Vermilion Under the Moon

Well, say happy birthday to yourself! 😊

Put some pressure on yourself, two chapters a day in May😄

It was quite warm and healing at first, and it felt quite interesting. The haunted house was really scary at the beginning, and the fight afterward was confusing. In fact, I feel that those two chapters can be expanded on. For example, how did the protagonist's left hand become a fingerprint, how did Han Yi become possessed, and after beating the protagonist, did you not ask about the cause and effect? He doesn't want to know what I think! (Maybe the author wrote it later, but I only saw the beginning of the class reunion chapter, and I just couldn't help but complain)

Please collect the new book, recommend it, and support it! Thanks!

It's 300,000 words, and you haven't signed a contract yet...

The overall writing is good, and the subject matter is very attractive~ A few suggestions for the author (I think so, don't criticize if you don't like it) It can be seen that the author wants to leave foreshadowing and bury big holes, but sometimes things are not fully explained clearly. From the front, I thought Qin Ning was a novice ghost, but it wasn't until later that I realized how naughty he was. As for the transition between this, I hope it will be explained more clearly~ There is also a change of perspective. Sometimes Hanyi is on the owl, sometimes in Qin Ning's shadow, and sometimes attached to Shen Ni. The descriptions in the previous chapters are a bit confusing to me. I didn't know who was speaking (that is, who was speaking in the possessed state), so I realized later that it was him talking~ Finally, I hope the author will write better and better~ The subject matter is very attractive 😍

I think the story is pretty good, but why haven't I signed the contract yet?

Come on, author, I've been watching your updates for a long time, and I give you my daily recommendations. I wish you an early signing!

Haha, the old bookworm is here after smelling it 😃