Warhammer Ray of Hope

Emmm, Shushu, I really can't write about the dark, deep and desperate feeling of Warhammer's official version. Otherwise, you should treat this novel as a fan of Stars with Warhammer skin (display). Anyway, the rest of it is 100% written about Stars Technology

The writing is quite good. Angron himself is a tragic Primarch. I once read a post on Zhihu about what to do if you picked up a Primarch. One of the articles describes the future after picking up Angron and not letting him hit the Butcher's Nail. It made my heart beat. He is a very charming Primarch, but the length is too short and not satisfying. The author writes this book very well, come on.

In fact, I really want to see what the emperor thinks of the male protagonist. After all, the emperor can definitely tell what the male protagonist is at a glance... Then a problem arises for the emperor. A pretty good god really pops up in subspace. By the way, according to the setting of the male protagonist, he is not only the god of hope for mankind, but also the god of hope for the entire universe. In other words, don't be surprised to see the male protagonist at the door of someone's alien temple that day⁽⁽◝( •௰• )◜⁾⁾

I actually wrote it. I am very capable of taking action.

Now that I see it, let me tell you a little bit! Come on! Although the paragraphs are divided, there are still a lot of tone descriptions and demeanor descriptions. You can divide them more here, as well as the most important emotional expressions during the dialogue. In fact, when he finishes speaking, you can add some descriptions of actions and demeanor at the end. If you think this is more troublesome, then try to finish one sentence, and then directly follow the next line and then write another sentence, and try not to stick together. There are also some character portrayals, which is very important! For example, take the slave merchant in front of me. I originally wanted to say it, but the comment was swallowed up. Businessmen who can achieve this position are more or less smart. The author seems to write him as a kind of, um ~ fast food-style villain. In fact, when being chased, you can describe some of his threatening words. For example, if there is a rebellion, the lord will definitely send his predecessor over, etc., And when he is caught, he will threaten I feel like there is no need to write down the words. On a planet like this, most of the people who can become merchants, are rich, and can even hire divine machines are relatively smart. When they are caught, they can reflect their own value, such as providing some information about other arena slaves, water, food, and secret residences. Then the image of a cunning slave trader appears. The next thing I want to talk about is Angron, this is what I mainly want to say Angron, it is the Primarch, which means that he has his own human or divine side, and even if Angron shows kindness, in the eyes of many mortals, many of the Primarch's performances will be filtered a lot Mirror, just like Bat. There are many descriptions in the reign of terror he initiated. As soon as he appeared, many mortals would kneel to the ground subconsciously. Whether it was the Lion King or Guilliman, this behavior would not only be because of the height of the original body, but also because as the original body grew, their essence also improved. And the Angron here is developing normally and healthily. Before the Butcher's Nails were installed, Angron's personality was very similar to that of an angel, so you can try to refer to angels. The focus is still on Angron's character description. The description here can start from some details, as well as Angron's own language. Angron himself is set as a wet nurse. This is the key point! If there is a situation of returning to the empire later, you can still refer to the book "Lord of the Red Sand". Although the gender has been changed, I think the description of medical aspects is very good. Also, because Angron is by the protagonist's side, the degree of erosion of Chaos will be greatly reduced, but this does not mean that there is no such thing. It can also be expressed in some subtle aspects. The focus is still on the character description of the original body! ! ! ! As well as the way the brothers get along and the time when Angron was put on the Butcher's Nail, I don't believe that the Butcher's Nail is not the work of Slaanesh! And Khorne will definitely come to cause trouble later, not because of Angron, but because of the protagonist. Wasn't it described before that Khorne had used a knife on the protagonist? Then we can describe that Khorne and the others found some traces of pig's feet around Angron, so that we can pave the way for the subsequent story. And the most important ending outline! Whether the Empire can save this or not remains to be considered!

In fact, the protagonist's hook is not smooth enough. The more traditional world model is: Hell, human world, heaven. This set But the Warhammer universe is a deformity, Heaven and hell. The subspace is completely occupied, and the two concepts representing the past and the future are also occupied by the subspace. In the Well of Eternity in the hands of Tzeentch, you can see the past and the future. The Milky Way represents the present. If the protagonist peels off the concept of subspace representing the future when traveling through time and sends it to the undeveloped heaven (that is, the hyperspace sensed by the protagonist), the balance of the Warhammer universe can be restored. Most of people's emotional wishes for the future are positive, This part of the emotion will flow to the heaven that represents the future, And the memories about the past are always more negative emotions, This part of the emotion will flow to the subspace (hell) The hyperspace that the protagonist now allows people to link to is like the deep magic network of dnd, or the root power, which is a competition with the real universe.

For writing formats, you can look at Ashes Next Door or others. If you want to write more, you have to check the information. In addition to the original books, you can also check out other original works. I only watched some Great Expedition expansion films (Daqi).

Not bad, I hope I don't have to cut it.

Join Star Wars The Force? Congratulations! This book is dead

I knew this guy was going to be a loser, someone came and yelled insults

Luojia: There are gods in this universe Angron: That's right Luojia: Brother, you think so too, then join me in believing in the four gods Angron chopped off the gods with an axe. Luojia: I believe that even my brothers don't believe in that stuff...

The protagonist won't be a Chaos God like the four vendors, right?

To be honest, the emperor's opinion of the male protagonist is unclear, because the male protagonist is also a subspace god after all. On the contrary, the four gods may be kind to the male protagonist, especially Nurgle😁

Ah, the first time I heard this name, I thought it was Diga....

Hey, you can still persevere. Congratulations. Keep up the good work.

Because I am a cloud hammer as the author, so if there is something wrong in my writing, please remember to mention it in this chapter or in the comment area, so that I can change the plot in time, thank you everyone 😂

When did the protagonist become the strongest, biggest, most powerful, most domineering, super invincible guy?

Stop writing, take a break for a week, and write an outline before writing. Without an outline, it will collapse.

Stars or interstellar, there is instant communication technology, right? We can't just continue to use Warhammer and wait for decades for support to arrive, right? How can it be so inconvenient among the stars? In other words, you can launch a cosmic version of blitzkrieg, and T-34s rise up! ! !