Douluo: the Attack Speed Is 100 Times Faster at the Beginning, and Everything Will Be Shot.

Has the author never read the original work? He actually said that he could not exceed level 3 innate soul power and would not be able to break through to level 10 in his lifetime. Which second setting did the author look at too much?

The hanging idea is a good one. . But I picked the wrong fan. . Douluo is a world that purely depends on level. You are written as a 12-year-old. No matter how big your fault is, it can't make up for this poisonous point, especially when you write a cool novel. . Even if you add this idea to the Divine Seal Throne, it will still be stronger than Douluo.

In the original work, Tang San didn't seem to care at all about this work-study student quota. He even wanted to stay and learn crafts from his father. . . . .

A hundred times the poisonous attack at the beginning, poisoning the readers

I read three chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. Can Tang San give Xuantian Baolu directly to you so simply and easily? Who did Dou Yi teach Tang Sanxuan Tianbaolu to in his original work? It's too natural to take it for granted. I gave up.

The author of the appraisal has not read the original work. It is not normal to be unable to defeat the six-ring defense in one ring. The protagonist is laughed at even if he cannot defeat it.

Author, you have neither read the original novel nor the anime, right?

Can someone who doesn't even understand the original work really write a good fanfic?

I've been reading at Qidian for almost three days. This is the first time I've seen a book like this that can be put on the shelves in just twenty chapters. It must have something to say. Don't say whether this book is good or bad. I have read several Douluo fanfics, and this book's plot, writing, and characters' intelligence are on par with the Douluo fandom sewer level. The basic settings are not clear. It was obviously written by a cloud author. I suspect it is an assembly line product written by AI or the official studio of Qidian.

Could the author change the part about being willing to die? It feels a bit discouraging.

After reading the introduction, a question came to mind. If the level of innate soul power is too low, the growth will be slow. If the level of innate soul power is high, others are at level 30. Is it useful to have a level 10 fire rate that cannot break through the defense?

If the author really doesn't know how to write, wouldn't it be easier to write about it if he added a golden finger about having many children and having many blessings, and attacking the harem a hundred times faster?

Why didn't the author replace the listening part with the storyteller? It looks great, but it doesn't have the tone of the storyteller.

I have reached chapter 40, and I won't tell you that there is a big bag in front of it. Were you a child before you traveled through time? The thinking is immature, even a little naive. Sometimes it looks like... A child imitating an adult's feelings. Bag is, your 100 times attack speed is great, but first of all, your arrows are not made out of thin air, right? Secondly, if you want to keep up with your reaction speed, do you need to keep up with your physical strength? So it looks unreal... That's all. Come on

I suggest that the author read the original work once he has time. There are quite a few loopholes in the writing, and some of the plots are indeed discouraging.

What are you doing? Ouch😓, that Xuan Tianbao masturbation in the second picture is really awesome, but it's quite poisonous. I love watching it and support you. Come on, come on.

Why does the author have to write that Tang San could not enroll in school? He, Tang Hao 6, was still Tang Sansheng not long ago when he arrived at Holy Soul Village and was competing with local residents for work-study students.

Why do I feel that this hundred times speed is only for the arrow speed? . . . . How can a crossbow with a speed of a hundred times achieve penetrating power? Speed ​​is power.

It's pretty good. It's great to beat Tang San violently.

Why don't you use the Immortal Grass, Poseidon's Heart, and Shrek's people to work harder a hundred times? Speed ​​is power, are you serious? A hundred times speed is not a hundred times flat!

Give your woman a higher soul ring life! ! ! , Really! !