Life After Having a Cave

It is extremely childish to distribute money to brothers and sisters and leave it to parents to keep. He is really just a mama's boy. Today's authors work from their imagination. In reality, brothers and sisters get into quarrels over tens of millions, and there are some who never want to be together until old age. You always make 60 million, but in reality you are just a Hamadian. Really, the author is not scolding you.

I read it before and saw that the protagonist had almost 80 million and was preparing to start a business. He went home to give 60 million to his family. I immediately pulled it when I saw this. This is about a saint. If you make hundreds of millions if you do this, no one will criticize you. If you do this to start-up capital, it won't be unfair if you do it.

It's very watery, the content is too empty, you can't see any real content even if you skip through it, and it doesn't retain readers at all.

The writing is good and not cliché, but the plot is too slow. Dozens of chapters have not been finished yet 😅. Up to now, it is more than 100,000 words, but the actual plot has not started at all. One resigned and the other gambled... This is really too slow. How many words have you prepared for this book? According to this model, I feel like I haven't written anything more than 10 million words 😅

The male protagonist has such a high starting point, why doesn't he write a heroic novel? There is no sense of immersion at all. I guess the author comes from a well-off family who is not diligent in all aspects of life and does not distinguish between grains and grains. You are such a typical ungrounded person! Well

It's so long-winded that I wish I could divide breathing into several steps.

Give money to brothers and sisters for business? ? ? ? What do you think? Still can't control your own money?

All I can say is that even without a golden finger, a pig's trotters can live a happier life than most people.

This hasn't been right recently. I feel like the content is off-kilter. It doesn't have the flavor of a cave or an urban fantasy novel. It's more like Jade Merchant, but the content of Jade is single. The side plot should be more exciting, instead of collecting jade and selling it for upgrade materials. Well, the reading pleasure and stickiness are not that good. I hope the author will pay attention to it

The chapter about sharing the money was really drunk.

Has anyone watched it? There is no content to speak of.

Is the author new? It was written in a long-winded way. The word number of "water" is very strong, very new style 😅😅

The plot of transferring money is not too toxic. The family atmosphere is so good, the relationship is so good, and it is very warm. Besides, it's borrowing and keeping it, not not returning it, leaving yourself a way out, which is good. It's a different matter if the family is full of white-eyed wolves.

Don't listen to their nonsense. I've read Chapter 11. It's very detailed and bland, but it's interesting. Don't be too fast-paced.

Now that the family is separated, but the brothers and sisters continue to be given money, tens of millions of dollars many times, which makes these two supporting characters unpopular, the key is to set up a company inexplicably, don't talk nonsense about tax avoidance, I have read so many novels, all the authors are this way, but they all invariably give the shares to pendants. In the end, it is better to go it alone and get 1% of the income.

If you don't write some emotional scenes in urban writing, you won't get results. If you cut stones every day, you can get results!

The author insists on fighting with readers, then collection and subscription will tell you who is right and who is wrong!

Either write it in Mandarin or Cantonese, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable to listen to the novel. ! ! !

I just read the beginning and I feel good about it (this comment is purely a personal opinion and has nothing to do with the $1.5 In my pocket. It was not given by the author)

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After reading Chapter 20, I felt uncomfortable and indescribable.

The book is a good book, but there is too much content for chatting.

I have nearly 100 million in capital and still work part-time. I can't imagine why.

If you have a few goals, you can't make enough money! It's a lot of trouble, but it's useless, and I'm tired and busy everywhere.

Seeing that the author keeps replying to comments, I just want to say, write your own. The author and the reader are inherently two-way choices. Although it is very poisonous, I like poison.