The Red Mansion Turns Cloudy and Rainy

The writing is good and thoughtful, unlike other books where the main character is suppressed. Others who wrote about Mrs. Jia Muwang's oppression were as if they had a grudge, and were even worse than passers-by. Is this a relative? Jia Mu and Mrs. Wang are written like fools. Some people read books without thinking. Just like the TV series "Golden Years" can it be compared to "The Furious" and "The Ordinary World"? If the Jia men are not good, then they have failed. Just like some people who boast about Han Zhang and Tang Chaos.

The pace is too slow. It only took a few days to write 75 chapters. There is almost no career line, and there are a lot of trivial things. To put it bluntly, without fame, it is just a fake and a tiger. In addition, the protagonist, as a concubine, is also very good at dancing.

Funny author, a servant went directly to heaven. In ancient times, Shuzi was basically a servant in front of his legitimate son.

It was so boring that I didn't even see how the protagonist studied. The more serious thing was to study quickly to test for fame. No fame, no status

As for the situation in the Jia family in the Red Mansion, either the protagonist cheats and goes out to fight alone or gets rid of Jia Mu and the others (some colleagues go to the ancestral hall to complain, some kill secretly, and some cheat and control). We have to wait until Jia Baoyu comes forward, otherwise who of his peers can take the lead? With Mrs. Wang and their methods, they only need to spread rumors about the protagonist's unfilial piety and other things outside to criticize the protagonist's officialdom.

At the beginning, the Grand View Garden will be built, then Concubine Yuan will pay a visit to the bride, and then the house will be ransacked. The protagonist just started studying now and taking the imperial examination is of no use. The Jia family will be over before you pass the exam.

Jia Huan is a commoner and does not believe in evil. I thought of many ways to deal with him, so I went to pick up Buddha beans and Buddha rice. Mrs. Wang has a way to deal with him.

Jia Huan? Too young, not enough time

It is comparable to the anti-Japanese drama, and can be called "The Red House without Brains"

After reading a few chapters, I can't stand the sloppiness. Also, do some research before writing the book. In ancient times, a concubine was no different from a servant in front of his legitimate son.

The other concubine Jia Huan was suppressed by the etiquette, law and filial piety at the beginning. It took one or two hundred chapters to get a little better. In this book, he started to confront Jia's mother in more than ten chapters. Let's read the following article.

The progress is too slow. If you can't change your identity quickly, everything will be in vain.

The writing of "The Red Mansion" through the Jia family is so bad! And the operability is too narrow, a big failure

Jia Dairu had no children, but he had an only grandson, Jia Rui. Jia Rui's play on Sister Feng and the poisonous lovesickness charade that follows are both important scenes in Dream of Red Mansions. The author asked someone else to take over Jia Dairu, where did you ask Jia Rui to go? You've lost your grandson, have you considered Jia Dairu?

Can Jia Huan be the protagonist? Jia's family was confiscated. Baoyu was only 17. Jia Baoyu was three years older than Jia Huan, right. How could he save Jia's family before he was 14? Those who write about Red Mansions wish that the protagonists were getting younger and younger, so it would be best if they were kept in their mother's womb.

Come on, if you don't believe in evil, fuck the old lady

Author, your child's head is filled with water. There is a distinction between direct descendants and concubines. This has been the case for thousands of years. The inheritance is orderly. At what age can you transcend the hierarchy of elders and juniors? This has been the case since modern times to Yuan Shikai.

The author has written too much personal stuff. Just to make a note, I have to mention the modern form and comment on it. It would be better to write less, but if I write too much, I will get tired of reading it and it is not interesting.

Written with care, it ranks among the top 3% of Red Mansion writers. It would be better to add a system to the protagonist. It would be too difficult to write without a system, so we can only rely on the halo of wisdom. I have read dozens of chapters, and the protagonist is indeed not as charming as Jia Baoyu. Jia Baoyu is lively, smart and gay. This kind of person is the most popular among girls, especially introverted girls. The protagonist's words to Lin Daiyu were very polite, far less genuine than Jia Baoyu's. But the aura of the protagonist was too powerful, and Lin Daiyu began to hate Jia Baoyu for getting close to the protagonist.

I can barely see from the front, but I can only enjoy myself from the back.

What to do when Tanchun... It's too close to pig's feet?

The story of how an adult time-traveling man pretends to be a child and acts cute, and then pleases an eleven or twelve-year-old girl.

The number of words in Shui is too great. One chapter is all narration and a lot of nonsense. There are not many dialogues. The author treats us as fools and teaches us how to use chopsticks when eating.

The number of words in Shui is too great. One chapter is all narration and a lot of nonsense. There are not many dialogues. The author treats us as fools and teaches us how to use chopsticks when eating.

Come on, your monthly vote has been cast

It's well written. Treat Dabao's face severely. Books are better

The writing is very detailed and logical, and the interaction between human nature and psychology is well grasped. Excellent work, just like it!