money? If you choose yes, then congratulations, you are just like the protagonist of this book

This comment: Don't dare to fall into the trap, bye bye