I'm Really Grateful to Be Reborn

The new book is almost 200,000 words long. I have limited writing skills and little experience. It has not been recommended yet. However, it is indeed a happy thing to have book friends who are willing to read it. If nothing else happens, they will probably finish the book seriously. The high school chapter has almost reached 70%, and the pace will be accelerated slightly later. If you have any comments or suggestions, you can help me put them forward. Thanks very much to several friends for their monthly tickets and rewards. I wish you all a smooth life and all your wishes come true.

To be honest, the idea of cultivating immortals appears now. It's not ten years ago. It's okay that novels ten years ago had this thing. Now the market doesn't accept it. The main reason is that your main line will be stretched and the plot will be delayed in the later period. There is really no need for this thing to appear, and you want to change it now. It's not easy to change. I think it's a failure for you to lay this foreshadowing in the front. You see, those popular urban rebirth novels didn't explain why they were reborn until the finale, why they didn't write it, because the plot has been written long ago, and all the interesting things that can be written in those previous novels have been written. You If you want to write this, the plot will definitely become watery in the later stage, and it will collapse accidentally. But in general, you are already very good at writing this for the first time, but the plot progresses too fast. When you get to the Shura field later, how sweet the previous ones will be, how uncomfortable the later ones will be, especially Don't worry about Lu. If you don't do it right, Lu's character will collapse. But overall, your pace is too fast. The emotional line is much faster than the career line, and the career line will be watery later, and the overall rhythm will be slow. The above is my personal opinion. If there is anything wrong, please correct me.

Thanks for the tip, come on author, I really like your book

I've read it and read 10 chapters. It's pretty good. Do you have any old books? Or maybe you can give me your previous vest and go over and read some old books. There are too few new books.

You can write well, come on! The characterization is great.

The writing by Lu Xiaomi and her parents was not as good as that of her grandmother. It was too philistine. I suggest that there be fewer scenes in the future, not write it, or change it. The characters can be more realistic but you also have to pay attention to whether the readers like them or not. Just this mother-in-law can persuade some readers away now. If something goes wrong later, the subscriptions will definitely be lost. The author should consider it himself.

I used this to replace Teacher Xiao Qiao

It's very well written, I hope the author keeps it up and doesn't get sick. Don't have any regrets. After reading this, the author should finish it and write the next one as soon as possible. You have ruined this one, and it becomes more and more nonsense as it goes on. The plot about the female singer persuaded me to quit, and I heard that there is also a plot about cultivating immortality. . . .

Very well written, well written, recommended

It's actually pretty good to watch, not rushed or slow, but the pace may not be suitable. Nowadays, I like to watch fast-paced movies.

Author, Damn, don't you have a QQ group?

The first part of this book is okay, but if the heroine is stuck in two, it will be just right. Your Xiaomi and Dujuan have completely lost the desire to read it.

Not bad, good, order it all 😍

If you don't like the protagonist in the harem, the country won't allow it.

This is not about one love, it is about many loves.

It's a pretty good novel. I like the character of the male protagonist very much. He is very stable. Unlike some novels where the male protagonist is written as a loser. I really like Xiao Qiao's character in the early stage. Later, the girls' characters are more similar. I just remember that Du Juan is a little bit different.

Alas, it's over. It was pretty good. I hope the next one will be better.

Open a new book, open a new book, look forward to it

The author is finally up. I have watched it from the beginning. From the beginning, there was no one. At that time, I was always afraid that you would suddenly disappear. Until now, I have basically subscribed to everything.

The title of the book is "Rebirth: I'm Not a Scumbag". The protagonist is reborn in 2013, with a successful career and love. The IQ of the main and supporting characters is online throughout the book. Highly recommended!

It's really good, but it's too short and not satisfying.

The book is a good book, but it's a pity that it collapsed.

Come on come on! Love this style! !

It's not good to watch. The characters' backgrounds and emotions are poorly written, and the new characters are also written very blandly. Also, the two sisters-in-law's introductions are misleading. The biggest word count is just the lyrics. It's so sleepy to read. Compared to Lao Zhou's "Rebirth and Rejection of Qingmei," it's not at the same level.

Come on, come on 😎😎