Journey to the West Tiger Demon, Mortals Urge Me to Ascend the Throne Quickly

The author's description of the protagonist is too outrageous, and where is your character column? I can't find a place to put the fanart pictures

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1. There is a story about that. It was interesting at the beginning, but it became less and less interesting at the end. It is not as interesting as writing about farming directly. I feel that there is a problem with the underlying logic in the front 2. There are also people who think that Huzi is for the common people in the world and is a monster. I think it's about keeping humans in captivity. This part is not handled very well. It feels like nothing at the front, but the disadvantages become more and more obvious as you go to the back. It is better to blur the treatment in the early stage, and then make a small climax with the Langlang Mountain pig monster, such as redemption. Like the little pig demon asking the protagonist if monsters can also live in the human world? Or the whole profile looks like the protagonist stretching out his hand to Xiaozhu Qiu in the light, which feels better 3. Or the reason is that he wants to take the monsters out. At least it doesn't feel too inconsistent. And I feel that the pace is too fast, but the plot is not compact. There should be a lot of things to write between the village and the country, and there can be another climax in it. For example, the supporting characters are moved or shocked by the protagonist. I think it should be very interesting 4. How to put it, for me personally, the first part is indeed very interesting, but later it is indeed boring. It feels a bit tasteless and a pity to abandon.

Three Great Immortals (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

In the original book, the three immortals can pray for rain, so how could they be wild monsters? In the setting of Journey to the West, the Dragon King will be beheaded if it rains too much.

Brother, the creativity of your writing is very good, but your introduction said that this is Journey to the West. Is the Qi Lianqi Building Fund Pill out of play? Wouldn't it be better if you wrote Qi Lianjing?

Lord Tiger enters the village

The Tiger King's New Clothes

Isn't it about apprenticeship? In the original work, it is about a Taoist enlightenment student. Tiger Li's Five Thunder Technique, Sheep Li's Cold Dragon Technique, and Lu Li's Zang Moving Method were all learned. Now they are cubs and then transformed themselves. Doubt: According to the villagers, the age is not that long, but it is several decades. In the original work, it should be regarded as a great demon that has been cultivated for hundreds of years. If it is written this way, it is still hundreds of years before the plot of Journey to the West, so it is still unclear whether Chechi Kingdom still exists, and there is no way to round it up later😅

It's very interesting. It starts from the perspective of the early stage of the three demons fighting in Che Chi Kingdom, and it's a story that can be played easily.

Chapter 165 ends with spreading flowers, no need to order later, I tested the poison for everyone 😅

After becoming a true spirit, this book became unreadable, and I felt a bit cheated. The first is the problem of transfiguration. Even if it's transfiguration, it's still nondescript. The second is the butt problem. In my expectation, the fun part of this kind of book should be to gather the wishes of all living beings to become the general trend and in turn force the superior heaven. However, the setting of a real spirit turned this book into a flattery for the superior. Everything is just a game for the superior. I felt very uncomfortable reading it. The third is the problem of character design. The protagonist's steady progress at the beginning became a joke after he became a real spirit. Because he will succeed easily, there is no suspense whether it is construction or fighting with others. He himself has become an empty shell, and the subsequent plot is meaningless. The fourth is the problem of reducing intelligence. Although there is a part of reducing intelligence in the beginning, you can still watch it with a relaxed attitude, because Dihua is based on the fear of the object being Dihua. Later, when it becomes a real spirit, this problem is completely exposed, highlighting that the supporting role is extremely intellectually depressing, and the protagonist becomes a pretender, which is completely contrary to Dihua. It can only be said that it is a pity. Obviously it is okay to write slowly, but I have to step on the accelerator and write every second.

Let me talk about the controversial aspects of Journey to the West First of all, I think that gods and monsters are not invincible, so there is no need to explain their combat power. Even Mr. Li, the founder of the world, will be pushed by a monkey if he is not careful. Even the Tathagata Buddha, the ruler of the world, will be stung by a scorpion and suffer unbearable pain. But monkeys are afraid of smoke, scorpions are afraid of big roosters, and the green ox holding the vajra is like cheating. The descriptions of gods and monsters all show that gods and monsters all have human nature. They are not sophisticated machines and can slip away. Their combat power is important, but they are mutually reinforcing, and magic weapons and supernatural powers are more important. Secondly, there is no need to worry about who is more powerful, the Supreme Laojun or the Tathagata. The Laojun rules by doing nothing but is also under the jurisdiction of the Jade Emperor. The Tathagata even claims to be a vassal to the Jade Emperor despite the fact that he is the only one. Heavenly Court and Lingshan are not a dispute between two religions. This is the novel's reflection of the society at that time. Sanqing and Lingshan are the two religions. Heavenly Court represents the court, not Taoism, and the Jade Emperor is the emperor. No matter how powerful Lingshan is, it must submit to the heaven. In other words, no matter how popular the sect is, it must obey the imperial court. Otherwise, it can be destroyed several times by referring to history. Finally, many people think that gods and Buddhas are so great. But those are the gods and Buddhas we know, not the gods and Buddhas in the Journey to the West novels. Journey to the West reflects the society at that time, where people's lives are not important. The Jade Emperor (Emperor) will let a county have no rain for three years just to save face. The pets of gods and bodhisattvas eat people, and finally they can pat their butts and leave. In Journey to the West, the gods and Buddhas are just pseudonyms, but they are actually the powerful class.

To achieve equality, even if the Jade Emperor and Taoist Buddha killed ordinary people, they would have to pay for it with their lives! !

? I originally thought that the protagonist was a normal person, until the recent plot, I found that the protagonist didn't know that he was in Journey to the West? Oh, I got it, the protagonist is a shark arm

Golden Winged Dapeng's mindless gambling began, and he lost the desire to continue subscribing. . .

In the early stage, I turned into a funny flow, but after I became a true spirit, I wanted to do things seriously, and I wanted to be serious about making calculations, and I also set those at the top to sit back and watch the situation. This was a conflict in itself, and the logic could not be self-consistent. Once I had integrated into the top circle, I just pranked it to the end. It is a prank on the world that is difficult to reconcile with the Eighty-One, and let the big guys see that another way can also promote the integration of the Tao (detachment). The subsequent chapters of True Spirit are really based on early expectations, and the more you read, the more disappointed you become. If I were the protagonist and knew the attitude of the big guys, and asked them to give up this yuan directly, it would bring the style of Westward Journey to the funny style of Shi Leng, and let the big guys know that there would be no progress if they kept repeating one yuan after another.

Suddenly, he was on the same level as Tathagata, Laojun, and the Jade Emperor, and all desire to watch was gone. . .

How should I put it, everyone, the poison in this novel lies in the fact that the relationship between humans, demons, gods and demons has not been properly handled. If you bring in the identity of the protagonist demon, you will find that the protagonist is a demon. As for assuming the identity of a human being, why not set the protagonist as an adult from the beginning? This was not handled well from the beginning, which made this book more difficult I read a novel before, called Tathagata Must Die, and the protagonist is Sun Wukong. This book handles this point better. It is not a preference for which race, but that he has great love in his heart, and he has his own way of dealing with it.

Suddenly he became the top existence and was recognized. You are still a young author, and your trump card is revealed too quickly. It will be more exciting in the future, the twists and turns are difficult to write... It's not that billionaires can't write in rural areas, it's just that it's hard to empathize

Have you ever been able to defeat these three B's? 😠

Brothers, don't read this. Damn it, it's all written in nonsense. It's so shabby.

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You can stop watching Mystery of Journey to the West after this, it's extremely brainless.

Everything else is fine, but there is something wrong with the black powder in the light bulb. One is the fairy world, and the other is my own race. If the black powder comes out, I will hit my own race.

Don't watch it after "Zhen Ling", the plot behind it is full of crap.

Chapter 164 has come to an end.

If you learn without thinking, you will get online loans; if you think without learning, you will get naked loans.

The power system successfully persuaded them to retreat, and the gods, humans, and ghosts of heaven and earth changed their realms, and even had several times and dozens of times the combat power like the Saiyans.

In the dark room, the oil lamp on the table was lit. The dim yellow light illuminated the faces of eight strong men. "Brothers, now that I have obtained the 100,000-ton birthday plan, I want to do great things, are you willing to follow me?" The wealthy officer looked around at everyone. "Brother Heavenly King, please tell me, we are brothers in life and death, and we should keep watch." The white scholar said. "I want revolution!" The wealthy member said loudly. "Ge... What?" The man with red beard and red hair was very surprised by the unfamiliar vocabulary. "Revolution!" The wealthy member repeated helplessly. "Whose life is harvested? Does my brother have a new goal?" Taoist Nagasu touched his ancient pine pattern sword. "I'm talking about an uprising!" The wealthy member raised his voice. "Qi Jia? Are you the Qi Jia, a loan shark in Yuncheng County?" Three strong men with broad ribs and broad muscles, their eyes brightened. It is terrible to be uneducated. The rich and powerful officials no longer follow them in circles. They slammed the table and shouted: "I want to rebel!" "Rebellion... Brother Tianwang, we have just received a huge sum of money and have not yet enjoyed it. This is not something we want to talk about." The thin man with a deer-headed and rat-like eyes said anxiously. Others also tried to persuade him, and only then did the rich man give up his unrealistic thoughts. Afterwards, everyone divided the treasures and left one by one laughing. The rich man looked at his share of treasure on the table and couldn't help feeling angry. Am I short of this little money? I have thousands of acres of fertile land, dozens of dealers, and countless slaves as a powerful landowner, but I can't live a good life. I join you in committing crimes. As a result, you all turned from paupers to rich men one by one, but I am in trouble? Why? At least join me in rebellion and help me become an emperor! Do you have to wait until you are forced to go to Liangshan? Chao Gai, who had just traveled through time, was full of complaints. "Damn it, no one in the world is loyal!" Lying down and quitting, Chao Gai hit his head on the corner of the table and died. System, help me change the start!