Tyra Bandits from Arknights

Let me tell you before you read it, there is no heroine, please, I'm really fed up with those Ark fandoms who ignore the characters of the operators, write awkward emotional lines, and brainlessly add a harem to the protagonist.

The author is revising the work significantly, and the plot structure will basically not change, but I will change the first 2,000-word chapters to about 4,000 words. If it is already about 4,000 words, you can eat it with confidence.

The author's level of practice is pretty good! Although Uncle, Hong Didi and Sister 42 are not there yet, the day before yesterday, 4 singles were issued and a horn was drawn! I also practiced it very quickly 🙂 🙂 🙂

My new limited edition! I had given up hope after dozens of strokes in the morning, but one shot in the evening was straight into my soul! The millions of Longmen coins I saved are in big crisis...

Please post some posts! I have written tens of thousands of words

Halfway through the book, I will talk about my own feelings and suggestions (1) There is no main line. I am talking about the main line that runs through the whole book, not the small tasks of the system (of course, I think this may also be related to the short length of the book) (2) The dialogue, behavior and some descriptions are very childish, I understand The author wants to write that kind of humorous and nonsensical rhythm, but it is definitely not written like this. The author should think about it again (3) I think the protagonist should be more stable and have a long-term perspective. After reading this protagonist, I have the impression that he is a stupid person who relies on numerical values to overwhelm others. He is not firm in doing things and does not have a long-term perspective. Ideals or goals, of course, I know this is cool, but it will appear relatively new. I think Ark fan fiction should not be a novice novel, because I think the background of the game Arknights determines that its fan fiction should be a somewhat in-depth fan fiction (I am not saying that the fan fiction cannot be written in a light and humorous way, I think it can be relaxed in daily life, but in The main plot, in general, should be a bit in-depth. ) Finally, I can really understand that the writing is not good for a new book. I typed so many words, and I also hope that the book will be better and more exciting, and the author can make some progress. There is absolutely no negative meaning. I hope the author can understand me, and book friends will be merciful.

The author decided to update ten times a day this week as a challenge to himself~

I am also very capable, okay. Now the golden team is basically full, and the level of training has also improved a lot. I am just waiting for this anniversary celebration to win Hongdidi.

I am an author, but the review deleted the Kunkun element in the name of my work. I had no choice but to change the name, these little black guys.

It's quite interesting, but updates are slow.

The previous stuff has been completely revised, about two weeks ago, and even the first chapter was revised to more than 8,000 words. As a first-time author, I didn't know how to send a notice, but I've been a little out of inspiration lately, so I must have been up until eight in the morning!

Happy Anniversary⊙▽⊙I have been playing Arknights for 3 years!

I read the first five chapters and tried the poison. Although in terms of results, there is no better Ark fandom chapter than yours, because at the beginning of the novel with the Doctor as the protagonist, it is impossible to jump to the awakening of Rhodes Island to start the story line Even if it is only half a day in advance, the Doctor will have It takes a lot of time to adapt and assemble the troops, not to mention that the protagonist of this article has a certain combat power and is decisive in capturing enemy cadres The setting and description of the protagonist are too bad But Haran Duhan's writing is really awesome. Grid Felt military armor, short bow and scimitar, the Nightmare Khan's treasure horse trampled on the deserted rock plains, he touched the arrows, set up the bow, and condensed the screaming darkness The ruined army from the history of The seal was broken, and the nightmare Qixue woke up from nothingness in an instant - Qianqi swung his sword at the enemy of Khan He let go and shot another arrow in the air, the felt flags were scattered, the military shadows were dense, the nightmare drowned the sun Towards the end of the heavenly journey, breaking through the end of the earth! The yellow sand of Sargus, the hills of Casimir, and the mountains of the endless ice fields are never the end of the nightmare. His journey to heaven will eventually cross all human boundaries, and the whole world will be alarmed by the nightmare again...

Has the author been to Xujiakou?