National Beast Taming: I Became a Shadow Beast Tamer

The fat friend of the protagonist is not lovable. Is he really awesome? Or is he relying on the protagonist? If he is so pretentious, he is a troublemaker. He is not afraid of opponents who are like gods, but is afraid of teammates who are like pigs.

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Reasons for recommendation: The popular beast-controlling novels in recent years. Although the author is a novice, his writing style is acceptable. The image of the pet beast created in the article is a cute and cute image, which is very attractive to beast-controlling readers. The author is very careful in this regard, but he is somewhat inferior in character creation. The protagonist himself is slightly less intelligent, and the important supporting roles are The author's description of the protagonist's friend is quite unflattering, with a feeling that everything depends on the protagonist, and this important supporting character is described as a troublemaker. The author still needs to strengthen this aspect, but the description of the subtle emotions between pets is very warm and touching. It is a heartwarming beast-control novel! {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"} Book title: "Beast Taming for All: I Became a Shadow Beast Tamer" Author: Salt Baked Sugar Orange Tags: Time Travel, Beast Taming Flow , Goldfinger, Funny Status: Serialized Recommended index; four stars Plot introduction: Li Feng, a high school student, wakes up and travels through a parallel world, turning from a top student into a scumbag. Fortunately, those who travel through time must activate Goldfinger. With the blessing of the system, Li Feng has more abilities than others...

I just read the novel today, and after finishing it, I realized that it was actually a eunuch! ! ! ! So sad! ! ! ! !

I beg for no heroine 😭

[Qian Qianqing to follow up to read] If you like it, you can rest assured to read it, I will finish it. There may be some shortcomings in some aspects, after all, no one is perfect. (The following is my own talk) To put it briefly, according to my style, I prefer to write about exciting life-and-death battles. It is expected that the city line will end within a hundred chapters, and then we will officially enter the exciting wilderness. Now it is in a state of development. After all, it is not invincible at the beginning. It needs to develop slowly.

What is the positioning of the protagonist's pet? Xiaoying's benevolent form looks like a tank at first glance, right?

So far, it looks okay, but a bit childish, with a bunch of children playing around. I look forward to seeing growth in the future! The word count is relatively small, so I'll wait and see for now. The only thing that feels inappropriate is the talent of the protagonist. I think you can write some talents of other people, and then focus on highlighting the special shadow system of the protagonist. Otherwise, the title of the book will not match. It would be meaningless if you don't highlight the shadow system. But you have written that the protagonist's shadow system is special. Beast masters are not summoners. They can't make things out of thin air. They can only contract existing ones. So the talent is only the protagonist's. If you don't highlight the shadow type and use ordinary pet beasts as shields, you will only have two or three shadow types at most. So what's the point of this talent and the theme of the book?

Uh-huh! It has a retro feel from ten years ago! Not bad!

The grading of pet beasts, the grading of characters, and skill descriptions, are all these omitted?

Poor writing