Douluo: Angel Wuhun at the Beginning, Chased by Tang Hao

It was written by AI. There are many inexplicable characters (such as Holy Spirit Douluo? Ye? Xiao Xuan? What is this, this is...). After becoming a god, his combat power collapsed. The plot also started to be confusing. For example, Tang San suddenly had the Blue Silver Emperor, and A Yindu was obviously resurrected. The God War has been going on for several times, and Bibi Dong said, "Are you a god?" And Xiao Wu actually jumped on Gu Yuena's face. What is this😅

I don't quite understand the author's reason for concealing his identity. How could Bibi Dong compete with Qian Daoliu? Qiandaoliu was definitely the pope before Qianxunji. The Qianjia had always controlled the power at the highest level. Most of the middle-level people, as long as the older generation, probably knew Qiandaoliu. As long as Qiandaoliu was willing to Bibi Dong, could he disagree with the choice of the Holy Son? Why?

The surname is Qian Wuhun and he is an angel If the last name is a coincidence The Wuhun can't be a coincidence, right? From the perspective of people in "Douluo Dalu", Wuhun is inherited from both parents. Even if it is a mutated Wuhun, then what Wuhun mutated into an angel Plus Tian Wuhun has always been unique to Wuhun Palace You dare to show up in front of Tang Hao with such arrogance. If he doesn't kill you, I despise him. He deserves to be beaten to death. It's that simple. Beating him to death is too cheap. He should be tortured severely, let him die in pain and despair, and finally be thrown to the dogs.

What a fucking pervert. Tang Hao must be beaten and killed once before the game starts, right?

It's poisonous, my surname is Qian, Angel Wuhun. It's not very obvious. It just says on my face that I am from Wuhun Palace. If you tell everyone on Douluo Continent that you are not from Wuhun Palace, who will believe it?

There are too many poisonous points. In the beginning, they become enemies with Tang Hao. After that, both the Silver Dragon King and Qian Daoliu can easily defeat Tang Hao and avenge the protagonist. Then the protagonist is very ambitious and expresses that he wants to avenge himself. Later, when he is not strong enough, he will jump in front of Tang Hao repeatedly. Also, the author doesn't know how to write original plots, so he was going to take the Shrek route, but he was afraid of being scolded by readers, so he chose not to join Shrek, and then wrote a bunch of shit-like group plots without joining Shrek.

It's very poisonous, and the leveling pressure is extremely cruel. Two god-level soul powers are awakened, and only the innate full soul power is given. The first soul ring feeds back one level after ten thousand years, and the second soul ring feeds back one level after fifty thousand years. It took two and a half years in the first stage to reach eight levels. I gave up decisively. I can't stand it anymore. I can't watch Douluo's leveling up.

Illegitimate son is a der, Qiandaoliu is out of his mind? Qian Renxue is Qian Xunji's orphan. The protagonist is several years younger than Qian Renxue, so it's impossible to think about it with your feet. Could it be that Qian Renxue's ghost did it after his death?

Didn't the God of Destruction in the original work think about expanding the divine realm until death? How could he become the God Realm and it wouldn't matter anymore?

I would like to ask how the author reasonably arranged for a 6-year-old child to escape from Tang Hao's hammer? Could it be a halo of wisdom? To force Tang Hao to be wise?

When the protagonist faces Tang Hao, he can speak whatever he wants, fight when he wants, and leave when he wants. Why is he invincible at the beginning? Tang Hao kills the soul master and has to activate his martial soul avatar. I don't know, but he thinks Tang Hao is a great soul master. You might as well just start the game with the protagonist beating Tang Hao. I always thought it was Tang Hao catching a mouse, and the great priest rushed to the rescue with an angel costume. The result is that tm Tang Hao does not use soul skills and only assigns one soul master to give massage. Qianxunji is really trash.

Let me evaluate the poisonous points 1: The protagonist's first soul ring lasts for 1.5W years and has an attached soul bone, and the soul power has accumulated to level 20. The second soul ring was 50,000 years ago, and he almost killed himself. He had no soul bones or anything, and his soul power only reached level 22? So what is the use of this 50,000-year-old soul ring? Two: The title of the protagonist is very twisted. The name "Qian Yu" on the picture that absorbs the soul ring appears almost 50 times! ! In terms of title, the protagonist's relatives should call the protagonist by his nickname or nickname to show intimacy! Instead of calling him by his first name all the time! ! Three: The fourth soul ring's soul power has only risen by 3 levels in 100,000 years! Four: Can we understand it this way? If the protagonist's first martial soul has such a long life ring, wouldn't the second martial soul start at 1,000,000 years? So what is the role of the 1,000,000-year soul ring? You can't increase your soul power level anyway!

Oh shit. He was reduced to intelligence, and it was a life-and-death feud, but he still let Tang San live? Are the educational resources of Wuhun Palace not good? Are you going to lick Shrek? Isn't the grass jelly fragrant?

This book is so rubbish. In the early stage, it completely copied the plot of the original work of Douluo Dalu. There was a burst of magical changes, and some of the protagonist's cool actions were also very confusing. Some of the level upgrades made people shake their heads. In short, it is best not to read this book if you can.

Good guy, just good guy, okay? It took more than 180 photos to see Qian Renxue appear. During this period, was Qian Renxue dead? There was such a big trouble in Wuhun Palace. As the young master of Wuhun Palace, how could Qian Renxue not know about it? Qian Renxue didn't have any scenes at all in the early stage.

After reading the previous chapters, what does the protagonist say? He yelled and yelled "xx! Xx!" At every turn. 😅Dude, you are a time traveler + protagonist after all, please be more mature.

Alas, you are really not suitable for writing novels. What you write is a complete mess. I read Chapter 71 from the first chapter. Everything you write can make people mad, do you understand?

Being chased by Tang Hao, tsk tsk tsk, six. Still alive. Six. Brother Xiao Yan has to pass cigarettes.

After being patient for twenty years, Bibi Dong finally took action. He slowly raised his head and looked at the luxurious dome of the conference hall. Teacher, you died at the hands of Tang Hao, the Haotian Sect. It is time to avenge you. (Original text, and Qian Renxue is already twenty at this time) To be honest, I was dumbfounded. The author wrote a mess in the middle. I glanced at it later and it was a mess. I felt that he was so excited about writing that he probably didn't know what he was writing.

Why is the main character unable to awaken more six wings? I really don't have enough thinking. To be honest, I think another Douluo book is right. After Tang San destroyed the Wuhun Palace, who will awaken the Wugui for the people of the world and protect the world.

It's hard to describe the writing in one sentence. Hey, author, read it carefully after you finish writing. There are too many words, really.

Didn't Xiao Wu become Bibi Dong's soul ring? Why did it come out again on Poseidon Island? Didn't Tang San not get the eight spider spears? Why was it written on Poseidon Island that he couldn't deploy the eight spider spears when he traveled through Poseidon's Light because he was carrying someone on his back? How did Tang San's Blue Silver Emperor awaken? And Tang San and the others didn't have fairy grass. How come the seven monsters on Poseidon Island were at the same level as in the original book, and the seven monsters could practice so fast without fairy grass? Also, it was said before that Tang San had no fairy grass, so the fourth ring was a thousand-year soul ring. Later, it was written as a ten-thousand-year soul ring, and it has not been changed back. Why did this book change back and forth? Things that were dead in the front suddenly came alive, and things that were not in the front suddenly appeared in the back. What happened?

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There are quite a few poisonous points, eh eh eh 🙂

You are so handsome, Fu. If you don't Bian Bian, none of Tang San's family would be considered good at writing fan fiction 🤭

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To be honest, I don't understand Gu Yuena, and I'm also very disgusted. At the beginning, the male and female protagonists are developed!

I can't read it when I read it as a normal article, but I can't read it when I read it as a cool article. . .

The writing is a bit verbose. The tasks are too detailed and really verbose.

After reading the previous chapters, I was persuaded to quit. I was chased by Tang Hao at the beginning. Tang Hao was level 96. Lian Su Yuntao was more than 20 levels. Tang Hao usually died with one hammer. The hero started with two martial arts souls. At level 10, he gave Haotian Douluo a serious hammer and he didn't die? Surviving by jumping off a cliff and being injured and being treated by the second martial spirit is equivalent to resurrection? Is it reasonable for a level 10 martial soul without a soul ring to have this effect? I can tolerate this. Can you jump off the cliff near the Holy Soul Village and be carried to the Star Forest by the current? Is this right? Also met the amnesiac Silver Dragon King? The original setting is that she has been sleeping. She is a god-level powerhouse with amnesia? Okay, even if I lose my memory, where is Di Tian who is always protecting me? Di Tian found out that the Silver Dragon King was missing, wouldn't he go look for it? Moreover, the Silver Dragon King did not run far and was still in the Star Forest. I could bear it. It can be said that the Silver Dragon King pretended to have amnesia and approached the protagonist for a purpose. The first soul ring is ten thousand years old? Do you really not read the original work? The setting is that the first soul ring lasts for a hundred years. Even if you talk about a god-level martial soul, a dual martial soul, and a second martial soul of the life type, which means eating various treasures and exercising, it will be the first thousand years at most. Is this reasonable for your start of ten thousand years? The second part: Huo Yuhao's first soul, millions of years ago, is because the soul power has been absorbed by the ferocious beast. Only most of the mental power is combined with Huo Yuhao's spiritual martial spirit, and it is sealed This novel reads completely like a brain. It is like not reading the original work. It is better to write about the protection of golden fingers or being saved by the Silver Dragon King. This is more reasonable