Perfect World: the Ten Evil Immortals

How can I put it this way? I'm talking about perfection, but it's actually a fairy novel from a few years ago. The pace is slow and the writing is mediocre. The author can't control his writing skills. Anyone who has read The Perfect Overshadowing knows the feeling of pleasure. However, the author's writing is procrastinating, bland, and deliberately sensational. In short, it's very poor. I've read The Perfect Overthe Sky fanfic and it's quite good.

The lineup of the original Nine Heavens and Ten Earths plus the support of the Immortal Realm is stronger than that of the Alien Realm. As a result, the Immortal King of the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths made various waves and hindered his teammates. The foreign mixed doubles caught them and killed them directly, which resulted in the collapse of the Immortal Ancient and the defeat of the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths.

There are too many unreasonable places in the book. For example, Immortal Gu began to cultivate the laws of this world, and only after Immortal Gu was defeated did the laws of this world come into existence. For example, where did Immortal Gu come from the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths? For example, where did Immortal Gu come from the Virtual God Realm?

There were no Nine Heavens and Ten Earths in Immortal Ancient times, so be careful when writing.

System = eunuch text = rubbish, no one else.

The built-in plug-in is fine, what system do you need?

Thinking it was food and grass, Golden Three Chapters were poisoned to death

I just read a chapter. The author's thinking is unclear and his writing is not good. The Nine-leaf Sword Grass, which was born on the edge of chaos, can withstand chaos at least as a supreme mirror. It has an innate and sacred fruity taste. It ends up growing on a corpse. It cannot reach the Cave Heaven Realm and was almost eaten by some building ants.

Nine Nether Sword Grass, doesn't this thing start as a Supreme when you reach adulthood?

Did the author watch some animations before writing the book? Many of them are inconsistent with the original work.

Rubbish, the boss who hangs up is useless in the end. Even little Luo Luo has been fighting for a long time. And the author writes about fighting, which is all bullshit. How about a turn-based game?

Bye, it doesn't feel like a perfect world at all. It's just like a web game with cheats and upgrades.

When I first read this book, I thought I had encountered a good novel. As a result, the author's writing was not very good, and he added some of his own understanding into it. It looked confusing.

What I'm most afraid of is that the author doesn't write according to the setting. When writing "Zhe Tian" and "Perfect", you must refer to the trilogy. As long as you can satisfy Chen Dong's fans, you can earn a lot of money. Don't always add drama to yourself. Basically, the main line of the trilogy is very clear. For example, the primitive ancient world was invaded by darkness and alien races at the same time. The leading figures were caught off guard and beaten to death by a group of people. The world was broken into nine heavens and ten lands. In the early days of Immortal Ancient, the relationship between the primitive ancient world and the Immortal Realm was very harmonious. Most of the ten evil races moved into the primitive ancient world at that time. At that time, the two realms could work together to fight against foreign lands. At the end of the Immortal Ancient Period, the darkness came too fiercely, and the side effects of exposure to dark matter also appeared. This made the Immortal King of the Immortal Realm They were afraid, and then polarized, sitting back and watching the immortal kings of the primitive ancient world fight one by one in the wrangling At most, the immortal kings of the primitive ancient world were several times less than those of foreign lands, and the quality was generally not as good as foreign lands, Willow God, Endless, and Six Paths of Reincarnation. There were only these few giants in the primitive ancient world. What about foreign lands? The Red King, the Sword King, Wushang and the supreme giants in the boundary sea. It is mentioned in Perfection that the Immortal King can crush the defective Immortal King, the supreme Immortal King can easily defeat the ordinary Immortal King, the Immortal King giant does not take much effort to kill the Immortal King, but can still be besieged to death, and the Supreme Giant can basically kill the Immortal King without any damage and is not afraid of siege. Of course, forget about the big liquidation, but it shouldn't be difficult to escape. The following Ji Dian Immortal King and Emperor Guang Immortal King are even more outrageous. They are basically not the same as the Immortal King. They are the ultimate foundation of the normal world.

The World Tree will still be uncontrollable. This poisonous point alone will dissuade a lot of people. Even if you can control it later, no one will be in the mood to read it. Most people who read fan fiction like to see the protagonist being able to control everything. What's more, you can't control the World Tree you made yourself. It's ridiculous.

Is it okay not to use the system 🔨🔨🔨🔨

At the beginning of Foreign Land and Jiutian, Foreign Land harassed the border and killed Nine-leaf Grass and peacefully fought. Then the two realms went to war, and then the seven kings of the Borderlands rose up. The two sides fought back and forth. Samsara and Wu Ending also led a team to the foreign land to destroy an imperial clan in the foreign land. At that time Jiutian still had the advantage. Then the darkness invaded, causing everyone in Jiutian to be in danger. Most of the seven kings of the borderland died, and several more immortal kings were corrupted, and several were killed by the fallen immortal kings. Then Jiutian began to self-examine and stabilized the situation. Liu Shen saw that the battle situation was still stable and went to Jihai. Then the foreign land started a full-scale war and proposed a turtle-board battle. At this time, the fairyland revealed The news made the whereabouts of other Immortal Kings known to Yiyu. Yiyu sent a small team to ambush the Immortal King and the Ten Fierce who rushed to the battlefield, and the result was a big victory. At this time, Xianyu was a little panicked, fearing that Yiyu would attack Xianyu after its complete victory, so he sent several Immortal Kings and Immortals to support Jiutian, and took advantage of the chaos to rob Jiutian and kill a few enemies.

That's so fucking awesome, 18 female protagonists, and she said at the beginning that she only loves Liu Shen.

All kinds of OOC and timeline confusion, emmmm

I'm annoyed when I see the system! Puppet flow