Becoming the Richest Man in the World Begins with Cultivating Immortality

I haven't finished reading it yet, here are my current feelings. The writing is good at the beginning, but not so good at the end. The world view is too big, and the writing power is obviously not enough. The country management seems to be mentally retarded, and the three empires are written in one stroke (how can there be no spies between countries)? You have opened up the practice to all people, but other countries are so stupid? It was said at first that there was no cp, but there were too many chapters about the male villain, which gave the impression that he was the male protagonist, but the author didn't want the two to be together. There are too many emotional entanglements written about. I thought it was an infrastructure novel at first, but later I found out that the main plot is about the love and hatred after the breakup of lovers in the previous life. There is actually a lot that can be written about the process of developing a sect. There are many places that can be discussed in detail, but I have already covered them. The heroine's character is not fleshed out enough, and her behavior is often inconsistent (is this what God is like?). The beginning is really attractive, I hope the author can write better. Come on!

1. It's pretty good to watch in the front, but it's really torture to watch the entanglement between the heroine and the villain in the back. She wants to kill but can't, and can kill but doesn't want to. Chapter 382 is extremely poisonous, and she goes to the villain's bed for the sake of the common people 2. The villain is always stronger than the heroine, and the heroine has become a god. The villain is either a god or stronger than the heroine.

It's a story about a high-end and low-end situation. The heroine was a god in her previous life, but she pretended to be bad after time travel. As a result, any monk from the cult could crush her, and she needed an apprentice to save her.

I don't understand. Why is the heroine acting like a part-timer when she's already a star?

I don't understand. What qualifications do those star thieves have to correct their evil ways? And let them cultivate immortality? Star thieves commit all kinds of crimes including rape, robbery, and robbery, right? The heroine doesn't care about this? Well!

It's so strange. The label says no CP. Why does the comment section say there is CP? I looked at the catalog again. At the end of the catalog, it's about a sweetheart and a wedding. It's even weirder.

I just read Chapter 255. How should I put it? It's a bit hard to express. It seemed quite enjoyable at first, but things started to go wrong after the previous lives of the heroine and male villain were mentioned. The male villain becomes a demon for some unknown reason and kills people without caring about human life. If the female protagonist doesn't kill the man, she can't treat him as a mortal and she has to change his fate. In the end, it was said that the two of them perished together, but it would be too much to run into the interstellar world without dying, right? The heroine also practiced as a divination master, but in order to save the people of a planet, half of the people in the two empires died, and countless galaxies were lost. When the heroine goes to find the male villain, what is she thinking about is that she won't kill him and he won't kill her? As for Yang Mi's advertising slogan, are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay?

I spent more than 20 yuan to read more than 220 chapters and give a brief evaluation. Disadvantages: You can see the ending at a glance, and the plot is small; secondly, as the only god in the world of immortality, his actions in the interstellar world appear to be small in scope and do not fit the background. Then Song Nancheng has a weak structure and courage and cannot achieve big things, so normally he cannot take up this position. Why do I understand "small structure" better? Because I am such a person

I just read the introduction. Why is spiritual grass considered a poisonous weed?

It's kind of pretty, I'll take a look again

Speechless, what kind of common people are not common people? If a person wants to kill the person he loves and loves him, say it is for the sake of the common people. Sorry, I won't kill! ! Whoever asks me to do this kind of thing deserves death.

There is cp, there is cp, there is cp! Not without cp

It's pretty nice in front, but it won't work as soon as CP comes out, there are too many broken things

I haven't read it for a long time, and I can't find the novel at once. The picture has been changed again, but the previous picture still looks good.

Hello everyone! I am the author of "You Shouldn't Be the Last Straw that Breaks Her". Please take care of me if you are a newbie. This is my personal experience, any advice is welcome. Please ask, who knows how to make the work known to more people?

2023, 1.3, 19:38