Extraordinary: I Created a Mysterious Organization

Too slow

I have been reading it for a while and I just read the last few chapters. As the author himself said, the new writer's techniques are immature and his writing style is not delicate enough. How to say it? The whole story is spoken in plain language. What's the problem? In fact, it's not much of a problem. Mainly because it doesn't have much appeal. If you continue to write like this, you may not be able to follow up. The author needs some simplification later. The pace is faster. If I think about myself, you may not be able to write 300 pages if you write like this. Now you only have more than 40 comments in total. You probably don't have much follow-up reading either. As time goes by, you may not be able to persist.

Although there is no heroine, the content left me confused. First, why did the official send a message to the protagonist as soon as they knew he had awakened his extraordinary power? The protagonist has never been out. The protagonist's golden finger is an extraordinary APP or an editor of extraordinary forces. It feels like there is an editor of extraordinary forces in the extraordinary APP!

From the title, it is obvious that the protagonist wants to create a supernatural organization on his own. After reading Golden Chapter 3, the world suddenly mutates, and there are strange and extraordinary people resurrecting. The protagonist has his own extraordinary power and should build his own extraordinary organization. Then he needs to hide himself and absorb talents. My personal suggestion is to err on the side of failure in the end. I wonder if the protagonist will create a supernatural organization similar to the Western Knights of the Round Table, or one similar to Eastern mythology? Named after this? You can create a constellation organization, 28 constellations, Zhoutian Xingdou, twelve heavenly stems and earthly branches, etc.

I thought it was the protagonist's golden finger, but it turns out everyone has it 😒

How can a protagonist without a golden finger stand out among millions of people? The problem is that this protagonist is not a seasoned earner, and his character is not eye-catching.

I really don't see the two labels of behind-the-scenes flow and caution. Whatever my subordinates do, I do it myself and return the favor to someone behind the scenes 🤫

Were you possessed by Lezi when you chose Extraordinary?

Did the person created by the protagonist originally exist in the world and then inserted a false memory about the protagonist? Or did the world not exist and the system created the person and then changed the perceptions of the people around him, making them think that this person existed. I don't understand (=_=)

Some inspiration suggestions for the author: 1. The most loyal lance of destruction, the protagonist's split soul - the anchor point. 2. The pure natural disaster that purifies sin, the infectious meme called 'Justice', infects humans into a powerful monster with the purpose of tearing apart the veil that covers the dirt of human nature. The same feature is that the face is covered with flesh and blood, and is half of a pure white mask. 3. The Angel of Power of the Western Alliance, a symbol of 'power' created by ancient alchemy. 4. The Tsukuyomi ghost in District 11, the king of weirdness - the desire originating from the sins of living beings, only sends revelations when people's hearts desire the most, and pulls them into a dream world that never wakes up. 5. The historical text of Yan Empire, the stone tablet exists in the form of flesh and blood activated, born from all the distorted and tampered history, and has the ability to modify history. 6. The Vampire Queen of the Cathedral Cemetery, the ancestor of the Blood Ancestor, gives eternal life and allows followers the power to never fall into death. Have a party! In the name of the Blood Ancestor, grab the grace of blood in this vast epic... And then - bloom! 7. The coelacanth, the overlord of the sky, wanders between twelve parallel timelines. It is proof of the oath made by the King of the Void and the will of Gaia - it is still creating a parallel world with a real 'happy end'... That is, a perfect world without humans!

The mysterious organization had better be secretive and private, otherwise how to become the golden finger of the protagonist. Even if you want to be official, you should be just one of them, a relatively large organization that has been established. Rather than the kind that the official can check in the background, just like the protagonist of a novel traveling through a different world, the identity of the traveler and the golden finger he possesses must not be exposed even to the closest people.

Popular science? (I think everyone has some questions about the protagonist's golden finger, let me talk about it) 1. The app can be regarded as a resource given to the seed by the will of the earth to help it upgrade, and everyone can only choose one of the two. The golden finger of the protagonist is to grab both resources given by the will of the earth and integrate, optimize and upgrade them. Not the extraordinary apps that those book-eaters think, you know? 2. Generally speaking, the first horse in this situation is to cross the river by feeling the stones, so it will be a matter of time before the horse falls off. The horses built later can develop and grow rapidly if their "brothers" block guns and pave the way. The "brothers" take the blame and the benefits belong to the "younger brothers". According to this trend, the horses behind each other are "fat" and "stronger" than the last. 3. There is something I want to say but I feel it is unnecessary. The author specifically explained that it is for "maintaining stability", don't you understand? That's okay, the author doesn't care about children at all. Ps: Don't come and argue with me if you say something ugly! Don't come and fight with me! Don't come and fight with me! If anyone comes to argue with me, you are right. Being courteous to children is a traditional virtue of our Chinese culture. 🤝

I haven't read it yet, so I'd like to ask if this book is a vest-style book or a book for people. I'm really tired of seeing the entire organization being full of protagonists.

I prefer behind-the-scenes streaming, but the early stage of your book is not exciting. It feels like you are fighting monsters and leveling up.

It's very well written, don't be a eunuch.

Personal charm, personal strength, command and management. Which path the protagonist takes? In terms of charm, I really don't know what the protagonist has. In terms of strength, he is not the strongest. When it comes to command and management, I honestly can't tell that the protagonist has any command and management ability. The aspect of personal charm that people can summon through the system can be ignored, but one of the other two protagonists is at least one! Otherwise, if a power boss is not the strongest, his command and management will not be embarrassing.

I saw Chapter 7 and couldn't stand it anymore 😭

Gu Sui: Disu Kung Fu: Pure Yang Sword Canon Weapon: White: Pure Yang Sword, Wandering Dragon Sword, Suppressing Demon Sword Stars: Purpose of power: protect the human race, kill evil spirits Different Force Specialization: Technique Specialization Force Destiny: Deterrence, Bloodline Evolution Kung Fu Library: Basic Body Forging Technique - Advanced Body Forging Technique - Basic Body Forging Technique - Advanced Body Forging Technique - Constellation Body Forging Technique, Spica forging method, Jisu forging method, Ojuku forging method, Fangsu food and energy method, Xujiang general exercise method Leader: Spica - Su Qianyu: Detailed explanation of spearmanship; Spearmanship specialization; High position First level of power - Xingxiu Canglong: Disu—Gu Sui Jisu—Wanhao: Sea King Boxing Code; mastery of fists and kicks; Nanquan Ojuku—Zhou Luofei: Xiantian Zhenwulu; sacred; suppressing killing Fangsu—Luo Feng : Gather Qi to collect wealth; eat Qi and move Canglong: Jiao, Kang, Di, Fang, Xin, Wei, Ji Xuanwu: Dou, Ox, Female, Xu, Danger, Room, Wall White Tiger: Kui, Lou, Wei, Subaru, Bi, Xi, Shen Suzaku: Jing, Gui, Liu, Xing, Zhang, Yi, Zhen Second level of authority—Xingguan Yu Xiangming, Li Shao, Feng Yisi, Li Zhenhong, Feng Jingchu There are forty-six star officials in the Eastern Qisu There are sixty-five star officials in the Northern Qisu Fifty-four star officials in the Western Qisu Forty-two star officials in the Southern Qisu Three levels of power - ordinary members Zuo Pan, Pang Yu, He Jin, Jian Cai, character frame

The writing is okay, but the behind-the-scenes and later stages are very difficult to write. I hope the author can take good control of it

It's a pity that the app was really interesting before it came out. After it came out, the quality suddenly dropped to a low level and turned into a game-type novel.

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It can be seen that the author wanted to create a hodgepodge of guiyi and mutual invasion of other worlds, but you can't grasp it at all. I originally thought that the main plot was the mutual invasion of different worlds, and then the protagonist secretly developed, but the author almost missed it. It made a lot of mistakes that people behind the scenes make. Of course, luckily the author didn't make them. Let the official organization that protects ordinary people sacrifice a large number of people, and then the protagonist finally appears to save them. A plot like this is really disgusting. I don't know if many authors regard the world they set as nourishment or investment when writing such plots. When you are in true love, if you set nutrients, then there is no need to save the world. If you are in true love, why write out a bunch of mortals and the heroes who protect mortals? One more thing, don't make the power system of the world view too complicated. Not many people can grasp it. Many books with complex energy systems have failed.

What's going on with this mess? A eunuch?

After reading two chapters, come on, the author, I lacked imagination and slipped away.

In fact, you have some popular material, but the writing system is very immature and weak.

This is eunuch, I haven't started subscribing yet

What does it mean? The preparation was ruined. After it was put on the shelves, the protagonist just lay down and followed the crowd. It was all a mess.